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The Dark Apprentice Chapter 61
🕑 Added 2025-11-25 06:00:00 +0000 UTCChapter 61
When Harry arrived back at Hogwarts, the flashing of cameras was immediate, their bright bursts momentarily blinding him. He felt a surge of exhilaration as he hoisted the Triwizard Cup high above his head with both hands, its polished surface glinting under the magical lights. The roar of the crowd was a deafening symphony of adulation, a tide of cheers that vibrated through his very bones and drowned out all other sounds. Confetti, shimmering gold and vibrant emerald, rained down from the enchanted ceiling, a celebratory cascade that settled on his hair and robes. The familiar colors of House Slytherin, a deep, rich green, seemed to envelop him, a sea of robes and banners that affirmed his triumph and solidified his victory.
Cornelius Fudge was the first to greet him, shaking his hand enthusiastically, and Harry couldn’t help the smile that plastered across his face. He had survived the confrontation at the graveyard, eliminated his enemies, and done everything Tom had expected of him.
The next person who skipped shaking his hands, and instead threw her arms around him screaming in excitement, was Tracey. The girl placed several fast kisses on his cheek as Harry embraced the girl tightly, and she laughed hysterically as they separated and shook her head, yelling in his ear, “You look like you lost a fight with a hippogriff!”
You have no idea. Harry thought internally. He undoubtedly looked a mess though. Blood was covering the front of his shirt, and he likely looked like a mass murdering lunatic if he wasn’t being enveloped by the confetti.
As if she could read his mind Tracey slowly pulled her wand from her side, keeping eye contact with him the entire time as if she were communicating her intentions to him, and he allowed her to do a couple of waves over his face to clean him up, but that was all she able to get done, before another pair of arms was thrown around him, and Daphne was in his embrace screaming, “Well done, Harry!”
Harry’s mind reeled, a whirlwind of emotions and fractured images. The roar of the crowd, the blinding flashes of celebratory spells, the crushing weight of victory—it was all a blur. He vaguely registered Blaise’s fierce hug, a moment of genuine camaraderie that momentarily cut through the chaos. Then, Dumbledore’s face, etched with a concern that seemed out of place amidst the triumph, his hand clasping Harry’s with a firm, almost warning, grip. But it was the sight of Barty Crouch Jr., still cloaked in Moody’s grim disguise, that snapped Harry back to a chilling reality.
Leaning against the stands, amidst the dwindling pockets of jubilant students and faculty, Barty was an ominous silhouette. A slow, predatory smirk stretched across his lips, a grotesque parody of victory that sent a shiver down Harry’s spine. The joyous smile that had momentarily graced Harry’s own face crumbled, replaced by a cold, hard anger that coiled in his gut. His fingers twitched, itching for his wand, a primal urge to unleash the fury building within him and strike down the man who had nearly cost him everything.
But Barty’s smirk, so arrogant and knowing, was a chilling message. It spoke of unfinished business, of a game still being played, of a dark promise whispered on the wind. Harry knew, with a certainty that was both terrifying and infuriating, that this was far from over. Barty was fully aware of the consequences of his actions, of the inevitable confrontation that loomed. He was relishing the anticipation, the slow burn of revenge, the twisted satisfaction of knowing he had not yet been defeated. The victory, so recently tasted, now felt hollow, tainted by the lingering shadow of Barty Crouch Jr.’s malevolent presence.
The awards ceremony passed in a blur for Harry, a vision of forced smiles and loud congratulations he could barely register. His mind, still reeling from the trials of the maze and what had followed in the graveyard, struggling to anchor himself to the present moment. He vaguely recalled Cornelius Fudge, pressing a heavy pouch into his hand – a thousand galleons, a fortune that felt utterly meaningless in the wake of recent events. The clamor of the crowd, a cacophony of cheers and whispers, washed over him, indistinguishable from the ringing in his ears.
Through the soft, urgent whispers of Tracey, who had managed to find her way to his side amidst the throng, Harry gleaned fragmented news. Krum and Delacour, she'd murmured, were both in the hospital wing, receiving treatment. A knot of unease tightened in his stomach. The fear among the spectators, Tracey confided, was palpable; they’d presumed Harry had also succumbed to some unseen danger within the labyrinthine depths of the maze, his unexpected emergence undoubtedly a shock to them all. He could feel their gazes, a mix of relief and lingering apprehension, fixed upon him, each glance a stark reminder that they all knew what he was capable of now.
