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Chapter 95 - Cake

🕑 Added 2024-02-13 15:16:13 +0000 UTC

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ThoMiCroN

leaving the brothers*

WiseBison

I agree that the last two chapters certainly are a bit more 'fillery' than previous ones. Main purpose of the chapters is for time to pass at a not too fast pace so that it doesn't feel like Adion is leaving too abruptly after a year in Rethi. (and to get some things that needs to be done before leaving) I usually plan out chapters with the whole week in mind. Usually, that works to make the story move at a good pace, but maybe this time, it suffered a little because of that as I have the Friday chapter set in stone (more so than ever before) and needed to plan the other chapters to work around that. Anyway, thanks for bringing it up! I hadn't thought about it but I will keep it in mind in the future!

Steven

Some constructive feedback. These last few chapters have Felt like filler. no real meat or substance to move the story forward.

Kbzzy

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Nicklas Kjerrumgaard

New chapter🤩


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