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Chapter 117 - Questions

🕑 Added 2024-03-14 14:47:05 +0000 UTC

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Wes Brown

“Mm,” Adion nodded.- way does this sentence add to the story? You could delete it entirely and there would be no change. Seriously why do you feel the need to keep using this made up word " Mm" it's so dumb. It's not even correct it would be atleast 3 m's if you were to even approach a word.

Kbzzy

I like the reasoning for revealing his strength

Flusspferd

The author has stated in the past that he usually plans the end of any given week. I guess depending on how many topics there are to be adressed in those 5 chapters, they are either shorter or longer. While I would certainly prefer longer chapters for no trade-off as well, I really like the fact that the end of the week usually concludes the plot point in a satisfying manner.

Anthony John

Those chapters are way too short...


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