As the final cheers and thunderous applause began to subside, a new wave of excitement rippled through the gathered students. Calls for a celebratory party in the Slytherin Common Room grew louder, echoing with a jubilant fervor that was utterly infectious. Harry, swept along by the tide of exhilaration, found himself effortlessly guided with the procession of students back towards the castle. They were not alone in their joyous return; a significant portion of the Hogwarts faculty, their faces alight with pride and camaraderie, joined the parade. And, of course, the students from the other houses—Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, and Ravenclaw—mingled freely, creating a vibrant, undulating sea of robes and excited chatter that flowed through the hallowed halls.
They had no inkling of the storm brewing on the horizon, the tempest that would soon engulf their carefully constructed world. Ignorance was a fragile shield, and behind it, a force of unimaginable power was gathering. They had no idea that Tom, once a shadow of his former self, had transcended his limitations this very night, reclaiming the full, formidable might that had once made him a legend, a whispered terror in the dark corners of history. His mentor, a figure of enigmatic power and chilling ambition, was preparing to unleash a devastating cascade of events that would bring the entire country, from its bustling alleys to its quietest hamlets, to its very knees. It was not a question of if, but merely a matter of time before the architect of their impending doom set his grand, terrible plan into motion, and the unsuspecting populace would be caught in the inescapable grip of their own oblivion. The only thing left was to tie up loose ends.
When the party finally arrived in the Slytherin Common Room, the usually subdued and sophisticated atmosphere seemed to simply erupt with a cacophony of sound and movement. Students from every year, from nervous first-years to world-weary seventh-years, were packed into the grand space, their faces alight with excitement. A tidal wave of applause crashed over Harry as he stepped through the entrance, quickly followed by a chorus of shouts and cheers. Many were requesting a speech, their voices hoarse from excitement, while others were already declaring his new, unofficial title: Champion Snake. The idea seemed to spread like wildfire, a proud moniker for their newfound hero.
Despite the overwhelming adulation, Harry, ever the reluctant hero, waved them all off with a humble gesture. He didn't want the spotlight; he just wanted to share in their collective triumph. He implored them, with a smile that barely reached his eyes, to simply celebrate together, to revel in the moment as a united house. The energy in the room was palpable, a thrilling mixture of relief, pride, and unbridled joy. The green and silver banners seemed to shimmer in the candlelight, reflecting the elation that filled every corner of the room. It was a night for Slytherin to truly shine, and Harry was undoubtedly their brightest star.
Of course his heart was only half in it. He accepted a single shot glass from Blaise, and shared a toast with most of the Slytherin students above the age of fifteen. A few exceptions were made of course due to Harry only being fourteen, but the teen merely did it to take the edge off. His body still ached from the curse Voldemort had struck him with, and his bones were sore from being held by the grim reaper in the graveyard, but still he felt ready. All night he had been forced to play defense, or act as a reactionary force, but now he has had time to mentally prepare, to fortify his skills.
Putting some distance between himself and the others, he stated he needed to wash up so he could celebrate comfortably, and returned to the empty boys fourth year dormitory. Even the likes of Draco and his gooneys would be celebrating the party downstairs, but he knew the Malfoy heir’s celebrations would be short-lived with Lucius' death tonight.
A quick shower and a change of clothes led Harry to his bedside, where he grabbed the Marauders Map, and his fathers cloak of invisibility. Tools he thought he might need for the coming confrontation. Taking a breath and steeling himself over for what was to come, Harry returned to the party.
The air thrummed with the pulsing beat of the music, a dizzying cacophony that filled every corner of the common room. Tracey, a vision in emerald green, clung to Harry’s arm, her face alight with an almost giddy satisfaction at his recent triumph. Her eyes, usually so keen and intelligent, were soft with an admiration that bordered on infatuation, and he could feel the subtle shift in her grip, a possessiveness he usually found charming. On any other evening, he would have indulged her, perhaps even sought to deepen the budding connection between them. But tonight was different, a night weighed down by the lingering echoes of magic and the heavy burden of his thoughts.
