Post "DRAGONBALL Z GOLDEN AGE - Chapter 4 - The Galaxy Soldiers[Fan Manga][Comic]" by "TheWriteFiction" from patreon

Aqua-Sun

You know I didn’t notice at first but I love that chichi takes notice that something didn’t seem right about the fight with Zangya. Hope we see you do something with her later on in terms of combat.

Danny Michael

But my only question is are going to give chiaotzu any substantial development?considering how broken esters are in anime nowadays and how powerful telepathy is in comic books chiaotzu could finally have his moment in the sun!

Danny Michael

Mainly cause I would love to see olibu in action!

Danny Michael

This story is amazing!The way you wrote how bojack and his soldiers were sealed was inspired!I would give anything to see that story in its entirety!

dantheman

so pg 72 18 was definitely blushing when Gohan helped her. Poor krillin

Currently in process. Keep an eye open for more.

GamerLegend09

Chapter 5 - Teamwork 😎👍🏻

GamerLegend09

😊 they started the next Chapter bud

Nathan Gallegos

Give us the rest of the story I hate cliffhangers 😠

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

Well, considering how he got shafted in the official movie version of this arc, let's hope he will be. And, let's also hope that Krillin won't be put out of commission for the rest of the arc.

GamerLegend09

😂 yeah Just dramatically posing all calm and Composed rrrrrRRRIGHT next to each other

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😠 under his Wretched Blue Thumb

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*Pg. 75* Now That’s a good angle on Miss Rodriguez on the top left panel🤤🤤🤤🤤 But real talk here Gohan and Piccolo are probably going I HAVE SOOO MANY QUESTIOOOONS!!!! In their heads from seeing Raditz’s but either way the All Warriors have assembled including Nappa’s Wife!? Who knew Galactic patrol had a steak in this outcome or that they even had files on Bojack from that far back. But one thing is for sure I’m incredibly hyped to see Tien and Yamcha on the scene, Can they hold their own against the furious five heran Warriors And will Yamcha have some new Tricks up his sleeve? We’ll find out in the next Thrilling chapter of Dragonball Z GA

demidevimon

Piccolo and Radditz …

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 74* Aw man I still don’t know if Kogu and Bujin have turned fully evil or still have some good in them. Ever since the start of this chapter it’s like they’ve been painted under a different portrait. I hope they haven’t been brainwashed too far by Bojack’s insanity

Dean Zamp

*Pg. 75* It's very impressive that Zangya's base is as strong as Full-Power SSJ Goku in his fight against Cell. By that metric her Royal Hera form must be relatively close to SSJ2 but may have a locked ceiling currently due to her mental oppression by virtue of Bojack. All barriers I'm enthusiastic to discover

Probably not colouring. One coloured page takes an entire hour or more. Not gonna do it for over a hundred pages.

benjamin chappell

This is fire cannot wait for chapter 5 and possible coloring of this one

Zyxsion

I see a Yamcha in the back and ask myself "Will he be useful at all?"

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*Pg. 58 Pt. 2* Also while the idea of the Kais showing their skills sounds appealing to me I don’t think would have a good fit for this kind of plot setup (😕 might just be me thinking it)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 58* I like that you left out King Kai’s planet being used for plot, while the plot of the movie felt underdeveloped and at the same time rushed 😓 that part of the story never made sense to me even then

Colby

Ahhh gotcha. I love it nonetheless. This is the first time I've seen your fanfic. Not the novelized version just comic.

Colby

Page 60 I think? Those lines sound a lot like the ones from Halo about the banished leader.

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*Pg. 57 Pt. 2* Whoa Waitaminute here Zangya’s got that protective look in her eye

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*Pg. 57* Calling him out?…he’s going after Gohan and Trunks first?

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*Pg. 56 Pt. 2* 😠 You Sonuva- you better not harm one hair on his hea-…😒…. 😡 you kill that partially comedic relief Buddhist and you’ll be begging for the swift mercy of Death!!!

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*Pg. 56* You did good Kriller-man just rest now…..😨 you!

