Post "DRAGONBALL Z GOLDEN AGE - Chapter 3 - A Strange Tournament [Fan Manga][Comic]" by "TheWriteFiction" from patreon

Danny Michael

I know you some of your work is gohanx18 but please give krillin in your cannon the loving passionate relationship with 18 he deserves. I beg of you good sir!

Danny Michael

Thank you for giving the humans,especially krillin more respect than the original.

RandomBrit

This is my favourite chapter of Golden Age (so far). Great character interactions, steller action and great humour. Everything that you'd want in your DBZ story and more!

Like he said. It's not ready yet.

GamerLegend09

🥲that was for Android 16, I miss that Bird loving Android

GamerLegend09

I-CANT-WAIT-FOR ZANGYA TO MEET/FIGHT GOHAN!!!!!! 😆😝😆😝😆😝😆😝😆😝

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*Pg. 100* And thus drawn a great Conclusion to Chapter 3 Krillin impressed 18, & surprised his friends, 18 prolly won her match with One Punch or Kick, Hercule stayed Trapped doomed to face his fear 😰…😏😏😏😏 and the Intergalactic Martial Arts Tournament (😅 try saying THAT 5 times fast) continues on an island……Noun

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*Pg. 99* Y’know having already seen the movie myself of Bojack Unbound I kinda saw this coming, but I’m completely satisfied in how you’ve given Krillin an extraordinary performance. So great it managed to impress Piccolo TWICE!! Thank you for this excellent Rewrite of this Match Write

Glad you enjoyed it. I can't wait for the Zangya encounter. Next to the Videl and Raditz meetings, this is easily my favourite scene composing in the fanfiction. Gohan meeting Zangya.

Aaaayyy, claps for Krillin. Glad humans get at least one rep in the finals. It can’t be said enough, but thanks for making the side characters believably competitive in this fic, it really makes a nice change of pace

Chapter 4 coming soon. :)

I think this'll be a great way to cap off the third chapter of the Golden Age story. The chapter has literally gone on a lot longer than I was fully intending, but I'm really glad I was able to expand on the preliminaries when I did. It turned out even better than I imagined and I hope you guys enjoyed this stage of my rewrite of the Bojack Unbound movie and its inclusion into the Dragonball canon. :)

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*Pg. 98* Wow he managed to impress Piccolo…that’s an impressive an impressive accomplishment for Krilin, but an unfinished technique?…..Ohhh Krillin 😕

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*Pg. 97* 😳……to quote Krillin after he tucked up and Trunks finished powering up…”BAD-ASS!”

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*Pg. 96* 😳 I don’t see a Beam Krillin! 😨WHY isn’t there a Beam Krillin!!? 😱WHERE’S THE BEAM KRILLIN!!!!?

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*Pg. 95 pt.2* Uh-oh…ummm can humans start to develop traits of Saiyan Ego and it managed to rub off from Goku or Vegeta onto Krillin?

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*Pg. 95* Holy crap this technique…definitely feels new to me here, and looks so Awesome 🤩

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*Pg. 94* Hey he used this move against Cell Junior, and Hercule was running Around like A chicken with it’s head cut off……ceeept he was carrying around 16’s head at the time 😂

Loginnathan

Jesus, my boy Krillin getting some good well earnt love and respect. Both him and tien honestly are just the best so far. Really fun at seeing DBZ's "weakest" getting a good combat boost, not just in terms of power, but of other skills that can basically cancel out or use their opponent's power against themselves. For instance, Tien while lacking in their own power, is basically a heavy turtle with amazing counter damage. And Krillin with their extremely evasive skills and minor, but fast DPS. I read too much into this lmao.

jalon Campbell

Awesome story. I love your version of how DBZ should have been it's a great read

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 93* 🤩 AWESOME!!! This reminds me of the Dragon Ball Super episode 116 the Universe Survival Saga where UI Goku Vs. Kefla and he uses his Charged up Kamehameha Energy to Slide over Kefla’s attack, Krillin’s a better Genius than ULTRA INSTINCT!!!!😆 (Nah but seriously that was Brilliant Write)

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*Pg. 92* Y’know I gotta give Krillin props for lasting this long, let alone putting up such a good fight like this

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*Pg. 91 pt.2* I hope he uses the Makansa- uhhh macaca sababa- no Mickus uh- oh to hell with it The “Special Beam Cannon”

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*Pg. 91* Oooo looks like we in for a Beam Struggle here

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*Pg. 90* Ahah! Now this Technique I remember, Dragonball Episode 147 also the one episode that houses my favorite line from Piccolo (Goku:“it’s a good thing you aim as bad as you fight you missed my vital organs”__ Piccolo: “All of them!!?”) 🤣

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*Pg. 89* Nice Blast impact, really giving piccolo a run for their money

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*Pg. 88* That…didn’t look like a Ki move, an air blast?

