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Chapter 106 - Commission

🕑 Added 2022-08-25 22:03:24 +0000 UTC

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Lommel

It's completely normal to let one's future wife know such details about oneself... :)

Scott Turner

Thanks for the chapter, really good. One point I’m not sure if the family exposition should be here in the story. Personally it feels a bit over share for knowing each other for a short period of time. It would be better if the discussion was more forced out of them, like the pending appearance of an older sibling (if that’s the way the story is going). To me just feel more realistic than just sharing this information even if reivyn hasn’t been burned yet with his over sharing.

Markus Iversen

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MurderByNumbers

You're royalty. I've known you for a week. I'm millions of miles from home. Want to go on a trip? Romance being injected into this genre is almost never a good thing. At best it's an endless chain of fluff side quests. I know the author has made some comments about some like it, some don't etc... At this point some people will re-sub regardless of what the author does. Then it's between the shippers and non shippers. The shippers who have read up to this point clearly enjoyed the story without the relationship side quest fluff. They would stay even without a relationship. So all that's left is alienating people who don't like it. Personally I liked the story before the relationship. Now almost every chapter has a significant portion that is 'meh' to me. I don't like subbing for feelings of 'meh'. Not meant to discourage the author from writing what they want. Just a paying reader expressing their personal opinion of the topic and recent trend. The last half of the chapter however I thoroughly enjoyed.

SUlex

I guess that explains it then 😅

Kyfe

She wasn't being serious. She kept teasing him over and over the whole conversation. She even commented that he was being easy to tease.

E

Great chapter. Super hyped hearing his badass profile and seeing people suitably impressed with it

SUlex

Great chapter! I really liked the pace and that Reivyn is back at the front, this time even in command. Very nice development. On the other hand Fira felt a bit too desperate this chapter. Especially this comment from her after they went into her room: ‘“Well, thank you for your consideration of Sera, but what about your consideration for me?" Fira quirked an eyebrow.’ Makes her feel way too horny. (If this is meant as a joke it flew over my head, sorry). I thought of her as a very strong and independent love interest before and a bit as fallen off this chapter. I have no real issue with the pace of the relationship, some parts just felt like Fira has a too huge crush on him. She should make him work for it, without making it a stupid cat and mouse game.

Guilherme Paschoaletto

He learns a skill called Haman, which is assumed to be the standard Human language of the Realm (maybe other Realms as well, since masked guy could talk with him and the prince)

Whitestag

Thanks for the chapter! I can’t remember if it was addressed in another chapter earlier in this arc but how do languages work in this realm? Is it a realm unified language? because after travelling 10 million miles it’s got to change enough that he can’t talk with people. Just a thought I had while reading the chapter and couldn’t remember if it had been addressed at some point. I’m a bit late on this question already quite a few chapters into the arc. Thanks

at first i thought he got transported so far away that he ended up in a land of dwarf humans, but i never expected that it was because of his bloodline. how tall is reivyn now? around 2 meters?

Meudon

The Party sate around the tavern table -> the Party sat around the tavern table

Robert Apgar

Probably in English maybe it would make sense to italic or something Gun?

Robert Apgar

Idk why everyone is set on champion, he has done literally so much grinding and gained so many stats since he saw that class requirement. It is pretty up in the air what he can get at this point and the rarity is also not set in stone.

Starved Consumer

How the hell is there a word for "gun" in Haman? It's supposed to be a completely separate language and technology hasn't advanced to the point where it's been invented yet? Unless Reivyn simply said "gun" in English


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