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Chapter 309 - The Long Road

🕑 Added 2024-08-25 04:23:33 +0000 UTC

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Reclaimer Bear

Honestly this author tends to forget things. At least when he was putting out stuff continuously. The editing for the first book did seem to tighten it up though, so here is for hoping that when he finally finishes editing and starts posting again the minor stuff starts to be fixed. Like that map reading skill not being a thing again. Lol

Reclaimer Bear

If i remember correctly it is about 200 infantry, plus the mages and their guards. But also, for every tier 4 being invaded, there are 20 not being invaded. And most of the tier 4 nations are sending out companies to multiple battlefields. Therefore, each nation should be hiring anywhere from 3-10k mercenaries at a bare minimum. Assuming none of the nations haven't already started sending out whole battalions already. Mind you, they are still facing off against 300k- 1 million troops with no more than 120k men if the numbers are consistent.

sebcbaker

What happened to it being the 'Vynn' Corps? why change it ? It was cool that it was his lineage. It also showed trust and love from his wife to be.

C Smith

Are these regular companies like around 200 ppl? You should state the general number of people. If so seems like a drop in the bucket no matter how well trained they won't make a difference when. The enemie is fielding a 100k

Secret Weapons

Part of the reason people post these stories to Royal Road and other platforms is to get feedback and tighten up their story before hopefully being able to maybe publish it one day. I give my honest feedback on where I think the story is thin or doesn't make sense to try and make it better. If you don't like how I do it, feel free to skip my comments in the future, I don't really care.

Kaleb Uden

Newish reader here just getting caught up on patreon chapters, I just want to say from what I've seen, Secret Weapons comments are overwhelmingly negative. Honestly thought you just didn't like the story at all. Not trying to say anything about you as a person, that's just how it's coming across in the comments.

Secret Weapons

Where did I say the war/military part was the problem? All the previous war arcs you mentioned were interesting because each one contained a more powerful Reivyn, and watching him use his new abilities/powers to evolve himself and his troops was interesting. The complete lack of progression, and in fact regression, of Reivyn before this arc means it will basically be identical to the last one, that was my point. I don't need some OP curb stomp, just progression.... which is the whole point of this genre. As for me being a dick about it, I was just relaying my feedback, if you don't like the tone in which I did it, I don't really give a shit to be honest. I think completely misrepresenting my point to make a arrogant judgement about me is kind of dickish as well, so I guess we're both in the same boat. Welcome!

AsheHides

Dude, this whole story has been about war and military the whole time. From conscription to Drallo to Varia and even the politics, its been a story about a man with the soul of a warrior who leads his men to victory. I think youre expecting a traditional xanxia OP fight fest when thats not what this is, and youre kinda being a dick about it

Secret Weapons

Couldn't be less excited for this next war arc. We've already seen it multiple times, and at this point he and his men can easily crush regular troops.... and will still get absolutely slaughtered by the powerful 5's and 6's from the Empire. Reivyn's weaker now than he was last time he ran and got his ass kicked by a 6... what exactly about this new arc will be interesting? I'd maybe be interested if he'd grinded hard and was a newly Tier 4 powerhouse who could legit go toe to toe with a 5 himself now, the surprise would be awesome.... instead he'll just have to run away AGAIN. Not exactly something to be excited about.

Yshua

I’m not excited for another mercenary bit, but it’s been great to see this story posting again.

SodaBoBomb

Oh I'd be very surprised if that's not her. And I considered him as well. If he IS from her kingdom, the only question is if he knows it's her or not.

Jeremy Durbin

I've been thinking he was the noble Ariella pulled from the group of them earlier, and that she is the one he keeps thinking about left over from his original party.

SodaBoBomb

Yeah that's what I'm leaning towards, but I think the others are possible.

Maakolo

I think he's from the tier 6 empire and Ariella is there too, just not openly.

SodaBoBomb

I'm thinking Gulley is either another Imperial from somewhere, maybe even from whatever family took over Vynn, a Cultivator, or someone from Ariellas Kingdom, but he doesn't know Ariella is with him.


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