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*Pg. 87* Y’know I keep forgetting he can do that, also just how far do ya those can those stretch to?

Good spotting. Yes, Krillin did hold back, because he could've potentially killed Piccolo here. Then he switched to a normal ki blast.

Hahaha. In this case, it doesn't quite work out for Piccolo.

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*Pg. 86* 😆 I’m sorry but I can’t NOT say it! “GET OVER HERE!!!” 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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*Pg. 85* Now either he pulled another feint or he was holding back on that move because he realized he could’ve killed him when he switched to what appears to be a Kameha blast?

Omni

Ripping his ears off you mean ?

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*Pg. 84* Hah!! That’s a clever Combo, there’s a way around the sound aspect Piccolo has done before (albeit Non-canon) Fighting a Super Namekian (😏let’s see if you guys can figure out what I’m talking about)

Qrow Nightshade

Solar whistle. Great idea. Way to go krillin. Now if only he did this in the anime

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*Pg. 83* Huh…I’m surprised that Videl’s able to keep up on the speed that their going like that, Gohan wasn’t kidding about her potential and I hope Krillin has more tricks up his sleeve he can show us

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Pg. 82* Okkkkk looks like Piccolo’s counter strategy’s going flawless I’d expect no less from a Namekian who Meditates (😏 naps) so much

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*Pg. 81* Huh… have to say I’m impressed, I wouldn’t have have thought Ki could be used on After images to give a tactical advantage like this. It takes a LOT of effort to impress Piccolo of all Namekians 😁 ( I wonder what Kami and Nail think 😽)

You can argue the same between Tien and Trunks, but Tien still did well in the movie. Here, Krillin is using decoy tactics to draw out the battle. The after image alone is a very difficult technique to counter, but with this modification Krillin made it much more effective. He knows Piccolos strengths and weaknesses, just as the Namekian knows his.

I love the story, but I mean, Krillin should have zero chance no matter what abilities he can use. Piccolo is tens if not hundreds of times stronger than Krillin.

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*Pg. 80* 😧… he can….. revert them back to after images within an instant…. Wow he’s come a long way

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*Pg. 79* 😳 Solid Physical After-ima-…..ok I’m having a hard time figuring out how he’s able to do that

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*Pg. 78* I LOVE seeing People (or in this case a slug man) like Piccolo lose their stance in confidence from facing an Underestimated fighter like Krillin 😁

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*Pg. 77* now here’s a good opportunity for Videl here, an example for what a human can do with enough Years of training. 😏 and if the Multiform’s considered Old School 😉 then it’s an Oldie that’s still in style ( just look at a 100 other Anime that use the sameTrick or shares the same concept of it)

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*Pg. 76* 😌 ahh another warrior in the making, so warming that it a brings a tear to my eye. Pfft 18 you just said what we all think

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*Pg. 75* Alright nice to see Piccolo take Krillin Seriously this time around, Videl’s just Touching the Surface on figuring out how big the world/universe is when it comes down to Strong, Flying, Beam shooting Fighters are out there, And Gohan’s subtly explaining what Krllin’s capable of……😏 cutting HEH 😼

Oh yes. Absolutely.

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*Pg. 74 Pt. 2* 😁 I can’t wait to see how he’s improved himself in Golden Age

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*Pg. 74* ☺️ awwww look it you giving Krillin his Inner Encouragement here, 😽always looking out for the little guy huh write

Omni

Dude I cannot wait to see this completed. Going to share it with one of the DBZ YouTubers afterwards ?

You go Krillin. You may not win, but so long as you impress your dream girl, that’s all that matters.