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*Pg. 55* *😓 never-mind that last post* Welp looks like Krillin’s about to get a psychic/magic Ass whooping

Man, it's funny how every single alien race across the galaxy evolved to have the exact same concepts of things like food, clothing, and children's toys. This man created a perfect illusion of an oversized children's playroom despite having never been on Earth before. Wild. XD

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 54 Pt. 2* 🤔 but this fight went too smoothly, I thought tha- *see’s bottom left panel* 😳 uh-oh

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*Pg. 54* 😮 wow…I didn’t know the Kienzan can be used like that

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*Pg. 53 Pt. 2* Ok then, nice that someone knows their team’s strengths…I gather Bojack could care less and would just throw em like lambs to the wolves and hunt for more soldiers afterwards, he’s certainly no tactician of the group but a Barbaric War Tyrant But Krillin…wow…..always full of surprises

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*Pg. 53* 😳 holy crap what!?

Not necessarily training. It's just that Bujin's magic and telekinesis perfectly counters Krillin's moveset.

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*Pg. 52* 🤦‍♂️ Krillin you need more training

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*Pg. 51* 😯 Oh wow, Bujin must be the Tactician of the group

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*Pg. 50 Pt. 2* And KRILLIN!! Listen buddy I don’t wanna tell you how to be the world’s strongest human but, your not supposed to start all out, your supposed to start smallll and then work up to it….wait…this is krillin were talking about…….😫 SOMEONE PLEASE HELP THE HELPLESS LITTLE SMALLFRY!!!

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*Pg. 50* Buuujin! Don’t you go speaking in riddles here, your a nicer Hera this time around! We all know he’s not gonna kill you but still! (Unless Bojack has some way of monitoring you right now then have at it just please do your best not to kill him)

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*Pg. 49* 😳 WHOA!!!! 🕰 HOUR AND MINUTE HAND ON YOUR 6 KRILLIN!!!

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*Pg. 46 Pt. 2* I, HAVE to do this…… Look at my Trucker Hat 🧢

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🤔 no seriously is he?… I’ve never seen him before and General Copper’s only MENTIONED in the story (Manga) and he seems like a behind the scenes kinda guy

She didn't because her master didn't want her too. She just wanted Reina to watch the competition with her, because like Roshi she thought it was all a joke. A tournament not to be taken seriously.

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*Pg. 48 Pt. 2* 😗 I don’t think we need to worry about Krillin here, and I don’t think Bujin’d be too threatening this time around, I mean we saw a humane side of them so I’m sure he’ll just put up a good fight (😅 I hope) 😠andyoutwobettahstayawayfrommyGILF

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*Pg. 48* 😤 nice to see you enjoying yourself NYARLATHOTEP (he needs a nickname I swear) and the Hun-…ter…………them too!? 😫 AAAAAHHHH I JUST DID IT AGAIN , I KEEP GLOSSING OVER IMPORTANT MOMENTS. 18’s AND GOHAN’S FIGHT, THOSE KEY MOMENTS FANNED THE EMBERS OF THE VILLAINS OF GOLDEN AGE 😆 OMGGGGG!!!

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*Pg. 47* 🤯 OOOOHHHH HER FIRST TIME SEEING GOHAN HOLY SHIT!!! Waitaminute…did Gohan indirectly create Reina’s Evil Glare?

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*Pg. 46* 😳 oooohhh myyyy god- Major Metallitron! Androids 15!! 14!!! 13!!!! *Gasp* WHEELO!!!!! FROM WORLD’S STRONGEST!!!!! AND-……….. 😕 I might be reaching here but….General Copper?!???

Julian Fratzscher

Any reason, aside from story-telling, why Reina didn't participate?

Travis054

Ohhhh shit 21 makes a big reveal! Things are about to get crazy! Or sweet depending on what mood she’s in.

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*Pg. 45* 😆 HAH!!! 😏 Pirate boy, I see it

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*Pg. 44* NICE Dodge 18!!! She’s been keeping her training, But Damn that’s some kick-ass Heran Power right there

Yeah. The blade also doesn't slice like a normal blade. It looks more like a blade meant for stabbing.

More like the user is able to do it. The blade is just normal. Kogu's magic and ki is channeled through the blade to perform these feats.

