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Demon lord ch3 sketch p21-26
🕑 Added 2025-12-11 20:04:28 +0000 UTCAlright, here's a demon lord draft update. I think it will be quite long so i might put on poll if you guy want to coloring the first 30 pages first or continue with the sketch draft. As always thank you for helping me with proof reading and other stuff.
Thanlk you again for supporting this hopeless artist. I wish you guy the best.
Comments
Ben Lankford
When will the rest come out
Nepisa
Shaping up to be very interesting! As usual, here's my notes: page 1: your're quite resili[e]nt for [] archdemon spawns. thank[s]! we are super duper though[]! their strength [is] no match [for] my sword[s]manship the[ir] goal must be the artifact. group show[s] up you'll head[] there immedi[a]tely. [the vice commander and I] can handle oursel[ves]. page 2: what exactly [is that] old junk the record[s] are mostly gone. all I know is that it[] date[s] back so [] evil old junk? we can't have it fall into[] demon hand[s]. the demon[s (probably?) have] destroyed the main bridge is evacuating the civilian[s] is crawling with demon[s] now if all else fail[s,] bury it. collapse [the] entire vault if you must. return with tale[s] of my glorious triumph! page 3: (I don't understand what you mean with the bound(a?)ry part - is it a last stand? or just that he defends alone?) he want[s] to have us all for him[se]lf it[] seems like we have to teach[] our to see my men twisted like this.[..] come, demon[s]! you're facing the goddess'[] finest! (I probably would just call it "underground elevator", unless you want to literally talk about its shaft, then it would be "underground elevator shaft") page 4: keep up my fearless comrade[s]! the epic battle await[s] us in [these] old bone[s are] still able didn't you sa[y] "[the] demon lord is dead". "it's just a bunch of feral demon[s]" because I got [] elf blood all your problem[s] on your damn elf role[]play! role[]play!? paladin[s]! brace yoursel[ves]! (if there's multiple paladins, sorry I don't remember their roles at the moment) page 5: i've been waiting for you guy[s]! getting past my bestie[s]! (assuming plural) from my fellow paladin[s]! (multiple again) a[]rchdemon (awkward linesplit) and end[ed] up here like something [was] off always piss[ed] off page 6: I wish we [could] be friend[s]