He politely, yet firmly, declined a steady stream of invitations. Older students, their faces flushed with celebration and firewhisky, pressed in, offering to share drinks, to raise toasts in his honor. Each refusal was met with a flicker of disappointment, quickly masked by understanding. He offered the simple excuse that he was still recovering from the intense magical exertion of the day, a truth that held just enough weight to be believable, and just enough ambiguity to deflect further questions.
When Tracey whispered into his ear that they should find some place private for him to rest, he immediately seized the opportunity to get away from the others. He knew Tracey might be hurt by his explanation when they were alone, but she was the only one he trusted. The only one he could tell that the job was not done tonight.
The wolf whistles and cheers that erupted as Harry and Tracey exited the common room were a cacophony of sound, but they seemed to fade into a dull hum as Harry’s gaze met Daphne’s. Her eyes, usually so composed, held a glint of suspicion that pierced through the celebratory atmosphere. Harry wasn't one to court such public attention, especially not on a night like this. His usual inclination would be to orchestrate a discreet departure, a quiet rendezvous later, far from the prying eyes of the entire house. His practiced smile, a mask he wore so often, faltered under the intensity of her stare. He felt a subtle shift in his demeanor, a ripple in his carefully constructed composure, and he knew, with a sinking feeling, that she had caught it.
There was no way to explain, no whispered confession that wouldn't betray the gravity of the situation to others. The very act of explanation would cast a shadow of unease over the festivities, a tell-tale sign that something was deeply amiss. So, with a silent agreement that passed between them in a fleeting glance, Harry and Tracey continued their exit. They ascended the winding stairs, their footsteps echoing softly in the area that would lead back to the boys dormitory.
When they arrived, Tracey dragged him over to his bed and before he could tell her his true motive she placed her arms slowly around his neck, and drew him into a kiss. Instead of fighting the kiss, he embraced it, leaning into her soft lips, and allowing himself to be lost in it for a moment.
Tracey ended the kiss, pressing her forehead to his own, whispering, “If that’s what it feels like kissing the youngest Tri-Wizard champion in history, then I think I like it.”
Harry wanted to find the amusement in her words, but the gravity of what was coming still rested on his shoulders. He knew that there was still a job to be done, so before she could lean back in, he said her name softly, “Tracey.” The girl lifted her eyes to his own, and could clearly see the look of urgency on his face, as she asked, “What is it?”
Looking around, Harry flicked his wand into his hand, and whispered a few spells that would alert him to any unwanted arrivals, and spoke softly to her, “A lot more is going on than you realize. The maze, the 3rd task, it wasn’t what the world thought it was.”
Tracey’s eyebrows knitted in confusion, “What does that mean?”
Taking a shaky breath, Harry ran a hand through his perpetually messy hair. The weight of his secret pressed down on him, a heavy, cold stone in his gut. He knew he couldn't reveal everything – not yet, maybe not ever – but he also knew he couldn't let her remain completely in the dark. Not when her life, and his, were so intertwined with the truth.
"I can’t tell you everything," he began, his voice a low rumble, the words tasting like ash in his mouth. He watched her face, seeing the mixture of confusion, and a hint of hurt.. "But what I can say is that I know who put Igor Karkaroff under the Imperius Curse."
He paused, letting that sink in. The implication hung heavy in the air, a silent accusation. The Imperius Curse was no light matter, a dark art that stripped away free will. To use it, to control another human being… it spoke of a profound skill in the Dark Arts.
"I also know that he did it to try and remove me from the equation," Harry continued, his gaze hardening. A familiar surge of anger, cold and sharp, ignited within him. He was tired of being a target, tired of being a pawn in someone else's twisted game. "And maybe he even wanted to hurt me by getting to you." He looked at Tracey’s brown eyes with a silent apology in his eyes for dragging her into this dangerous situation.
Tracey’s eyes blazed with fury, and her eyes turned inky colored, and she whispered dangerously, “Who did it?”
Glancing towards the door to his dormitory again in paranoia, Harry mumbled, “It was Professor Moody…he isn’t what he seems to be.”
“What does that mean, Harry? Why all the secrets now?” Tracey growled out.
“These secrets are dangerous.” Harry hissed back, “I’m trying to protect you.”
