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Rattata Chapter 28: A smooth criminal

🕑 Added 2024-03-04 04:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Mrsean22

Another great chapter. A little bit of more training. Sorta a mix on if Joey goes for the fourth badge but is currently leaning towards no because Rattata is fine with not evolving but Metapod could still evolve. Did like the thread part. Joey basically getting attention but people still not taking him seriously yet.

bor902

Good eye lol

Javier Ricaurte

Nice try, but don't think I didn't see that the AN says "Joey doesn't want to do Cerulean" instead of "Joey won't do Cerulean", you can't fool me!

Marian Ch

"WHERE THE FUCK IS HE FINDING THESE TRAINERS" Eh, are these people not aware that other routes exist?

bor902

Yeah, if metapod manages to evolve somehow by then, the gym battle becomes potentially winnable? Yeah I know the forum is a bit weird, but IMO, it doesn't necessarily have to appear in the text chronologically. Whole chapter is just three different scenes, coincidentally in the right order. THese forum threads are always a bit "When exactly did it happen?", you know what I mean

Gremlin Jack

If Metapod manages to digest that Everstone and evolve in the next couple of months, would Joey reconsider challenging Cerulean? Also, that forum discussion seems like it should be at the end, since the Diglett match implies it was after his discussion with Rattata, which happened on the evening he returned from Vermillion.

bor902

He doesn't want more than 6 for the conference, but he might get more in future regions

Lamby18

Soo Kadabra are tier 2 but butterfree and dugtrio are tier 3? Seems like and oversight by the indigo league. I’m really enjoying the story so far and the emphasis on tactics is fun. However, having the right personnel is part of tactics and Joey picking up a diglett without a second thought was honestly a bit short sited when his eventual goal is to be the champion. Especially when joeys already stated he doesn’t want more than 6 Pokémon. (Especially when we were teased with hypnosis misdreavus as the third member) :/

bor902

It would most definitely be fun. I mentioned it because I planned it, yeah

Desidia

Just skimmed chapter 18 on Royalroad, Joey could spend some time on a job beating up stuck-up students at the Pokemon Technical Institute. It could be good training, plus, it'll be fun.

bor902

He still hasn't battled Sabrina. And, the competition will increase when he goes out next year and battles trainers, not youngsters.

bor902

Joey's future financial decisions will merit a story arc on their own haha

Green0Photon

On one hand, bank that ridiculous amount of money, dear god! I feel like I'm watching WSB posts. But then again, the one time to not do classic index fund investing, or whatever such things, is when you actually have insider information. That's the one time you beat an efficient market. So, uh, dumping way more money is a go? In reality, he should still bank some of it. There's no guarantee that Lance doesn't trip up and have to try again soon. Or it's AU. Probably should save some as a year's emergency fund, and spend the rest on Lance. He now has so much money where he can afford to do both, really. As much as the potential money he could otherwise get may hurt. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯sorry I read too much personal finance stuff The chapter was fun and the last section was very cute

An_Reader89

Thanks for the chapter!

Kcx1

Good chapter and I am looking forward to more. Favorite part was Rattata. There is no such thing as stats in this world and Raticate can grow to be come extremely strong like can hold against Dragonite strong right? Also some more peers would be interesting. I can't help but think it is unusual for our hero to be the best out of the youngsters. More adversity would be interesting

Kcx1

Interesting.... May I suggest Bulbasaur for a fourth member? Also he definitely needs a better tanker .... Though if I coukd point out that it would be interesting for debates about the future of the youngster program to continue. Now obviously I don't want it to end but I think it could prove to be an interesting look into governance.


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