Omni

Dude I've been waiting to see this match up for a long while. It's Rematch time

GamerLegend09

🎶 THE REAL FOOOOLK BLUES 🎶

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*Pg. 73* Awww yeayuhh Put that Maximum Effort in for your Girl Krill-Meister

It was an OG matchup in the movie. You can check it out on youtube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ODJUmMDk6To&t=219s This match is gonna get interesting.

Happy Birthday. I'll upload something nice later.

I forget if Picollo vs Krillin was a matchup from the original version of the movie, but even if it wasn’t, it’s cool to see a rematch between these guys (throwback to OG Dragon Ball). And hey, Krillin shouldn’t sell himself short! The power gap between him and Piccolo is way smaller than the one that existed between Tien and Trunks, but triclops still managed to bridge it by being creative. Krillin just needs to think outside the box…then again, his opponent is also a strategist rather than a power-fighter.

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Also you didn’t know this but thanks for updating today on my Birthday Write 11/21 😁

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*Pg. 72* Yeah exhausted, that’s what Tien is right now, Don’t you worry krillin you should be fine so long as he doesn’t clone himself & grab you in a Full-nelson, and DAMN 18 looks Thirsty

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😏 I was just thinking that too

WulfgarCyng

Damn, 18 eyeing Gohan up like he's a snack.

Tien may be stronger than Nappa now, but the guy did cause him a lot of grief back in the day.

It's the same form he used against Perfect Cell. Since it robs him of speed, he used it for a power boost instead.

Of course. :)

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*Pg. 71* Atta boy Trunks that’s how you show respect, OHH this must be Mrs Rodriguez 😁 she’s hot. 😯 oh yeah that’s right, they were too focused on fighting each other for Tien to notice Nappa…..😆 that reaction though. But why is he so scared? I mean I know he lost an arm to him (wich I understand might’ve given him some emotional trauma) but he’s stronger than him now right?

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*Pg. 70* I’m surprised they had durable enough cameras to withstand all those blasts from that close a distance, came in handy for that tie-breaker situation though, Capsule Corp Equipment?

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*Pg. 69* Oooo nice new combination attack 👍🏻

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*Pg. 68* So is this another Saiyan form or what he decided to call that form he used against cell?……….I have to get this out “Maximum Over Saiyan” 😆

I have to wonder if Nappa remembers who Tien is and is fucking around with him, or if Tien was so insignificant at the time that Naps legitimately doesn’t know he’s the same guy who’s arm he punched off.

Draconic Hermit

Tien: Oh fuck. Trunks: Wha-? Vegeta's voice: -aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAA- Trunks: Oh Nappa: *Cackles his memetic face off.*

Immortal Dragon

Aw, was hoping too see a non-saiyan win for once. But what you did with Ten was dope nonetheless.

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*Pg. 67* 🤩 THAT IS SO FRICKING COOOOL!!!

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*Pg. 66* Seeing as how Trunks’s Bulma’s kid I can see how he’d be analytical in making his next move, man though I can’t wait to see how the kikōho & Dodon-Ray technique shapes in Tien’s new Asura form ☺️ and what shape the kikoho blast will make instead of a Square (and I mean with 4 extra arms that’s gotta raise the damage ratio by like quadruple in attack performance, and make a slightly more unique blast impact)

Omni

Kill him. KILL HIM NOW !!!!!

Oh yeah. Stay tuned for more.

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*Pg. 65* 😱 DOCTOR BRIEFS IS CONSPIRING!!!!

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*Pg. 64* 😆 ohh the Nostalgic Irony

Nappa definitely. But understand, this is the first time he is finding out his old ally is alive, someone who has been with him since he was a scout in the Frieza Force. Seeing him alive and well, and apparently living successfully as a human and acting like them, without any hesitation, is a shock to the system. And Vegeta, getting a face full of Nappas payback and taunt through the TV, set off the already emotionally rattled man.

demidevimon

Honestly, who should be angry? Vegeta, who pulverized Nappa, because he considered him weak? Or Nappa, who was betrayed by Vegeta?

If you remember from the original Bojack Unbound movie, Vegeta brought Trunks's sword to the fight against Bojack and his men. In here, Vegeta is bringing it with the intention of stabbing Nappa if need be.

demidevimon

What ? The Trunks's sword ? Vegeta become Kirito ?