“You didn’t give me this magic to protect me.” Tracey thundered back her voice rising, and Harry indicated for her to lower it, and she immediately did, but she had an angry hurt look on her face, “You did it so you could have a capable witch at your side. Someone closer to your age who would understand. Well, I do, and if that bastard is responsible for trying to get us killed, then I want in.”
Harry felt his proximity ward get crossed, and his eyes went to the door, and in came Blaise, “You two put your clothes back on.” Entering the room to find the unamused expressions of his best friends, he pouted, “Or not…Harry, Professor Moody is here to see you. He said the Headmaster wants to talk.”
Looking back at Tracey the girl immediately protested, “You shouldn’t face him alone.”
Harry just stared at her for a long moment, and Blaise asked dumbly, “I missed something didn’t I?”
Thinking fast, Harry pulled out his cloak, and the Marauders Map, shoving it into Tracey’s hands, “Daphne can teach you to work the map. Take the cloak, and follow. Do nothing unless it looks like things aren’t going well.”
“Harry we can-”
“Promise me.” Harry demanded, stepping into her personal space.
The girl swallowed hard, and nodded her head up and down. Harry placed a kiss on her head, and then moved towards Blaise, stopping before he could pass him. Looking at the teen Harry said, “What Tracey is going to tell you is going to sound crazy, but it's true. Trust me this once, and I swear I will never forget it.”
Blaise’s cheerful demeanor fell, replaced by a resolute nod. The weight of the moment settled heavily between them. Without another wasted second, Harry descended from the quiet intimacy of their shared space, back into the vibrant, yet now subtly muted, Common Room. The party, though still alive with the murmur of conversation and the clinking of glasses, was undeniably subdued. A palpable unease had seeped into the festive atmosphere, a direct consequence of the former Master Auror's presence. His history, etched in the memories of many Slytherin families, had cast a long, unsettling shadow over the celebration. The echoes of past injustices, the pain inflicted upon their loved ones by the very man now standing among them, had dampened the joyful spirit, leaving behind a lingering tension that no amount of revelry could entirely dispel.
He just smiled at her alarmed expression, and moved past her, greeting the Death Eater in disguise, “Professor, what can I do for you?”
“The headmaster wants to see ya.” The grizzled man commanded.
“I didn’t realize you were Dumbledore’s errand boy Moody.” Harry goaded with a smirk.
The group of students nearby gasped, and stared at Harry with wide eyes. For Harry’s part he merely folded his arms, his wand poking out of the end of his right sleeve, ready to spring into action if necessary.
Barty’s good eye twitched, and responded through gritted teeth, “I will overlook your cheek, due to the circumstances of tonight. Now let’s go.”
“Come now, Professor.” Harry offered in a scolding tone, “This is a party, surely the Headmaster can wait till tomorrow.”
Clearly the man was unamused by Harry’s deflections, and marched to where the two were practically nose to nose, “I wasn’t asking, boy.”
A part of Harry wanted to draw his wand and fight him then and there. His eyes glanced to his left and right. The sight of the few younger students still out of bed halted him. They wouldn’t stand a chance in a firefight with someone of Barty’s caliber. Many would be killed in the crossfires in the close quarters of the Common Room.
Plastering a fake smile across his face, “I’m not sure who pissed in your morning pumpkin juice, Professor, but if the Headmaster needs me so urgently, then I suggest we don’t delay any of our evenings, any longer.”
The imposter Alastor Moody let out a low, guttural growl, a sound of barely contained irritation, and pivoted, turning his back sharply to Harry. His artificial eye whirled in its socket, scanning the dimly lit Common Room as he began his deliberate march toward the exit. He had expected to depart without further hindrance, but then, of all people, Adrian Pucey stepped forward, a wary expression on his face. Pucey, Harry's former rival, approached cautiously, his voice a low, questioning murmur that carried clearly in the hushed space. “Potter?” he began, his gaze flicking between Harry and the departing Moody. “Should we tell Snape about this? It just… doesn’t seem right that the Headmaster would send anyone other than our own head of house to summon you at this hour, does it?” Pucey's brow was furrowed with genuine concern, a rare sight that made Harry appreciate the housemates outside of his usual group for the first.
