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Better Late Than Never Chapter 13 (When Desperation Burns)
🕑 Added 2025-06-11 20:24:52 +0000 UTCThe mist hung heavier than usual as Naruto made his way through the pre-dawn darkness toward Fuu's waterfall. His breath came out in small puffs, the chill biting through his orange jacket. The village felt different—tenser, like a bowstring pulled too tight. Even the usual night sounds seemed muted, as if Takigakure itself was holding its breath.
He found Fuu sitting on the edge of the pool, her feet dangling in the water. Her wings were nowhere to be seen, her shoulders hunched forward in exhaustion. Dark circles shadowed her eyes, and her usually vibrant green hair looked dull in the pale moonlight filtering through the mist.
"You look like hell," Naruto said, dropping down beside her with less grace than usual.
Fuu's mouth twitched in what might have been a smile. "Feel worse." Her voice was hoarse, strained. "Thanks for coming."
"Course I came." Naruto studied her profile, noting the way her hands trembled slightly where they gripped the stone. "Rough night?"
"Seventeen arrests." The words came out flat, emotionless. "Families torn apart based on 'suspicious behavior.' A kid—couldn't have been older than eight—tried to run when we surrounded his house. His mother was screaming that he'd done nothing wrong."
Naruto felt something cold settle in his stomach. He'd known the crackdown was coming, but hearing the reality of it was different. "Did you... were you the one who—?"
"Found them? Yeah." Fuu's laugh held no humor. "Chomei's sensory abilities are perfect for hunting people who don't want to be found. She can sense emotional disturbance, fear, guilt—all the things desperate people radiate."
The bitterness in her voice made Naruto wince. "That must've been—"
"Do you know what it's like," Fuu interrupted, finally turning to look at him, "to see a grandmother clutch her granddaughter while looking at you like you're a monster? To watch people who used to smile when they saw you cross the street to avoid you?"
Naruto did know, actually. The comparison hit uncomfortably close to home—those early years in Konoha when shop owners would close their doors at his approach, when parents would pull their children away with disgusted looks. But he'd never been the one actively hunting those same people.
"I used to be their friend," Fuu continued, her voice breaking slightly. "I brought them medicine, helped with their problems. Now I'm Shuu's weapon, reminding them what happens when they step out of line."
"You were following orders," Naruto offered, though the words felt inadequate.
"Was I?" Fuu's orange eyes blazed with self-recrimination. "Or was I just taking the easy path because it's what I've always done? Follow Shuu, trust the system, be the good little jinchūriki?"
Naruto wanted to comfort her, to say something that would ease that pain in her voice. But the old him—the one who made grand promises and declared he'd fix everything—was gone. Jiraiya had beaten that naive confidence out of him during their training. Sometimes there weren't easy answers. Sometimes good people got hurt no matter what you chose.
"What does Chomei think about all this?" he asked instead.
Fuu's expression shifted, becoming distant. "She's... agitated. More than I've ever felt her. She keeps saying something's wrong with the Tree's flow, that the chakra patterns are 'screaming in discord.'" She rubbed her temples. "Whatever that means."
The mention of the Tree's chakra made Naruto straighten. "Actually, that might make more sense than you think." He took a breath, organizing his thoughts. "Jiraiya took me down into the roots yesterday. There's an ancient chamber down there—older than the village, maybe older than the shinobi system itself."
Fuu's tired eyes sharpened with interest. "What kind of chamber?"
"Like a shrine or something. With murals showing humans and bijuu working together." Naruto gestured vaguely, struggling to convey what he'd seen. "Not fighting, not the human controlling the bijuu, but actually cooperating. The chakra was flowing between them like... like they were partners."
"Partners," Fuu repeated softly, and Naruto caught that harmonic undertone again—Chomei listening through her.
"There's more. The Hero Water—it's not just tree sap or whatever. It's concentrated chakra that's somehow similar to bijuu chakra. And someone's been messing with the distribution system for who knows how long, making sure the elite get most of it while the outer rings get scraps."
Fuu was quiet for a long moment, her eyes unfocused as if carrying on an internal conversation. When she spoke again, her voice carried that dual-toned quality more strongly.
"Chomei remembers," she said slowly. "Fragments, anyway. She says the Tree was meant to be a bridge—a way for human and bijuu chakra to coexist naturally. The Hero Water was supposed to flow evenly, helping everyone in the village develop their potential."
