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Chapter 220 - Changing of the Guard

🕑 Added 2023-04-23 03:10:23 +0000 UTC

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BubblyGhost

Some good reading, glad to be back!

Derek Walker

Unless there’s petty parent/politics drama in the capital, I would say maybe 1 run of Refix’s dungeon then they should go to a tier 5 region and progressively work there way to Vyrias sect. Wispan has nothing to offer them, so it’s time to leave.

Baconwargod

I actually hope we get a dungeon run arc next with reivyn ,kefira ,and his old friends running all the dungeons in Wispan. I think that would be fun because we have been to war a lot recently. Could even have the suspicious group tag along for some added tension.

Hamfist

I'd like to see a bit more from the other side as well. I'd love to read something from the POV of the archer that Reivyn wounded in the fight. Both that he was wounded by a tier 3 and that his attack on the wall was stopped cold by Reivyn's unit.

Megabadman

hopefully they arrive to the capital safely an ambush at this point in the story is meaningless. Unless Kyfe wants to kill off someone, or introduce a specific character on the enemy side. What I hoping for is Mercenary company arrives to capital then find out Prince Allik and his forces died fighting off the enemy.

Baconwargod

I mean the qi reinforcement mixed with his bloodlust aura has gotta be close. What do you wanna bet he transcends light and darkness to kill a bunch of tier 5s?

Baconwargod

Would be cool to see what it’s like to be on the bloodlust’s end of the aura. When they get ambushed I wonder if we will see it from the attackers pov as they shit themselves.

Cody Dennis

I dont think it would happen on the trip but remember Aeriella is still ouf there.

seth dauer

I think they will make a clean getaway. People are predicting an ambush or something, and yeah if the enemy had spies or was interested in Reivyn. But they don't know that he was the system event. Only that they are a good Merc company.

Maakolo

Yeah, realistic campaigns are easy to get boring since theyre fundamentally mostly boring irl. Perhaps it would be better if the reader cared more about the stakes of the war, and main characters daily life went on between the scenes? Edit: Though, to make it clear, I think this arc had a good length. It just feels longer for us who have to wait several days between chapters. The normal reader will breeze through this part of the story.

Maakolo

Thanks for the chapter! No offence, but please look up the difference between "affect" and "effect".

Nick Nicholson

Honestly I’m relieved, this war arc was getting old.

Derek Walker

Since it’s likely they are ambushed, thinking this is where Refix makes a last stand so they can escape back to the capital… does this become where reivyn unlocks the divine skill: Super Saiyan

Max Becker

I'd don't now why but I hope they can go cleanly

Joshua LaBarge

Ah, I see an unfortunate event coming along. TYFTC

NJ Reed

Thanks for the chap

Baconwargod

Boomer Refix is great. Something bad is most definitely happening either tonight or when they escort the conscripts.

SodaBoBomb

I mean...he's been calling her mom mother for a minute so it's not that out of character

Derek Walker

"my father and brother-in-law" reivyn is a troll, unless the wedding happened off-screen...

Justin Drake

TYFTC

Derek Walker

disaster is about to strike...

Captdeth

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