“It’s alright, Pucey.” Harry said pacifyingly, “You guys just keep celebrating till I get back.”
A few half-hearted cheers reached Harry’s ears, but he didn’t stop to identify any. Instead his eyes glance over to Tracey, who was whispering urgently to Daphne and Blaise. Both had their eyes on him, and he only offered them a barely perceptible nod as he followed Moody up the stairs.
When they exited the Common Room and made it through the dungeons, neither Harry nor Barty spoke. The silence between them was heavy, pregnant with unspoken words and the certainty of impending conflict. The tension in the air was palpable, a brittle energy that seemed to crackle and hum, a prelude to the confrontation that both wizards knew was inevitable. Neither was under the delusion that this encounter would conclude peacefully; the air was too thick with their opposing wills, and the betrayal that Harry had experienced.
Harry, though prepared for a hostile encounter, was nonetheless unsurprised when their steps led them to the Courtyard closest to the Entrance Hall. It was an open, expansive space, seemingly designed for the very sort of private, undeniable showdown that loomed before them. The moonlight, though muted by the castle walls, cast long, distorted shadows, mirroring the contorted emotions within them as they finally stopped, facing each other across the flagstones.
It was an open space, which Harry felt gave him the advantage. His eyes shifted around looking for things he could fight with, but Barty’s voice broke through to him, and broke him out of his planning, “I take my lord is dead?”
Harry’s eyes narrowed, and he stepped forward, wand in hand, “Your Lord, Barty, is alive. The one that pulled you out of harm's way. The one that gave me the gifts to restore your mind. That man is alive and well, with his followers back at his side. I don’t know what you were thinking but-”
“The man is an imposter!” Barty roared, drawing his own wand, and Harry raised his quickly thinking the fight would begin, but instead the man was heaving for breath. Grunting in pain as the polyjuice potion began to dissolve. Harry desperately wanted to curse the man, while he struggled with the transformation, but he wanted to look him in the eyes when he took the man’s life.
It wasn’t long before the young man had returned to his true form. He was barely over thirty years old, yet a lifetime of horrific deeds had etched lines of premature age around his eyes, despite his youthful appearance. His dark brown hair, still thick and lustrous, hinted at his tender age, a stark contrast to the weariness that clung to him. His face, clean-shaven, was slick with sweat and alarmingly pale, yet beneath the translucent sheen, a surprising resilience shone through. For a man who had endured the oppressive weight of the Imperious curse for a full decade, he looked remarkably healthy, a testament perhaps to an inner fortitude or an unyielding malevolence that refused to be extinguished. The return to his original state, free from the magical subjugation, brought with it a disturbing sense of renewed energy, as if the very air around him pulsed with a latent, sinister intent was in the man’s eyes.
“He doesn’t remember the time we shared together.” Barty said, his voice laced with a fury that vibrated through the very air. “He claims to be the one who taught me, to have shaped my magical abilities in the Dark Arts, but he doesn’t even know who I am! Imagine my surprise, my utter disbelief, when this imposter, this ‘Tom Riddle’, sends me on a wild goose chase to the desolate plains of Albania, ostensibly to hunt for clues of the Lost Diadem of Ravenclaw. And what do I find there? Not a piece of lost history, but the true Dark Lord, a shadow of his former self, yes, but one that had every bit of his memory intact. He was less than a man, a wraith clinging to a fragile existence, but I knew, with a certainty that resonated deep within my very soul, that if I restored him to his glorious, fearsome form, we could rule the world again, not as mere puppets, but as true masters of our destiny, bending all to our will.”
“You are a fool, Barty.” Harry spat immediately, “Voldemort didn’t return to his previous forms, he came back looking like a monster, and Tom killed him. Put him down like a rabid dog. Just like I am going to do to you. My master sends his regards, Barty, but there will be no escape for you tonight.”
Scoffing the man shook his head, “After I kill you I will go hunt for more pieces of my master, and restore him once again. This will never be over, Potter, not for as long as I live.”
Growling Harry pointed his wand at the man, “We will see about that.”
.o.
Tracey, Blaise, and Daphne had wasted no time in following Harry out of the Common Room, desperate to get away from prying eyes. When they were alone in the hallway, Tracey pulled out the folded up parchment, and handed it to Daphne, “Harry said you knew how to work this, we have to follow him.”
