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Chapter 89 - Advance Effort

🕑 Added 2022-08-03 06:36:17 +0000 UTC

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Chrisbirdie

Didnt his parents say they will unlock his bloodline before he enters the revenant dungeon again?

Eyke

"The five friends laughed..." --> "The six friends laughed..."

Kyfe

Almost 8, so almost 11 Earth years.

SpaceGoddess76

How old are Reivyn’s sisters?

Kyfe

For the ages at the bottom? No, Refix is older.

John O'Connor

Are Refix and Ameliyns reversed?

Joshua LaBarge

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Obran

Unless he's a furry.

Joshua LaBarge

Eighth paragraph, explore in my face --> explode

Joshua LaBarge

Second paragraph, furry and pain --> fury and pain

Kyfe

I replied in another comment, I'm going to go over it right before he descends to the third floor.

Stephen Pearson

I'm a bit surprised there wasn't anything about his bloodline being unlocked, which was planned for immediately before going back to the dungeon. It will be the biggest increase in stats so far, by a lot, and answer a bunch of questions. Can it be upgraded more than once / continue to be used to prevent level increases? Does it increase Akashic record level? Does it give him his mom's 3 tier 4 affinities?

Timothy Alexander

I like the idea of making maturity more clear, but I can see this getting confusing fast if the same notation is used to show 'young' people's maturity *and* 'old' people's looks

Kyfe

Ok. I'll modify it.

Tim Johnson

Ok gotcha, makes more sense when you put it that way. Just the description at the end of this chapter was a little confusing.

Kyfe

No, for the older people, maturity level doesn't really need a modifier, so the age in parentheses is their apparent age. If someone just looks at them, they look 22. If you'll remember, when Melissa first visited his family, she thought Refix was Reivyn's older brother when she first saw him.

Tim Johnson

With your explanation of the ages, Refix and Ameilyn should both be mid to late forties in earth years, but you're saying they are effectively college seniors as a maturity level?

Kyfe

Thanks, fixed.

Kyfe

Thanks, fixed.

Jeff Gaebler

"I'm more used to having hate from monsters directed at me, so having something explore in my face that doesn't hurt was easier to get used to," Melissa said with a grin. "You'll do better after you spend some more time practicing your defensive combat." She reached out and took Teilon's hand in her own, giving it an encouraging squeeze. Melissa should be Kimberly right?

Jachin Nelson

There is an error just after the fight. When the group is teasing Telion, it should be Kimberly grabbing his hand, however Mellissa is written

Jonathan Robichaux

I've been wondering. What's the life expectancy of the average person?


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