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Best Of Dreams II

🕑 Added 2022-06-27 13:19:44 +0000 UTC

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Sure, my bad. Is there anything you don't understand about this chapter? I will explain it here.

Rimuru

Author I've noticed that as the story progress you make the story unnecessary mysterious by omitting important stuff. In your previous novel of hxh that was acceptable cause the world wasn't much complicated but here in DC with the world as massive and complex as this it makes the story tiring and unnecessary convoluted that makes it much harder to read and understand than it needs to be. Can you please tone it down a little? Thanks


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