Daphne frowned at the girl, while Blaise looked confused, clearly still trying to contemplate what Harry had said to him just a few minutes before, “What are we going to do if Dumbledore wants Harry at this time of night? Storm into the Headmaster's office? What did he do?”
“Daphne, you don’t understand!” Tracey said vehemently, “That man wasn’t Alastor Moody.”
“What?” Daphne and Blaise asked together.
Growling in frustration, Tracey slapped her forehead, “I don’t have all the details, but Harry said Moody wasn’t what he seems, and that he placed Karkaroff under the Imperious to attack us. I don’t know what’s going on, but Harry looked nervous, and furious at the same time. Something big is happening, and we have to help him.”
The two continued to stare at her in bewilderment, when Tracey practically screamed, “Just work the damn map, and tell me where they are going. I will go by myself if I have to.”
Daphne took the map that was shoved into her hand by Tracey, and drew her wand whispering, “I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.”
As the ancient, brittle map unfurled, revealing intricate lines and faded symbols, Daphne, without a moment's hesitation or question, began flipping through the accompanying pages. Her fingers, nimble and accustomed to the task, glided across the parchment, each turning a silent pursuit of finding her friend. Meanwhile, Blaise’s foot tapped a nervous rhythm against the cold, stone floor, his eyes darting from shadow to shadow. A palpable unease clung to him, the unspoken question of discovery hanging heavy in the air. He scanned the dungeons, his gaze constantly sweeping for any sign of intruders, any flicker of movement that would betray their presence. In stark contrast, Tracey’s gaze was utterly transfixed, locked onto the map with an unwavering intensity.
Daphne frowned as she had found Harry’s name, and gasped when she realized Tracey had been right, but her confusion didn’t end there. Harry was indeed not walking the hallways with Alastor Moody, but Barty Crouch, a man the entire wizarding world believed to be dead, "That's impossible.”
The faint mumble might have brushed against Tracey's ears, but her mind was elsewhere, already racing through possibilities. Her internal mapping of Hogwarts, refined through years of navigating its corridors, screamed that the names she'd just read were materializing near the courtyard by the Entrance Hall. This was a critical deviation from where they should be, which was near the Headmaster's office. A cold knot of dread tightened in her stomach. This wasn't going to be a simple conversation or a disciplinary meeting; this was going to be a fight, and a serious one at that. A fierce, protective instinct flared within her. Harry, the boy that held her affections, her confidant, was likely in the thick of it, and she knew, with a certainty that resonated deep in her bones, that he was going to need her. Without a second thought, she began to move, her steps quickening, her gaze already scanning for the fastest route to the courtyard, her wand instinctively tightening in her grip.
The calls of her friends were all but ignored as her feet picked up to run. She needed to get to Harry, before it was too late.
.o.
Using his speed to his advantage, Harry immediately launched himself into the fray, initiating the fight with a ferocity born of desperation. His wand, an extension of his will, moved in a dizzying blur, conjuring the most violent and potent curses he had learned. These were the very spells he had wielded just hours earlier against the monstrous, twisted form of Lord Voldemort, spells designed for maximum destruction and death. Many of these dark enchantments had been painstakingly taught to him by Tom during their intense and often brutal training sessions, each lesson etching itself into Harry's very being.
However, Barty Crouch Jr. was no ordinary opponent. He was gifted, a dark prodigy in his own right, possessing an innate understanding of offensive and defensive magic that surpassed Harry's own. With an unsettling ease, Barty dismantled most of Harry’s magically charged assaults, his own wand weaving intricate counter-spells and wards that shimmered and pulsed, deflecting the raw magical power. When Barty returned fire, his spells were imbued with a terrifying kinetic force. Each curse, each blast of energy, slammed into Harry’s hastily erected shield with a jarring impact, the sheer punch they packed rocking him to his core and threatening to shatter his magical defenses. The air crackled with displaced energy, and the very ground vibrated beneath their feet as their wills clashed in a deadly dance of power.