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*Pg. 63 Pt. 2* He gunna go “break Nappa’s legs and kick what’s left of his ass with them” 😆 Lololololol

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*Pg. 63* 😁heeheeheeheehehaheeheehee

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*Pg. 62* 😂PFFFFTHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAA 🤣HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

Draconic Hermit

Uncle Nappa is here to give you a massive laugh and/or headache.

demidevimon

HAHAHAHA ! STOP IT, PLEASE ! MY BELLY HURT ME !

Efiong Uwah

From MasakoX to TeamFourStar. I love this chapter

Qrow Nightshade

Vegeta thinking GOD DAMMIT NAPPA

IiiiiiiiiiiIIIIIIIIIIIIT’S NAPPA, BABY!!!

Omni

Fucking knew it was coming! Nappa's in the house 🔥🔥🔥

His wife's family name.

Yep.

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*Pg. 61 Pt.3* Also 😏 Rodriguez huh?

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😌👍🏻 nice

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*Pg. 61 Pt.2* Here ya have it folks DBGA is Partially inspired via TFS Sponsored by Hetap, now that the puns out of the way 😆 HOLY SHIT THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER

Draconic Hermit

Vegeta: RAAAAAAAAAA- *at the stadium* -aaaaaaaaa! Bulma: For fucks sake, who pissed him off this time. Krillin: QWACK! Gohan: Krillin, it's not us this time! Krillin: Sorry, reflex.

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*Pg. 61* 🥤😳💦, 🤯 WHAAAAT!!!?!?

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*Pg. 60* 😏 Typical Vegeta, masking how thankful he is by showing a little of his Dere Side

Your ability to understand this on such a level is impeccable.

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*Pg. 59 Pt.2* Ok plot reacting aside this moment right here hits deep for me…it reminds me of that Important conversation that a Dad or Mom has with their son or daughter, and if I figure Vegeta’s Genetic and Familial circumstance correctly I can well assume he never got that from his OWN dad, and just seeing his (practically) father In-law step in and fulfill that role that he so needed in this time it just warms me up heart and Soul. 😌 I don’t care if this is probably a mad god pulling strings, Vegeta really needed this

Thank you. :)

Qrow Nightshade

Pg. 59 that was some real shit said. This is why i love your comics.

That feeling when you know you saw something weird out of the corner of your eye, but when you look there’s nothing there.

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*Pg. 59* ………DAMN!! he’s good

Tempest2000

I find it wholesome that Dr.Briefs is giving Vegeta advice

I should point out that Vegeta doesn't know it's Nyarlathotep. The guy transformed just before Vegeta could look at him. All the prince did was sense the presence of the Mad God, which is what surprised him.

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*Pg. 58* Don’t be fooled Vegeta that’s STILL NYARLATHOTEP!!

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*Pg 57* 🤬 HOW ABOUT THAT!!!!

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*Pg. 56 pt.2* Come ON Vegeta what about your SO CALLED Saiyan Pride as a warrior I’d have thought THAT’D be reason enough for you… Well Vegeta if You need a good enough one

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*Pg. 56* Ooo I like that, Asura Taikūhōka technique kinda reminds me of Capcoms ASURA video game a little (Btw I love how you colored in the pink shirt in this page 👚)

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*Pg. 55* 🤣 yeah one can’t help but react that way

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*Pg. 54* Oooooohh that’s so awesome not only did he SERVE the blast back to him he made it bigger and stronger ( kinda like he pooled in his own Ki energy into it when he hit it those 2 times )

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*Pg. 53* Ohhoohhhh look at Tien being Sportsman like, What Twist

As awesome as this transformation for Tien is, I’d low-key really appreciate a quick standalone explanation post on what exactly his specific new form entails. He said he found a way to match up to Saiyans without just matching them in raw power, but does that just mean he can punch more often due to more arms and can see all around him at all times? I need the deets, man!

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*Pg. 52* Damn lookit dem fists fly 🍿🤭

Drock

Holy shit go Tien humans for win!!!

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Like an EYE am watching you vibe 😂

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*Pg. 51* Ooohh yeahI almost forgot the new Multiple Eyes. 😆 I didn’t know they linked completely around his head, 🤩 AWESOME!!!!

