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Chapter 171 - Spark

🕑 Added 2022-12-06 16:55:26 +0000 UTC

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BigFun

Honestly I'm more looking forward to the part where they have to explain exactly how Kefira taught Reivyn, and how that exact same method might not work quite as well with Mom. Bonus points for additional motherly concern about babies... Hahaha

Derek Walker

Thought it about a little more, and if he really is going to learn some wild magic stuff, it will very likely come from Rupert. Magus isn’t his official class, but he may have had it previously. Also he’s nearly as strong as Refix which makes him a good deal stronger than Ameliyn and as headmaster he has access to nearly unlimited knowledge.

Derek Walker

This would actually make Ameliyn more impressive, but if Ameliyn has any advanced techniques they are likely ones she created on her own. She had to flee the empire when she was 11 or 12 so I don’t think she had time to learn much there, which she even admits herself.

BigFun

Completely unrelated to the fight series, which is looking like tons of fun, I'm looking forward to some Mom & magic time. Clearly Mom knows some cool advanced techniques from her empire like Kefira did from hers. I'm very interested in seeing how they stack up and if the combination of the learning brings something greater than either one alone. Obviously some of the techniques will be different... more clothing on and less physical contact... otherwise that would get pretty weird pretty fast.... lol

David Bean

I hope Refix takes him to train in that dungeon they have access to. Don’t want to neglect magic and armed fighting.

OlivierA

They might be able to make things for your gym <- here comes the Flowers Crown of the Beefcake.

mr. redd

Yes sir!!

Alex

He has a mythic class, so myth and legend is appropriate.

Ocean Breeze

Regardless of your thoughts on it, the chapter begins with an AN stating that it is undergoing a rewrite. So I am wondering what the status of it is.

Greg Szarko

Great chapter

Derek Walker

It’s probably coming soon, but I hope we get some Ameliyn training time too shortly.

Derek Walker

It depends on how into this genre you are… if you read a lot of stories like this one, ch. 3 is like, well that’s convenient I learned everything I need to know for now in one chapter. If you’re not, then you’re like why is this mom explaining all of this to her like 16 month old son, and then you’re like I don’t like the info dump either. Being in the former group, I thought it was fine but i understand why people new to the genre get a little turned off by it

Steven

What’s wrong with chapter 3, I am on the other side. I think it was really well written and really enjoyed that chapter.

Nick

Tftc

Kyfe

I'm trying, lol.

Jonathan Robichaux

Is kyfe on a real sleep schedule!?

Ocean Breeze

Hey Kyfe. What's the status of the rewrite of chapter 3? I recommended this story to a friend, but he was very put off by that chapter. It's honestly pretty poorly done, and I expect that you probably lose a lot of readers there. (I'm not trying to be insulting. I love your writing. The intent of this is constructive criticism.) I encouraged my friend to keep going, since it gets better, but most potential readers don't have that.

NJ Reed

Thanks for the chapter

Kyfe

Just a different way of saying Level up.

Derek Walker

Quick question, when he says Iron Will is about to rank up, does that mean increase a level, or cross a threshold. Both mental fortitude (48) and iron will (22) were close to thresholds last time we saw so the meaning could go either way.


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