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*Pg.43* 😳 don’t think the French coulda done that though. 😈You added some Quirks to the blade didn’t you?

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*Pg. 42* Riposte….that’s a Fencing term…Riiight his Devilish Blade’s similar to a rapier, and were used for fencing in the 18th Century by the French…..😏 Cleeeever

Hehe. The original movie had two hot guys beating each other up (Kogu and Trunks). But now it's a beautiful man fighting a beautiful woman.

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*Pg. 41* 😳…ok then, apparently he’s just just as strong as an android……😤 I still stand by what I said though

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*Pg. 40* That’s it 18 you tell em, kick his alien ass, but….. maybe, try not to kill this one

Colby

I honestly wouldn't be surprised if there was a spin off of these two hooking up 😂 18 and Koga?

Apparently. Nappa did the food and drinks sponsoring. X.S the arenas.

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*Pg. 39 Pt. 2* Wait hold on a second…the semi-finals Arena Environments were created by X.S. Cash (or was he sponsoring along with Nappa Via He-Tap) 😶 did he really bring in Live animals to a Flipping Tournament!?

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*Pg. 39* 🥲 I miss 16 Too He would’ve loved this Arena- *Destruction of part of said Arena* 😠 you SunuvaBitch Matchup 3 Begins

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*Pg.38* Ooohhhhh I love this angle 👍🏻 🤬BEAT HIS ASS TRUNKS!! MAKE YOUR MAMA PROUD!!!!

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*Pg.37* 😤 Seriously I hope he wipes that look clean off his Face

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*Pg.36* 😠 ooooo that damn Sneer of his

Nadez.

Hey, Write, I have a question. Are you planning on returning to write your Fanfiction projects in the future?

I think they are a race built for surviving the harshest environments. Zangya as well was hanging out in the volcano.

GamerLegend09

*35 Pt. 2* And I’ve always questioned this when I first saw this scene …..why did he hide himself like that?, is he incompatible with magic or something? I figured he could magic himself invisible or something

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*Pg. 35* 😨 YIPE!!, Next Matchup Begins😰…and against my 2nd to top 2 hated Herans

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*Pg. 34* 😎 awww yeah thing’s are about to get a lot more exciting for this (😝 Strange) Tournament And I’d say it’s about time for the Z-fighters to 💥📢ASSEMBLLLLLLLLLEEE!!!

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*Pg. 33* You’ve made these two perfect for each other. Both of their thoughts in complete sync like they’re spiritually connected the moment they met….😊 I can’t wait to see more!

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*Pg. 32* 😌 What I tell ya, 😉 well at least they’re having fun

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*Pg. 31* Ohhohooohh careful there Z don’t go poking the Dragon now 😂

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*Pg. 30* Still sizing each other up huh 😏

Travis054

Damn man fight scenes are just freaking awesome

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*Pg. 29* 😆 SO COOOOL!!!! Just look at them fists and feet fly, like a punch punch punch punch then kick! Or like a punch punch punch kick! Or even like a punch punch punch punch punch KIIIIICK!!. 🙂 aside from that though…😚 they really do look like they’re having so much fun

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*Pg. 28* Look at the young Sayain having so much fun with our Heran Waifu 🥰

She's flexing on Gohan to test his physical capabilities. Being a Perfect Cell or Cell Jr level enemy, her power is quite high at this stage. Don't forget, she was even making sport of Super Saiyan Trunks in their brief fight and didn't get hit once throughout the whole movie until her death.

Omni

Lol not to worry, he won't. He'll just be a bit of fun

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*Pg. 27* 😤Tone down the Ego, 😬 do NOT!! get Cocky!

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*Pg. 26* 😳 SHEEEEESH THATS A LITTLE BIT MUCH

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*Pg. 25* Great job at keeping level headed Gohan, and reading the situation. Now either Zangya Read Gohan’s Face or she’s using magic to read his thoughts, cause her laughing the MOMENT he thought “Wow…she’s really pretty” seems fishy to me

GamerLegend09

😙 though that just goes without saying

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*Pg. 24 Pt. 3* I can just imagine this moment Colored out already

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*Pg. 24 Pt. 2* 😊 she looks so beautiful

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*Pg. 24* 😆 THEIR FIRST MEETING IN GOLDEN AAAAAAAAGE

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*Pg. 23* 😃eeeeeeeeEEEEEEE~

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*Pg. 22* 😊 I think I have a good feeling who’s gonna be fighting who

This would be the moment where, either at the beginning or end of an episode, the intro/end sequence or title card would drop. Zangya's here, roll credits people.