Okay that panel was cool and all but real talk, that many eyes on a human skull would be a biological nightmare.

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*Pg. 50* 🥺 ohhhh myyyyyy God that’s so fucking Beautiful, you applied the perfect plot Relevance and made an Awesome upgrade to his four Witches technique, and also ASURA the God of War…there couldn’t be a more fitting Title for this new Form technique. 🥰

What is this?! Actually love and care given to the human fighters?!

Trust me, it's a nightmare.

I think it was easier to say Four Witches Technique compared to Four Supernatural Fists in dub.

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*Pg. 49* 😌 Aaahh the Shiyōken technique a great Callback to the Dragonball series, 🧐 I wonder why they called it the Four Witches technique though? (I don’t feel anything witchlike going on about that move tbh)

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*Pg. 48* Ahaaah there’s that Trunks super Saiyan form we all know and love and now the REAL fight can begin, his hair in that form must’ve been tricky to Draw

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*Pg. 47* That Ki flowing through Tien in the bottom left panel looks awesome 😊

True. There are only a handful that are named. Trunks doesn't name his, though honestly I think it does add to his cool factor. Efficiency over flamboyance

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*Pg. 46* 🤔 y’know it’s always been annoying that Toriyama doesn’t give certain Characters (like Trunks) names for their attacks, (😒 they always had to wing it in the Budokai Games)

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*Pg. 45* 🍿🤭 now the real fights can start

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Don’t worry buddy Write’ll update Past Crush in due time, we just need to be Patient for them, 😊 it’s what makes the Updates even sweeter

Paul

We going to see anything further with the young Chi Chi, these stories are great but not really why I'm here.

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*Pg. 44* I like seeing Tien and Trunks in action, I felt they had a lot of potential in this movie that was waisted

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*Pg. 43* 😂 hey ya kept him landed! And with nothing less than a pinky too…😏 aw yeah ya feel that Hercule? That’s the weight of your lies building up on your back

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*Pg. 42* Well at least you made him a LITTLE Friendly this time around

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*Pg. 41* 😊 I’m really thankful you added 18 to this Tournament, she makes for a better Tier pick in the Tournament Brackets.…¿is it just me or does that Udo guy look Bigger when he’s Drawn apart from being animated in the movie?……🤗 meh, onto the better subject of Gohan’s NEW Fangirl 🥰 I wonder if Erasa’ll be in the stands too lul😏

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*Pg.40* Ok now this’s Throwing me off here, I’m still convinced his first time was lime but seeing 18 Blush AND talk about about a life debt Owed towards our little Saiyan Hero is making way my guessing options (please tell or hint us when you’ll tell us soon… 😓 it’s driving me nuts)

Raditz x Launch has been a pretty common, if underground, ship in the Dragon Ball fan community for a while now, but it became more mainstream in the wake of MasakoX's 'What-If Raditz Turned Good' series on YouTube. I have to assume that's where TWF got his inspiration for it from, because the character Ranch was originally conceived there as well. And this looks to be the same exact Ranch, from name and appearance down to personality.

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*Pg 39* *top right panel* 😈 I love watching this phony Squirm from the weight of his lies *top left Panel* 😅 easy Trunks Heel boy Now this is the first I’ve ever heard of Launch and Raditz Pairing, but I have to admit ☺️ it works I mean 😆 CMOOOOON JUST LOOK AT THAT PRECIOUS LITTLE SAIYAN GIRL RANCH WITH HER MOMMY LAUNCH!!! (I feel kinda bad for Tien but then again that’s his loss for missing his window of opportunity there)

I have to assume that the decision to include Raditz in this telling of events is a rather recent one, because I don’t recall ever seeing mention of him being a thing in Golden Age. But based on the number on his shoulder and the presence of the naval scar, it’s pretty clear what his story is this time around. Curious how he met up with Launch though.

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*Pg 38* 😊 Solid Reference from Krillin, and an awesome addition to 18’s much deserved early appearance (😏 why so Nervous SATAN?)

No worries. Always like to hear your feedback. Let's me know that the updating option works and that you are enjoying the story.

