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Chapter 94 - Abysmal Situation

🕑 Added 2022-08-10 03:13:42 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Lol..its all fine. We can all chillax. did no one go and inspect the gate ?

Quyan640

Well, the bad guy said the reason for his monologuing was to push the mc and those he tell to become stronger in order to become a greater stepping stone, a.k.a likely experience, for his subordinates. Which we know will absolutely have the opposite effect; the mc will become stronger but won’t lose to his subordinates, instead, getting stronger through them.

nfi42

The mental manipulation doesn't really bother me as long at is something that can be overcome. The bad guy monologue is just bad. Really bad. imho, it would read better as the prince and the mc opening the door, and then completely remove the bad guy monologue. As the bad guy doesn't need the mc, then the monologue serves no purpose. Just have the mc black out in pain and pass out, and leave it as a mystery for the reader.

Markus Iversen

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Stephen

Don't get me wrong I love this book I just hope this is resolved sooner rather than later.

Stephen

The problem now is that it seems like he spared.him because he's not done manipulating his fate and needs him for something else, which would be be incredibly annoying, making the story seen completely pointless.

Lommel

I did not read it but when I read here that there is "fate manipulation" then that makes me lose interest completely and rapidly. I will NOT read any stories where MC is not a free agent. Slavery, mind control - and now "fate control". What's the point? If that is the story, choose the person who IS a free agent as the MC, and not the unfree dependent.

LordDark

Im just gonna drop after this.

Noveus

I'd just like clarification on why the parents followers that went into the dungeon with him didn't just either go back in themselves when he didn't show up the next day or lead his parents in as I don't think there is anything stopping that?

Zaeron

I guess to be honest I have been waiting for the shounen anime style powerup for Reivyn that lets him share his stupid high growth rate with his friends in a way that lets them keep up, because otherwise I guess the last 30 chapters of mostly-slice-of-life feel kind of wasted yeah. I figured his tier 3 class was going to be some kind of mage/leader thing that shared his growth rate or helped buff lower tier party members or something. But yeah, your point makes sense too.

PlasmaticPi

In regards to his friends and stuff I don't think them not doing anything is Reivyn's fault so much as the authors fault. I mean seriously its being repeated over and over how they aren't as good as Reivyn and he will leave them behind eventually. Its seriously so stupid. I mean what's even the point of building them up at all, which hasn't even been done well either, if they are just gonna basically be discarded or something eventually anyways?

Blaublue

Lol

Cirex123

i too make angry noises UHUHUhUhHU. Wouldve been a nice twist if Reivyns previous life breaks the fate powers and frees him from control, rather than the villain just accepting his refusal.

Zaeron

I will say I don't necessarily agree that fate manipulation is a terrible power for a bad guy to have, but I do think the attitude of Reivyn's friends, allies and family really sucks here. Part of the fun of watching a protagonist build a group of allies is having them actually support him and help him out - and yet, none of them have? His mom and dad are just like "oh well guess he'll miss some school or whatever no big deal" even though we've spent literally 20+ chapters delaying our growth because being forcibly graduated from the school is really important for some reason. It kind of feels like you've forgotten that people other than the protagonist and his direct enemies can do stuff here - like, yes, Reivyn didn't personally tell anyone "hey yo I'm gonna go stick my dick in this giant door I found", but at the same time, they know enough to know he got lost in the dungeon. You could have showed us his friends frantically working to get stronger, pushing themselves to overcome the last floor of the dungeon and trying to find some way to open the giant magic door that Reivyn, being Reivyn, obviously messed around with. You could have shown us his mom and dad trying to intervene and being prevented in some way. Instead it really just comes off like nobody gives a shit. What's the point of Reivyn building up all these allies and training them and teaching them and helping them get stronger if the moment he disappears, they all just become weeping children in his absence? This doesn't make me feel like Reivyn is strong or a good leader or inspiring to his team, it makes it feel like nobody actually gives a real fuck about him.


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