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Chapter 122 - Elder Kilth

🕑 Added 2024-03-21 15:34:00 +0000 UTC

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Thomas Hendrix

It actually makes a lot of sense. This is actually once of the best written youths I have ever seen. Young people can be incredibly inconsistent, particularly when strong emotions like love or hate are involved. The also tend to have more blind spots that no amount of intelligence will cover. Only experience will show them the holes and that requires time.

Wes Brown

@Rekhyt, I haven't forgotten he can't keep a secret ( Thank-you) that's not what I'm referring to. Since my comment was difficult for you to follow let me explain again. The author writes the character as having either compromised descion making skills, or selective maturity that confuses me. He writes contradictory things and then seemingly to me fobs of the consequences. Which I find confusing. It has repeatedly been a thing where the MC is trying to hide something, pills, core levels, relationships. Much detail has gone into to go into why they need to be hidden, only to then seemingly to make knee-jerk changes at the last minute and for all the before mentioned consequences to evaporate. My issue is not the character can't seemingly keep a secret. It is that after revealing or doing whatever it is. Be it kissing Sell in public, removing pills from the safety of his home, revealing his core strength, these choices are explained away as non important and thier are no consequences. I'll specifically point out the core reveal. For chapter after chapter, hiding his core strength has been a huge deal and a main plot point. He can't reveal his true strength for many reasons, all given over multiple chapters. He's been training to hid his strength since the start of the first book, in the woods with the owl. Then after chapters of explaining to the audience how vital hiding his true strength is, he reveals it with no warning, and little explanation beyond it was slightly inconvenient and he didn't want Sell to look or feel bad. And when confronted by his grandfather we're told that it'll just magically be better this way. I find that hard to accept after how big a deal it was since book one. Same thing with the pills. He's been guarding and hiding these pills religiously since the first book. Can't let them be discovered because they are so valuable....then oh yeah I'll just hid them in my room it'll be fine. I am having a hard time with the " it'll be fine attitude" after having made a big deal for so many chapters for whatever it is. I don't care that he can't keep a secret... with this pattern I find it hard to believe anything about the character will remain hidden, that we will have a believable reason for why it's revealed, or that it will have any consequences once it is. Was that...difficult for you to follow?

Rekhyt

@Wes Brown. Part of his character. In case you forgot, it's even a running gag at this point for the other characters to make fun of him since he can't keep a secret. Don't worry, the space mage secret and his control over shadows will most likely remain hidden, so he can build up the Celestial Shadow organisation. The story is really not difficult to follow.

Wes Brown

I am so confused by this character. He can see the value of being cautious in some situations but not others? He decides not outright refuse to join the Sheilds House because he doesn't want to upset the one elder. But doesn't have the foresight that leaving the pill worth kingdoms alone in his room might be a bad idea? Like it's probably gonna be stolen right? Confusing. I will say I did like how the author explained that he wasn't being mugged by ever researcher in the school out or respect for the headmaster. I think that makes sense that people were giving the headmaster a few days to investigate the situation out if respect to him before butting in on thier own. I wish that had been conveyed earlier, but it makes more sense now.

Jay00

Seriously can he keep anything to himself!


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