"But someone broke it," Naruto concluded. "Deliberately channeled the power to create the hierarchy we see now."
"And now the cult is trying to force their way back in, while Shuu's trying to maintain control through fear." Fuu's wings flickered into existence briefly before dissolving again. "We're caught in the middle of a war that's been going on for generations."
Naruto stared out at the waterfall, its endless upward flow suddenly seeming less mysterious and more ominous. Everything in this village was about control—who had power, who decided how it was used, who got left behind. It reminded him uncomfortably of his own situation with the Kyuubi, all demands and bitter resentment with no real understanding between them.
Maybe that needed to change too.
"So what do we do?" he asked finally.
Fuu's smile was tired but genuine. "I was hoping you'd have some ideas. You're the one who doesn't accept things the way they are."
Naruto almost laughed. She still thought he was the type to charge in with a plan and a promise to fix everything. If only she knew how much that confidence had cost him.
"I don't make promises anymore," he said quietly. "Learned that lesson the hard way."
"I'm not asking for promises," Fuu replied. "Just... help me figure out what the right thing is. Because I'm pretty sure following orders isn't it."
Before Naruto could respond, a distant rumble echoed through the morning air—not thunder, but something else. Something that made the water in the pool ripple despite the lack of wind.
Both of them were on their feet instantly, wings sprouting from Fuu's shoulders as they turned toward the village. On the horizon, beyond the mist, an orange glow was beginning to spread.
"That's not the sunrise," Naruto said grimly.
"No," Fuu agreed, her face grim. "It's not."
The orange glow on the horizon pulsed brighter, and Naruto felt his stomach drop. Whatever was happening in the village, it wasn't good. But before they could move, Fuu suddenly stiffened beside him, her eyes widening with an expression he'd never seen before—not quite fear, but something close to it.
"Chomei wants to talk," she said, her voice already taking on that harmonic quality. "Directly. To both of us."
"Is that... safe?" Naruto asked, remembering his own volatile conversations with the Kyuubi.
Fuu's laugh was strained. "Safe's relative at this point." Her eyes shifted color, the orange deepening to gold, and when she spoke again, her voice carried the sound of wind through leaves. "Hello, Naruto Uzumaki."
The formal greeting caught him off guard. "Uh... hi, Chomei."
"My container has shared your discoveries about the ancient chamber," Chomei continued through Fuu. "The murals you described—they show truth, not fantasy. I remember those times, though not their beginning."
Naruto leaned forward, fascinated despite the crisis brewing behind them. "You remember? But that was centuries ago."
"Millennia, actually." Fuu's face wore an expression of ancient wonder that looked surreal on her young features. "The Tree was already ancient when my siblings and I were cubs, three thousand years ago. Even then, we were drawn to it, though we never understood why."
"Cubs?" Naruto tried to picture the massive Kyuubi as anything resembling young.
"House-sized balls of chakra and mischief," Chomei said with what might have been fondness. "We would play in its branches, sleep beneath its roots. The Tree's chakra felt... familiar, like an echo of something we couldn't quite remember."
"So you don't know where it came from either?"
"No. It predates even our earliest memories. By the time humans discovered it and founded Takigakure, my siblings and I had long since scattered across the world." Fuu's hands gestured gracefully, nothing like her usual movements. "The founders approached me with respect, offering partnership rather than chains. They wanted to understand the Tree's connection to bijuu chakra, but even working together, we never solved that mystery."
Naruto thought of the basin in the ancient chamber, the intricate network of chakra flowing through roots and branches. "But the partnership worked?"
"For three generations, yes. Rich and poor, shinobi and civilian—all benefited equally from the Tree's gifts. It was beautiful." Chomei's tone darkened. "Then war came. Fear. The rise of hidden villages that saw bijuu as weapons rather than allies. The partnership seals were replaced with binding ones, and the Tree's chakra was redirected to serve the powerful."
"And you couldn't stop them?"
"I became a prisoner, watching helplessly as harmony gave way to hierarchy." Fuu's expression twisted with old pain. "The current crisis isn't new—it's the culmination of systematic corruption that's been building for decades."
A distant rumble echoed through the morning air, and the orange glow grew brighter. Naruto glanced toward the village, then back at Fuu's golden eyes.
"The cult's using corrupted Hero Water, and Shuu's cracking down with force," he said. "No matter who wins—"
"Innocent people suffer," Chomei finished. "Yes. And the Tree suffers with them."
