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♦ The Kostrov Traces Excerpt - Grief ♦
🕑 Added 2024-11-26 18:56:40 +0000 UTCEDIT: Fixed up some grammar errors and oversights haha, istg I could check these a million times and still end up missing things xD
I genuinely couldn't decide which bit of the books I should give out first since there's just SO MUCH happening, so I'm offering a bit of Rick and FJ, a bit of grief, a bit of sadness, a bit of everything haha
For the first time ever, this is a full excerpt, A LONG ONE, With CONTEXT gasps
Some background: this is somewhere at the beginning of Rick's and FJ's friendship, way back before they were partners, or rather the first year of them even knowing each other. Rick has already gone through his seventy wife-related traumas and FJ had already begun to adjust to his new life without the memories of his past, which isn't exactly going as well as he might have hoped because ma boy is fallin' in love and deep down doesn't want to leave Grimport anymore :,D They're both too awkward to realize it yet tho so don't tell 'em yet
DISCLAIMER : This is edit II of the first trilogy. It hasn't gone through professional editing yet and, as much as I think my English is okay, I'm still a tiny Balkan Slav, so I'm hoping this doesn't have any blatant grammar errors my non-native speaker brain didn't pick up by now haha. If there are any, they will definitely get weeded out through professional editing <3
Comments
Fosc X
That means the absolute wORLD bro 🥹❤️❤️ genuinely I can't thank you enough for this, its gonna singlehandedly keep me going during hard days for sure 🥹🙏
Plumeria Blossom
I can’t believe you’re completely self taught, like that is INSANE and also SO inspiring! 😭 On those days you feel your writing isn’t what it should be, just know I’m gonna keep on reminding you how valuable your work is 😤💖 I already know you’re capable of so much greatness as an author ❤️
Fosc X
Maan you're gonna make me sob fr fr, this is so beyond kind of you to sayy 😭❤️ I'm so endlessly thankful you think so, oh my gooodnesss 💗💗 i'm seriously gonna print this comment and glue it somewhere for the days when I feel like I shouldn't be allowed to hold a keyboard fr fr, it means so much you don't even know ❤️❤️ And noo I actually didn't have any classes at all haha! I've just been writing since I was super suuper young, ever since I could write basically 🥹❤️ it's why I'm kinda self-conscious about my writing. I've studied visual arts for years and I've got several degrees in that so it's a bit easier to believe I'm kinda okay when it comes to that, but writing has always been purely a hobby that I also never really showed much around, so I keep feeling it's not good enough at all 😭❤️🩹 so thank you sm, this absolutely gave me so much courage to share more of these snippets before the books release ❤️
Plumeria Blossom
YOOOO we finally get to read a snippet of the story, and a generously sized chunk at that!! 💗🥹💗 To say I loved the way it read would be a huge understatement, gosh you truly are such an amazing, insanely talented writer!!! 😭💞 The dialogue feels like an actual conversation between two real individuals, and how you describe the scenes is soo clear!! I was able to create a full picture of their surroundings in my head with the details given, but at the same time the description wasn’t overkill. The whole excerpt feels very nicely balanced✨ I gotta know, have you ever taken any courses for writing or anything like that? Cause if you did, I need to know how I can learn to write with this amount of skill 😩 And if you did this all on your own and taught yourself to write, heck- I don’t think there’s anything you can’t conquer in life if you put your mind to it ❤️🔥
Fosc X
Oh man he doooess ❤️🩹😭❤️🩹 this is one of the first time he had really talked to anyone about it in years too so it's been a tough episode 🥲 and totally yeah! FJ was also just getting to know him properly, he truly didn't know 💔 OMG AND THANK YOU SMM AHH i'm so glad!! There are still some typos and stylistic choices I have to fix up, but I'm so glad the dialogue was left that impression! 🥰🥰🥰
Jewls Reign
Omg😭😭😭 Rick needs a hug!! It's understandable FJ would be curious though considering his amnesia. Thank you for sharing this excerpt!! You write dialogue so well!! It feels so natural when reading!
Fosc X
HAHAHAHHAHA Rick this entire excerpt LMAO, and you just know he went home that day planning the proposal because somehow FJ didn't book it right out of there 😭🫸💔 they are meant to be
Rosalie Louis
What if...I had a mental breakdown in the bathroom and you held me and we were both boys?? 👀 Haha jk, unless...? 🥺