The sickly green killing curse, a malevolent stream of pure death, hissed past Harry's ear, so close he felt the unnatural chill of its passage. His eyes, usually a vibrant green, narrowed to slits of emerald rage, reflecting the grim determination that now hardened his features. In a fluid motion he brought his wand to his lips and a low, guttural hiss escaped from his throat. From the tip of his wand, a torrent of emerald flames erupted, not the gentle, warming kind, but a consuming, destructive inferno. It was a replication, a dark echo, of the very magic Barty Crouch Jr. had wielded with such terrifying proficiency. Harry, channeling his own potent reserves, sought to emulate the audacious display, to fight fire with fire, or rather, to fight a killing curse with a devastating surge of serpentine flame.
Harry grinned at the success of his spell. It was one he had not perfected before now, but this spell's perfection was born out of a desperation to tip the tides. Before the flames could consume the man however, a red jet of light zoomed through the fire, and struck Harry directly, causing him to fall to the ground screaming in pain.
Tears streamed to his eyes, blurring his vision, as the cold, hard realization hit him: Barty had him, utterly and completely. A scream tore from his throat, quickly swallowed by the raw, consuming agony that eclipsed all other sensations. Barty’s proficiency with the Unforgivable Curses was not just skillful; it was absolute, a terrifying mastery that left no room for hope or escape. The Cruciatus Curse, a torrent of invisible, searing electricity, wracked his body, forcing him to roll on the ground in a desperate, futile attempt to escape the torment. Each muscle spasmed uncontrollably, his bones feeling as though they were being systematically crushed and reset, only to be crushed again. His mind, usually sharp and quick, was reduced to a primal scream, a desperate plea for an end to the ceaseless torture that rippled through every fiber of his being. The world narrowed to the white-hot core of his pain, punctuated only by the mocking, distant sound of Barty’s voice, a chilling counterpoint to his own silent agony.
When the curse released him, Harry heaved for breath, and tried to find the air to fill his lungs. His vision swam, but as he looked up, he saw Barty’s focus had changed directions and the man roared out, “Oh look, Potter, you brought a spare, Avada Kedavra!”
Time ceased its flow, a cruel mockery of the agony that ripped through Harry as the sickly green curse erupted from Barty Crouch Jr.'s wand. Each agonizing second stretched into an eternity, the vibrant, venomous hue of the spell seared into his vision, yet his mind struggled to grasp the terrifying reality unfolding before him. Barty, a grotesque mask of fury and pain, bled profusely from a gruesome wound where his eye once was—a testament to a brutal curse that had found its mark. But the target of Barty's vengeful magic sent a fresh wave of confusion and dread through Harry. His eyes, swimming with pain and disbelief, darted across the desolate courtyard.
There she was: Tracey, her face a canvas of triumphant pride. She had landed the curse that had, for a fleeting moment, spared Harry from further torture, a desperate act of defiance that had stopped Barty's cruel ministrations. The satisfaction in her eyes, however, curdled into a chilling terror as the emerald light, an omen of death, screamed towards her. Harry's heart hammered against his ribs, a frantic drumbeat of despair. Every fiber of his being screamed at him to act, to reach out, to summon any fragment of magic, any desperate plea, to shield her, to save her from the inevitable. But a cold, crushing certainty settled over him—it was useless. The distance, his own debilitating pain, and the sheer, raw power of the curse rendered him impotent, a mere spectator to a nightmare he was powerless to halt. The green light devoured the space between them with horrifying speed, and struck Tracey dead in the chest sending her sprawling backwards.
Two horrified voices, one undoubtedly Daphne’s high-pitched shriek and the other Blaise’s deeper bellow, passed through Harry's ears, but he didn't process either of them. The world swam before his eyes, a chaotic blur of green light and swirling dust. Instead, he fought through the agony still passing through his body, every nerve ending screaming in protest, a searing pain that felt like a thousand tiny needles piercing his skin. He clenched his jaw, tasted blood, and forced himself to his feet, a desperate, almost primal urge to survive overriding the crippling pain.
His vision, though still blurry, focused on Barty Crouch Jr., who stood several yards away, his face a mask of triumphant malice. Barty seemed to realize Harry had found his feet, a flicker of surprise, then irritation crossing his features. He spun, turning his wand towards Harry, a deadly intent in his eyes. But before the wizard's spell could reach him, before he could utter a single syllable, Harry, fueled by a raw, unyielding rage, growled out, "Game over, Legilimens!" The word ripped from his throat, hoarse and raw, carrying with it a lifetime of suppressed anger and a desperate hope for retribution.