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*Pg 37* Heyyyy just like I commented on Page 4, and a Gentle landing for one of his future wives well done Gohan Well done Write. 😬 I hope I’m not just adding extra work for you here from the Original Story

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*Pg 36* 😌 it took a while but at least she figured it out

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*Pg. 35* 😉 but maybe save that Serious Spar for another time (😗oooo that Gentle Ki energy flowing around Gohan and onto Videl looks cool…🤓 it’s kinda like he’s indirectly waking her own Ki Within her)

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*Pg. 34* 😳 oooohhhhh shit, well she did say to take it…😐 Seriously (in a way)

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*Pg. 33* 🥰 awwww look at this little charmer work his Magic

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*Pg. 32* Knew it, I called it on her reaction

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* Pg. 31* All this Knowledge is awesome, gives me a real sense of realism to this series….that look in Videl’s Eye (bottom left Panel) leaves me a little concerned though

Shiiiiiiit, I wasn’t expecting to actually LEARN things when reading this fan manga. How dare you sneak education into my brainless DBZ fight scenes!

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*Pg. 30* Y’know I’m not gonna lie, this fight sequence’s looking kinda hot in the top panels

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*Pg. 29* Y’know sooner or later Videl’s gonna notice that Gohan’s holding back on her…😒 I wouldn’t wanna be him when that happens, aside from that though I’m confident she’s more than capable of handling Roshi’s Level of Strength

It would definitely be a small fraction. Right now he has reduced his power level to Master Roshis level.

Matthew Souther

Just out of curiosity, if you had to put a number on it, how much of his power would you say Gohan is using in this fight with Videl? It can’t be much more than like…one or two percent, right? XD

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*Pg. 27,28,* 27. 🍿🥤🤭 wow she’s really good 🤭 28. Awesome stepping things up a bit let’s see how this goes 🍿🤭 🥤🤫

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*Pg. 26* 😳 oooo 🥤🍿🤭

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*Pg. 25* I wonder e what she originally used money for (like after she was saved by Gohan and turned good girl) anyhow let’s see how well Gohan and Videl do here, we’ll …I know how it obviously would play out but I mean can she take it? and can the SuperSaiyan hold back enough to gauge her strength?

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*Pg. 23,24,* 23. 😄 aaahh hello new development 😺 ah *see’s top left panel and bottom 3* 24. 🤩 YYYEEEEEESSSSS!!! That’s how you make an entrance, 😆 same iconic attitude too

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🪦…….💥🧟 aaand I’m back *Pg.22* Ahh Yamcha, I can’t blame him for not taking part (😙 I wonder how he’ll turn out in Golden Age) and I’m sorry but seeing the bottom right panel all I think of is “😏 duuuuude, Trunks’s getting some Bulma boob“

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21. Pt2. So…..just popped over to the wiki about Ranch…..won’t spoil who the mother is but 😐 I’m just gonna stay knocked out for a little 🪦

Oh hello MasakoX What-If Fandom, what are you doing in this story? Seriously though, surprising appearance by Raditz and Ranch. Not sure if this is just a cameo or if they're going to have an actual serious role to play in this story.

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*Pg.21* 😮‍💨 ok then, I forgot about Raditz and him being turned into an Android and I didn’t even KNOW Ranch Existed in the DBfandom 😅 but I’m sure the Mother can’t be just as if not more surprising right?……right?

Of course. Just so you know, it is Raditz Oolong is looking at. The original Raditz.

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20. Pt2. number 22……😰 he’s an android isn’t he

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*Pg. 18-20* 18. No changes here so far 19. None to keep note here either *sees bottom left Panel* huh? 20. RAAADITZ!!? w-w-what the fahrvergnügen is going on here!!!?!? Is that a red Ribbon Vest!? And WHY!!? Is he Carrying a little Girl with a-……………😱 SHE HAS A TAAAAAAAIL!!!!?!?!?!?!!

Lol. Yeah. You got it. I got the idea for Megara from both the Olympian stories and the movie Hercules.

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*Pg. 17* 😊 very nice keeping the reference from the movie little less Hercule [Satan] (😌 just the way I like it…unless Slapstick’s involved then reign him in)…………Hercule….and Meg…Wait like Hercules and Megara from Mythic Olympian Stories!!?