Travis054

It looks like the day of fate has finally come.

It's happened ladies and gentlemen! Gohan has just met Golden Age's best waifu!

I have to wonder who’s idea it was to include an actual volcano with actual lava. Imagine if the Z-Fighters hadn’t participated and it had been normal martial artists in those pods. If someone had been unable to leap out of their pod and got melted by lava, would the companies in charge of this tournament have been held liable for the death? Or does everyone sign a waiver at the start saying “We are in no way to be held responsible if you suffer death due to environmental effects”?

Travis054

Man this is a great story! I will say the I’m wondering what the red ribbon army. Androids are doing in this tournament? OK I’ll find out soon hopefully.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21 Pt. 2* By the way the great job drawing the landscaping for the Arena’s too, it must’ve been a bigger endeavor compared to Trunks Hair in Super Sayain and ULTRA Super Sayain form amiright Write 😉

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*Pg. 21* 😢 that narration was beautiful, a fantastically written intro to a well deserved 2nd chance for hopefully a lucky few…and…… a brighter future to a Golden Age

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*Pg. 20* 😃 HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE!!!!! so I’m a little curious now *middle right* are these guys still Actors/Fighters? Or are they actually aliens in Golden Age? not the Hera Soldiers the people they “replace” for the tournament

De'Andrae White

Damn, that's awesome.

De'Andrae White

How strong are Raditz and Nappa compared to the the Z-Fighters of right now?

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*Pg. 19* Getting Closer to that faithful meeting!!!😆. (Middle top right) I’m so proud to see Chi Chi turning over a new leaf and being a little more supportive of Gohan‘s Combating/defending earth. (Middle top left) 😅well it’s a lot better than her hitting on you again trunks (😏 at least not from this timeline). (Middle bottom right) 😉 aaah no worries Krillin you’ll at least keep putting up a good fight (😅 maybe) (Middle bottom left) 😕 huh…well I guess for 18 there’s no changing her hating humans RIGHT-away good luck with that Krillin 👍🏻

Efiong Uwah

Pg. 17 On one hand, I'm glad is not catcalling On the other, it is just as bad

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*Pg. 18* 🥰 awww they’re so cute I can’t wait to hear how Nappa met his little Honey-Bee, also what he’s been up to in Golden-Age

Julian Fratzscher

Anti-Ki weapon, but even these must have a limit to them, aside from the fact their user. Who would require speed and perception, the second one can get from either training their Ki-sense or by using a scouter. Which in return would mean that Nappas wife must be on above human level as well.

Omni

Oh damn! Nappa got a babe 🔥🔥

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*Pg. 15* 😁 HAH!!! Answering 2 questions with a single page. 😉 You are too good at this Write

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*Pg. 14* 😆AAAAHHHH!!! You copied meee!!! I’m so happyyy 😁. Wait hold on a second, Is that Plasma Pistol Galactic Police Issued?

Zyxsion

Would the gun even do anything to Veggie tho?

demidevimon

Nappa is amnesic ?

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*Pg. 13* 😌 Ahh so the fated reunion begins, I wonder how thi- *see’s Vegeta Charge* 😅 Straight to the point then

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*Pg. 12 pt.2* Wait a minute here….. I glossed over something incredibly important. They met while he was Hunting down a “Wanted Criminal” 😊 ohh such Comedic Irony

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*Pg. 13* Wait…Silver?, As In Colonel Silver From the Red Ribbon Army?! And…is that Raven from Dragonball: Curse of the Blood Rubies?!

Julian Fratzscher

Taken over or Teleport switch?

Efiong Uwah

Pg. 13 What kind of matrix agents crap is going on here?!