"There has to be a way to fix this."
"Perhaps. But it would require someone with Uzumaki sealing knowledge working with a bijuu who chooses to help." Fuu's gaze turned thoughtful. "Kyuubi isn't as terrible as you believe, Naruto."
Naruto's hands clenched into fists. "He killed my parents."
"I know." Chomei's voice carried infinite sadness. "And I know how much that hurts you. But of all my siblings, Kyuubi used to feel the most deeply. His capacity for emotion—both love and pain—dwarfed the rest of ours."
"What's that supposed to mean?" Naruto demanded, confusion mixing with anger.
Chomei was quiet for a long moment. "It's not my story to tell," she said finally. Then Fuu's golden eyes fixed directly on Naruto's stomach, as if looking through flesh and bone to the seal beneath. "Hello, brother."
The greeting was soft, warm, completely at odds with the Kyuubi's usual hostility. For a moment, nothing happened. Then Naruto felt something stir deep in his chest—not his own emotion, but something bitter and surprised.
A low growl rumbled up from his throat, so deep that it seemed to come from somewhere far below his conscious mind. The sound made the water in the pool ripple.
Naruto clapped a hand over his mouth, eyes wide with shock. That hadn't been him—that had been the fox.
"He hears me," Chomei said with satisfaction. "Good. We'll need him before this is over."
"Need him for what?" Naruto asked, his voice hoarse.
Before Chomei could answer, an explosion echoed across the water, much closer than before. Smoke was rising from multiple points in the village now, and the emergency bells had begun to ring.
"For saving what's left of Takigakure," Chomei said as Fuu's eyes returned to their normal orange. "Before there's nothing left to save."
Fuu swayed slightly as control returned fully to her, exhaustion evident in every line of her body. "We need to move," she said urgently. "Whatever the cult's doing, they're not waiting for dawn."
Naruto nodded, but his hand remained pressed against his stomach where that growl had emerged. The Kyuubi was closer to the surface than usual, his presence a weight behind Naruto's ribs.
Used to feel the most, Chomei had said. What did that mean? And why did the thought of it make something in his chest ache with sympathy he didn't want to feel?
The second explosion was much closer, sending ripples across the waterfall pool and making the ancient stone beneath them vibrate.
"That came from the middle ring," Fuu said, wings already materializing as she rose beside him. Her face had gone pale. "Near the residential districts."
A third blast followed, then a fourth, the sounds overlapping until they became a constant rumble of destruction. Orange light bloomed across the mist-shrouded village, and the sharp scent of smoke began to drift toward them on the morning breeze.
"They're not waiting for dawn," Naruto said grimly.
"I have to report to Shuu," Fuu said, but she made no move to leave. Her wings trembled with conflicted energy. "He'll expect me to help suppress the uprising."
"And do what? Hunt down more families? Lock up more kids?" Naruto shook his head. "The crackdown caused this. More force isn't going to fix it."
"Then what do you suggest?" Fuu's voice cracked with frustration. "Let them tear the village apart?"
Before Naruto could answer, a new sound cut through the chaos—screaming, high and desperate, from somewhere in the outer rings. Not the angry roar of rioters, but the terrified wails of people in genuine agony.
"The Hero Water," Fuu breathed, understanding immediately. "They're using it now, in desperation."
More screams joined the first, creating a horrific chorus that made Naruto's skin crawl. He'd heard pain before—in battle, during missions gone wrong—but this was different. This was the sound of people destroying themselves with their own hope.
"We need to get down there," he said, starting toward the village.
"Wait." Fuu caught his arm, her grip surprisingly strong. "Look."
She pointed toward the Tree's middle branches, where figures were moving. Taki shinobi, identifiable by their distinctive armor, were assembling into formation. Even from this distance, Naruto could see the grim efficiency in their movements—this wasn't a rescue operation, it was a military response.
"Shuu's sending in the full suppression force," Fuu said quietly. "Against civilians."
"Civilians with corrupted bijuu chakra," Naruto pointed out, though the words tasted bitter. "They're dangerous now."
"They're desperate. There's a difference."
Another wave of explosions rocked the village, closer to the Tree's base now. Smoke was rising from at least six different points, and the emergency bells had taken on a frantic rhythm that suggested coordination was breaking down.
"This is spiraling out of control," Naruto muttered, watching the chaos spread. "If the shinobi engage armed civilians pumped full of corrupted chakra..."
