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Chapter 90 - Triple Threat

🕑 Added 2022-08-03 19:35:25 +0000 UTC

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Eyke

"all to well" --> "all too well"

Obran

Triple Threat. Does this mean Reivyn has Ranger, Special Forces, and Airborn tabs?

Leonard Marchant

Just because something is technically correct doesn't make it the best option. Imo. Especially in writing.

Starved Consumer

Both are uses are actually correct, counterintuitive as that may be.

Major Kluck

Oh snap. Is he finally going to challenge himself again? O.O I’m excited! Building up story is fine, but the numbers going higher is the real reason I’m here. :D

Robert Apgar

Since there was a similar problem before he got iunity to it he should know all the symptoms.

Leonard Marchant

Yeah, it should be clear to him after they were affected but he was not

LordDark

He really really should not seem so ignorant about this.

Justin Drake

TYFTC

Leonard Marchant

I think you waited too long to have Reivyn think about the weird environment of the third floor being abyss mana. I'd recommend starting that line of though almost as soon as the other party members mentioned discomfort.

Leonard Marchant

After the galwit convo - "could care less" should be "couldn't care less"

PrimordialJay

Thank you for the chapter btw. I am really impressed that it came out so early after last night's was delayed. Do you have some kind of time dilation chamber? I hope you are getting enough sleep!

Starved Consumer

That Revenant skill of being able to instantly move towards someone's location when they're out of sight would fit Teilon. Like, perfectly. He should learn something similar.

Fullfirewall

I need an IV drip of this story. I need more. Thanks for the chapter!

Luciaron

Is there a discord for this story? It seems like he could solo the third floor, maybe bit the boss, as long as his parents team helped him only face so many at once.


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