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Chapter 164 - Meetings

🕑 Added 2022-11-25 23:47:02 +0000 UTC

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Joey McGowan

Welp, at least you're cutting short that godawful tropey misunderstanding thing. Gotta be one of my most hated things to see in fiction. Sometimes its mildly amusing but 99% of the time its shit.

Bacon Sir

Feels incredibly forced that these characters, who seem to be talking about Reivyn 90% of the time we see them, suddenly don't mention it at all when it actually matters. There's no reason Ame wouldn't ask someone who clearly has connections to the Academy about Rei, and Rei has literally mentioned his twin flower-crown-making sisters to Fira before. THEN BOTH PARTIES MENTION HIM THE SECOND THEY SEPARATE, UNHEARD BY THE LITERAL SUPERHUMANS LESS THAN 20-30 FEET AWAY THROUGH WOOD. Very irritating, does not feel natural at all.


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