"Massacre," Fuu finished. "On both sides."
A new sound reached them—the distinctive whistle of kunai through air, followed by the crash of jutsu meeting stone. The fighting had begun in earnest now, and from the intensity of the flashes visible through the smoke, both sides were using lethal force.
"I can't watch this," Fuu said, her voice breaking. "Those people down there—I know them. I brought medicine to their children, helped fix their roofs after storms. And now..."
"Now they're trying to kill shinobi with power they don't understand, while those same shinobi are treating them like enemy combatants." Naruto felt familiar anger building in his chest—the same frustrated rage that had driven him to chase Sasuke beyond all reason. "Everyone's so busy being right that they're forgetting they're supposed to protect each other."
"What would you do?" Fuu asked suddenly. "If this was Konoha, if your people were tearing themselves apart?"
The question hit harder than Naruto expected. A year ago, he would have charged into the middle of it all, shouting about friendship and promises and finding a way to save everyone. But that confidence had died in the Valley of the End, buried under the weight of his first real failure.
"I don't know," he admitted. "I used to think there was always a right answer, always a way to make everyone happy. But sometimes..." He gestured at the burning village. "Sometimes people choose destruction. And you can't save someone from their own choices."
"Even if those choices are born from desperation?"
"Especially then." The words came out harder than he'd intended, shaped by too many conversations with Jiraiya about Sasuke's decision to leave. "Desperation makes people do terrible things to themselves and others. Doesn't make those things less terrible."
A massive explosion lit up the sky near the Tree's base, followed by a sound Naruto had hoped never to hear again—the distinctive roar of chakra being pushed far beyond safe limits. Someone down there had just burned out their system entirely.
"We're going to lose them all," Fuu whispered. "The civilians who survive the Hero Water will be hunted down by the suppression force. The ones who don't will burn themselves alive trying to become strong enough to fight back. And in the end..."
"In the end, Takigakure becomes a village of just shinobi," Naruto finished. "No merchants, no farmers, no craftsmen. No future."
"Is that sustainable?"
Naruto thought of Konoha, of all the ordinary people who made the village work—the shopkeepers and teachers and administrators who kept everything running while the shinobi handled the dramatic missions. "No. A village needs civilians to survive long-term. Without them..."
"Without them, you just have a military base pretending to be a community." Fuu's wings flared wider, decision crystallizing in her orange eyes. "I can't follow Shuu's orders. Not this time."
"What are you going to do?"
"Try to save who I can. Get people out of the combat zones, help them evacuate before the fighting spreads." She turned to him, expression grim but determined. "What about you?"
Naruto looked down at the burning village, at the impossible situation with no clean solutions. Part of him wanted to run—to leave Takigakure to its fate and continue his training somewhere safer, somewhere simpler. But another part, the part that still remembered what it felt like to be alone and desperate, couldn't abandon people who were suffering.
"I'm going to try something stupid," he said finally.
"Such as?"
"Find whoever's really behind this and make them stop."
Fuu studied his face carefully. "You think this is more than just desperate civilians lashing out?"
"I think desperate people don't coordinate six simultaneous strikes or time their uprising to coincide with emergency bell malfunctions." Naruto pointed to the Tree's upper branches, where the bells continued their erratic pattern. "Someone planned this. Someone wanted chaos."
"And you want to find them while the village burns around us?"
"I want to stop the person who's responsible for all this burning." Naruto started moving toward the village, his decision made. "Because putting out fires is useless if someone keeps lighting new ones."
Fuu caught up to him in a few wingbeats, landing beside him as they reached the outer edge of the residential areas. "This could go very wrong."
"Yeah," Naruto agreed, listening to the sounds of battle growing closer. "But doing nothing guarantees it goes wrong. At least this way, we're trying."
"No promises about saving everyone?"
Naruto's smile was grim. "No promises. Just... whatever we can manage."
It wasn't the answer his younger self would have given, but it was honest. And in a situation this complex, maybe honesty was all they had left.
Comments
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
Honestly, this is really great so far! I'm kind of hoping that after the dust settles in this situation, that Fuu leaves with Naruto and Jiraya. Also, can't wait for dark Naruto. That's going to be a wild ride.
Zeldris
I don't know if trying to find the instigator would be successful, no matter what Naruto will become darker after Taki. I wanted to know, would his relationship with Kurama will be the same in canon?
