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Perhaps Too Complicated?

🕑 Added 2021-07-25 11:11:09 +0000 UTC

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Well, I certainly didn't expect this so thank you, your encouragement actually helps a lot so again, thank you. Also, don't worry about the hints, they're of course important, and everything will definitely be explained in due time. They're an important part of the plot so... And I will definitely let you guys know when I launch my next novel though that won't be until I finish this one.

Rimuru

I can't seem to find a way to reply to your comment below it so I'll reply separately. Anyway Firstly the story you've done an amazing job. It is the first HxH story that I've seen that after they go to the dark continent they have so many ideas and so much content. Also the way that you're describing everything and the way you include concepts that are not often used but have so much potential I find it simply perfect. One thing that sometimes slightly annoys me is the way you sometimes describe things that I get lost but personally I find the challenge satisfying except a few times that I have to ask as I did now because I want to be sure that I've understood it correctly so in the future I don't get more confused. Another thing that I have a question about is sometimes you hint things like for example the thing(creature maybe) in the core of the world that we've understood through the many hints and the things between the lines but I am hoping when the times you'll explain thoroughly and recount all the things that you've hinted about so we understand what is happening at that point in time. I can't seem to think anything else to say right now but one thing I have to say and I really mean it is you have done the best hxh fanfiction that I've seen and possibly exist. As I understand it English is not your first language but despite that you have an incredibly tiny number of grammatical or spelling mistakes if any. Your writing style doesn't have any problem that tires the reader. Concluding I want thank for all the content you've given us so far and please keep up the good work. If in the future(after this book finishes) you write anything else I and possibly everyone else would love to read it so if that happens please be sure to let us know. *PS. Sorry for the long texts😅 it's a habit to get everything I want to say in one go together but I know it can be tiring to read it.

Splendid and perfect! Also, what do you think about the story so far, specifically the latest parts because as you know, this is an unknown territory which hasn't been explored in the manga so I'm basically creating most of the ideas and the world myself. Is it okay?

Rimuru

So let me get this straight. When he encountered the statues (timeline 0) he used the vision eye to see the future(1) and in that future(1) he also used vision eye to see the futures(2) that stem from that future(1) but at some point those futures(2) he did something that initiated an attack from a statue in a future(2) and when that attack killed his future(3) incarnation the attack sensed it didn't destroy the original so it started following him across the multitude of futures(2) his vision eye was seeing and kept destroying the active incarnation each time but yasuo kept using the vision eye so he kept generating more and more and they were keep getting destroyed as he was followed through timelines. The attack though was numerous tiny bullets that once they reached their target they get erased so for each bullet that hit one yasuo in one time line gets killed. But even though the bullets are many they are not infinite. So at some point they got reduced to one remaining and that one followed yasuo (because he wanted to?) to the original timeline(0) and shot him. But when his body sensed the danger at the start of the bullets barrage it started evolving the original yasuo(0) so that when that bullet the last remaining one reaches him he won't die. Yasuo wanted the last bullet to reach him but not die so he can sense the impact through his nen and copy the ability in the future. Are the above thinking correct or have I gotten lost somewhere? *The numbers in the parenthesis are used so you know for which timeline and future/s I am referring.


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