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Chapter 247 - Convictions

🕑 Added 2023-07-06 09:37:19 +0000 UTC

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Eifer

I don't care how Kefira's mother is choosing to couch her meddling or how many excuses she puts forward. Without a side chapter to hear her unfiltered thoughts, I'll never believe that she did it for Kefira. She's a raging c*nt that's shown nothing but disdain for her daughters judgement. They'd have met obstacles regardless and the merc company would have gotten ahead without her meddling, so there would have been plenty of time for the hormones to settle and provide some confirmation for both of them. Disgusting human garbage.

Mastreo999

Really can't say anything regarding the quality of the novel. Really like it, but to consider the inconsistency of the number of chapter per week, I really think stopping the membership. I was motivate at first because we were supposed to have 5 chapters a week or am I wrong. I really understand life is not easy and sometimes bad thing happened but it has been a while I stop waiting for new chapter (it comes when it comes) but I really consider stopping tge membership because it's not free at all. Really sorry to drop this kind of message because it's not my style but I really prefer let you know now before I take my decision.

Maakolo

For real. There are stupid people in every group, but if that group generates more incompetent people than the average then that group isnt meant to last. Nobility specifically existsed as a hereditary system because of how them raising the next generations was beneficial. Arbitrary cruelty would never not be a marker of incompetence, because for a leader it destroys the trust of their subordinates in them.

SodaBoBomb

Well, yes, but this is stupid in a believable way. Rather than the "Nobles run around being complete and utter assholes, literally assaulting and murdering people at a whim, while also being comically incompetent" but I'm also supposed to believe that their society is thousands of years old. Systems with abusive leaders can last a long time. But systems with leaders THAT abusive don't.

Alex

They are stupid for not insisting on getting the whole story first though. Just blindly trusting the kid. Especially the magistrate should know that people often lie.

Captdeth

6hr

SodaBoBomb

To be fair, I think this chapter was more to characterize his family. They're selfish Nobles who are willing to game the system yes, but they aren't complete buffoons or cartoonishly evil. They know they have to give at least SOMETHING in return for service as well. I like this chapter simply for that, since so many stories like this make all Nobles who aren't on the MCs side to be evil, stupid assholes.

SodaBoBomb

God damnit, more waiting uggghhhhhh... Lol thanks for the chapter! I like that his father and Unlce are selfish, but not complete buffoons or the cartoonishly evil version of Nobles we often get in stories.

NJ Reed

Thanks for the chapter

eroth

I agree that political intrigue is great to have; it makes stories interesting with seeing how characters interact and deal with potential ramifications. The issue I have is that this chapter is showing simultaneously how aware and unaware the characters are about it. Reivyn is in absolutely no danger of any sort of political fallout whatsoever. Kefira's mom is literally explaining that everything political involving Wispan was a game for Kefira. None of it matters. He is above any sort of nobility farce, ESPECIALLY because he's a foreign royal. (albeit unannounced as such). Most of my criticism is getting any sort of point of view that takes up a majority of a chapter about Arrogant Young Master #1675 and his self-delusions. We're seeing the world from his perspective, sure, but ultimately everyone in the literary universe knows that he is irrelevant. And after reading a LOT of different stories, stereotypical arrogant nobles are boring. To me. I enjoy the novel and the writing about adapting these different sorts of training and seeing some sort of overarching plot, but Oriyn is ultimately not a relevant part of it. Having two different chapters with his POV (one during the escape outlining how delusional he is and this one hammering in, again, how delusional he is) is not needed to make us hate the character. It was 20 chapters ago roughly, but we didn't need a reminder.

Alex

His family will be fine (unless they do sth stupid). Kefiras parents seem like reasonable people. Though the magistrate will probably face some consequences, using his position for personal gain.

Maakolo

I find it interesting how culture determines if the law matters. Say the imperial family had less power in this situation. That would cause the law to not matter as much while the actions of clans would not be nearly as temperate.

Maakolo

Long term, idk, but short term both him and his family are gonna get ran through.

Maakolo

What are you talking about? We just went througg how many chapters of two military campaigns and two chapters of political intrigue is suddenly it dragging on too far? The main thing that makes novels interesting are the relationships between people, politics is all about that. Though I do fibd the narrative voice strange when politics comes up. Like the narrator is being smug and sarcastic.

Magisch

Unlucky Oryn, he doesn't even know how fucked he is, and how long term fucked his whole family is.

eroth

I love the story and I've always enjoyed reading it, but there are times where I feel like the name should be changed to Soul of the Noble or Politician. Reivyn's background obviously makes him embroiled in politics, but sometimes it just drags on. It's not always bad and a lot of fun stuff, but whenever there's politics involving nobles that are obviously delusional or who obviously don't know who Reivyn really is, getting their points of view as almost an entire chapter feels kind of like 'fluff'. We the reader know, Reivyn knows, Kefira knows, her parents know, basically EVERYONE besides the point of view knows that they are dead men walking, figuratively. But I'm probably biased because I think anything involving nobility and 'commoner' conflicts is terribly boring and overplayed. It's interesting when there's another reason or point of view like when Reivyn was conscripted and interacted with others in an amicable manner because of his military background, but I truly despise most of the other types of noble<->commoner interactions. No offense is meant by any of this, just my point of view.


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