Travis054

Bulma Reaction is perfect

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*Pg.12* 😑 yyyup…yeah that- thats, Exactly the right reactions given from one who “KNOW’S” and one who “DOESN’T KNOW” about wtf’s going on Wait Launchpad knows Raditz’s Gokus older Brother…..ok, so either he kept key-plot information away from Launch (either persona) or she chose to stay sensitive to his feelings and waited for him to open up more and he just never got around to it

Bulma and Chi-Chi's respective reactions here were everything I was expecting and hoping for.

…..come to think of it, Chi-Chi never actually met or even saw Raditz in canon, did she? Bulma did, when Raditz visited Kame House, but it was an extremely brief encounter, so it’s up in the air if she even remembers what Raditz looks like.

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*Pg. 11* ☺️ seeing these 3 catching up’s so niiii- 😳Aw-shit

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*Pg. 10* 🥰 awwww I just love ❤️ Reunions like these (😅 Iiiii just hope ChiChi doesn’t know anything about what Raditz looks like though, I mean I’m SURE she knows ABOUT him and what he DID but… idk, I’d just think it’d be kinda awkward…..😊 yet Hilarious)

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*Pg. 9* Poor Zangya, I might know how it feels to lose a family member but not as Brutally as she did, and with only a pendant to remember him by….. I seriously hope Gohan Wrecks Bojack far worse than than how Zangya did to that fighter in the background (and from what I can tell was pretty much a held back love tap)

Gregory Stewart

If i didn't hate bojack before I fucking hate him now

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😢 as painful as this is…. Write has rewritten this an incredible justice so far

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Then suddenly 1 year later we now see her standing before her little brother… forced to slaughter them in cold blood to prove their allegiance and ensure their Survival…this also needed to happen, she needed to be a heroine who needs saving and in turn also gaining the pain of loss and ensuring the pathway to becoming the 3rd Strongest in the universe

GamerLegend09

This….. needed to happen…… Zangya was Originally a villain as cruel and merciless as Bojack. Without her having her brother there’d be no reason for her to be as caring as she’s shown in Pg. 3-5, she’s even shown an element of love and kindness about her.

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*takes a breath* Ok I’m done crying, *sniff* now I hope this doesn’t sound cliche or rude In saying this… but we all saw this coming in (Pg. 6-8) I mean…anyone who’s seen the movie Bojack Unbound Would know that the plot focuses mainly on our Protagonist Gohan and Our Antagonists Bojack & the Galaxy Warriors, Write is making this Rewrite an incredible justice

Great work!

Damn. That was tragic. We all knew that Bojack was an #&%hole, but to force Zangya to kill her own little brother... I'm looking forward to Gohan killing this S.O.B. Great work, really enjoying these stories.

Julian Fratzscher

Wow, that backstory is a punch in the gut.

Dean Zamp

What a melancholic backstory, incredible work as always.

Well shit.

Omni

Fuck that's......damn....that was cold

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8 pt.2* 😢 great work Write *sniff* really sold that Tear factor there

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*Pg. 8* ………😢 Oh Zangya

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*Pg. 7* 🥺 Aw geez

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*Pg. 6* 😦….no

Jymnastics001

Well then… that uh… that escalated quickly…… fuck…

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*Pg. 5* 🥰 Dohhhh it’s so nice not seeing them so evil from the start

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*Pg. 4* 🥰 Awwww such sibling bonding warms my heart oh hey it’s Bujin (shorty) and Kogu (Swordsman)

Qrow Nightshade

I love the relationship between zangya and her brother. Those last two scenes hurt. Poor zangya.

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*Pg. 3* IN ENTERS ZANGYAAAAAA AND HER LIL BRO 😁

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*Pg. 2* OOOHH!!! Planet Hera I’m excited 😜

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😃 OH MY GOD RIGHT!!!?

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*Description* Different huh…. Oooo Write you sly dog you 🐶

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*Pg. 1* You Go Krillin you Gotta Kiss da Girl (whoa whoa) Now is that Gohan just finishing his much bigger meal 🥘 or is he being VEERY Considerate for the other contestants (cause I’ve seen plates piled higher than what he’s eating right now 😏)