Harry tore through the man’s mind like paper. Flashes of the man’s life went by, but Harry didn’t attempt to distinguish any of them. Instead he went through it like a bull in a china shop, rampaging relentlessly. Unfortunately for Barty, Harry was very familiar with the man’s mind, and knew his way around intrinsically after rebuilding it over the Summer.
Roaring inside the man’s mind, Harry screamed, “I built you up, now I will tear you down, brick by break!”
It only took seconds for Harry to unhinge the man’s mind. As he was exiting, not even an intelligent thought could form inside of Barty’s consciousness. He was certain the man would never again rise, his will utterly broken. As the lifeless form crumpled to the ground, Harry delivered a final, vicious blow—a gouging strike straight through the man's chest. Barty's eyes, wide and unseeing, remained open as he hit the dirt, and with a final flick of his wrist, Harry summoned the man’s wand to him, fulfilling Tom’s final request. A scream of triumph clawed at Harry's throat, but it died there, choked by a sudden, heart-wrenching sight: his two closest friends, Daphne and Blaise, cradling the girl he had come to care for throughout the year.
Tracey’s eyes remained open, a chilling testament to her final moments, and her face was a mask of sheer terror. This sight ignited a furious surge within Harry as he painfully limped towards his fallen friends. Distant shouts, signaling the arrival of the Hogwarts staff, began to pierce the haze of his shock, yet their words remained an incomprehensible jumble. He barely registered them. Instead, his legs gave out beneath him, and he collapsed to his knees beside Tracey, the tears that threatened to fall seemingly frozen in his eyes, unable to comprehend the horrifying reality of what had just transpired. A crushing weight settled in his chest, his heart heavy with a grief so profound he couldn't imagine how he would ever recover. The world around him faded into a blur of meaningless sounds and shapes, his focus solely on the still figure beside him, the vibrant life that had once animated Tracey now extinguished, leaving behind only an agonizing void.
Comments
joao felipe
First of all, great work! Killing her could make the story better or not, I think you lose dynamic among characters, maybe you are going to introduce someone new.
Beau Brown
I made it very clear Barty was the better duelist for many chapters now. Harry knew he couldn't beat him in a straight fight. I don't allow my characters to just always win. That's not good writing.
sonicmalibu
Harry is utterly pathetic in this chapter. More than typical. Not only did he invite Tracey, which is stupid for multiple reasons, but he decided not to end Barry when he was vulnerable for the stupidest of reasons. And overall just being weak as usual. Just a sad read. I was expecting Harry to be normal and have flings or whatever before finally settling on Daphne. Tracey would exit naturally for whatever reason. Writing the story as Harry having committed relationships that he loses due to his weak incompetence is just lame.
Vrail
Probably a good call. Waiting that long depending on when it happened would make it hard to fully explore harry and Daphne's relationship, and honestly at that point it would almost be better to just make it a Harry/Tracey story. This gives time for the characters to go through any needed development from her death off screen over the summer.
Beau Brown
I was really conflicted on whether I would kill her in this story arc or in the Order of the Phoenix. Ultimately however, Tracy was in Daphne's way.
Vrail
well damn, that I did not see coming at all. I mean I expected her to die but not at this point, it felt like it would happen much later. Harry will have a lot of explaining to do after this, both to Dumbledore and the ministry as well as his friends. I am still curious as to how the death of Lucius Malfoy will be explained, though perhaps that could be blamed on Barty Crouch Jr as well. Blaise and Daphne's reaction to everything will be interesting, given they are informed they now work for the Dark Lord by proxy of Harry and that their friend just died because of it. Harry's reaction to this will also be interesting, not to mention the I am sure inevitable "I told you so" from Tracey's father since harry did essentially get Tracey killed. I love how you explained Barty's reasoning for the betrayal, because honestly it makes sense in a way. Tom was not someone that Barty had ever met, so he wouldn't see him as his Lord.
Zay Alt
God, that was god that sucks so much, i knew him and tracey wouldn’t be end game but i didn’t think it would be like this.