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*Pg.16* 😆 AHHAH Attagirl, and it looks like she’s winning Gohan’s heart just as much as he’s winning hers. 🥰 this’s the best

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*Pg. 15* 😎 yeah Videl you show em your no Pushover yourself

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*Pg. 14* 😏 heh, yeah that’s pretty much the outcome of a Super Saiyan halfbreed against an Ant 🐜, But can we all just acknowledge the classic and adorable reaction to Videls first Time Witnessing Gohan’s Strength here? It’s the moments like those that make me feel like I’m reading what SHOULD’VE been

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The bottom right panel of page 13 makes me think he’s gonna aim for his foot

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*Pg. 13* 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Their FIRST team up in Golden Age…😍😍😍😍😍 SOOOO HAPPY

Omni

R. I. P. To these contestants. They have no idea what they're up against 🤣

I love it when characters in any form of fiction are so many leagues ahead of the rank and file soldiers/fighters that they can casually have an entire internal conversation and analysis in the time is takes for a normal person to throw a punch at them… and then dodge that punch.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11 & 12* 11. Dawwww look at that Gohan working his pure Kindness like that, and hey he thought the same thing I did! 😁 when in doubt Magic Dragon Wish it out. 12.woops forgot the situation they were in, that Videl though she ain’t fooling no one here she’d need little help to hold her own

Her name is Miguel (though if pronounced in Japanese, it would be Migeru), so I decided to try and translate it to Megara. I think I'll keep it Miguel.

Hey! I caught that reference on Page 12! You sly dog. Haven’t thought about Kingdom Hearts in a hot minute lol

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* Awww Videllll…. Don’t you worry sweetie there’s nothing a Senzu bean can’t fix, and if that doesn’t work we have a **SUPER KAMI DENDEEEEEEE** To help……….. aaaaaaaaaand a magical Wish Granting Dragon 🐉 if all else fails (😅 ooooo shenron’s gonna love this) That being said at least in Golden Age we get an explanation on how his fame and glory got to his head, 😁 the Stronger Wife wasn’t there to keep him in line

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* Alriiiiiight a background story of How Hercule met Videl’s momma……..Speaking of which what is her name? I was looking for her in 2 posts and 1 says it’s Megara, and another says Miguel. 😳 is this a typo error?

Draconic Hermit

Hercule following Cowboy Bebop's Love interest archetype, "[He] Loves a woman that can kick [his] Ass." Otherwise known as an Amazon Chaser. I can totally see him as this.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7,8* 7. Admitting it’s the first step ChiChi, 😌 I’m so proud of you and Bulma 🥲 stepping forward and reassuring her decision in Supporting Gohan you’ve proven to us once again why your one o the Best Girls in the Dragon Ball Universe (Because I Genuinely believe this is how it all would’ve been played out if Toriyama had some sense of Plot taste) 8. 😁 niiice niiiiiiice similar scenes from the movie Heartfelt Quotes from the movie LOVING IT 😊. OH and Bulma still being on Vegeta’s case for being Emo 😂

GamerLegend09

😏 ah thank you

Omni

-Sees part where Chi-Chi said she's pregnant and grins- A big brother....of course 😏😎🔥

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😂 sheesh Chi-Chi bragg to SNN why dontcha (like CNN but S for Satan City) and you have her pregnant by this part of the Chapter, 😑 why do I have an Itching bad Feeling about this?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4,5,* 4. Yes Videl, on TV…..against Cell…..you thought he had cool hair (DBZA) ((🥰 so adorable)) 5. Ok this is a great and imaginative perspective, I always imagined what it would’ve been like had they met sooner at this age ( 😆 GOHAN BEING SUCH A CHARMERRRR!!!!! )

Dean Zamp

Too Adorable! 😍

It will continue. I can promise u that. Writers block is a pain though.

Ryan Graham

I like the way this story is shaping up, and not to be THAT GUY, but is Brotherly Love going to be continued?

GamerLegend09

😂 reminds me of a big one my family used to own in the 90s

Immortal Dragon

I'm just impressed by how well drawn the TV is.

GamerLegend09

*Pg 1-3* 1. aaaaww look at bubbles and Gregory Playing Cards, ☺️ my 2 favorite comedy reliefs. 2. Niiiice niiiice platforms drawn Exactly like the movie well-fully drawn Write 3.😊ahhh the First encounter of Gohan and Videl in Golden Age (😆EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!) , Tomboyish as you described and I can agree with her POV though.