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Chapter 18: Constance, the town of the dead

🕑 Added 2023-10-27 12:19:28 +0000 UTC

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carebear90

I liked the bit about the grandparent escaping Dachau and making it home on foot, to be honest. It felt raw and 'real'. I wouldn't remove it from the public version. But... I'm also from Europe (Germany) and - at least back when I was in school - they still insisted on drilling the horrors of the past into our small impressionable brains. If I remember right we visited Buchenwald 4 or 5 times over a period of 8 years. It became kinda jarring after the 3rd time. Don't know if they're still doing this nowadays. So... the topic coming up here instantly felt like familiar territory and I could identify with it on a deeper level. I have no idea how readers from other countries would perceive this, though. So... I can't really say if my opinion is worth much in this regard.

Green0Photon

Should've said "lactose intolerant" again. Lmao. "It all started when I was born." Lmaoooooo.

Crazyone47

more please

bor902

Thanks. Yeah, it is a bit of a quality over quantity fic. I mean there's some really badly written stuff out there. Still, we do have quantity, 10k words a month if not more is a lot. I already considered polling the pokemin, but I decided to pick them myself in the end. Honestly, it's just the fact that if I pick them I'll be more excited to write about them. Creativity is hard to upkeep and should be cherished.

Hedincool

Great chapter, as always! This is my favourite Pokémon fic by a mile, and I'm always happy to see it updated... I think I remember you mentioning this as a quality-over-quantity fic unlike many other SI's. I'm all for it! But I was wondering how you're deciding which pokémon to put on his team, and if any of them are poll-able. Personaly I'd love to see a Annihilape and Ursaluna which are probably unknowns at this point... Looking forward to the next chap^^


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