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Chapter 98 - Sticky Situation

🕑 Added 2022-08-16 00:10:34 +0000 UTC

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Alex

Really? I am gonna Google that. I somehow always thought all land animals breathe somehow. This sounds super interesting :)

dethrothes

I like that it goes on the back burner sometimes. Shows the author cares more about the story. I’ve read so many litrpgs where they put the status page so often it serves as fluff for word count.

jumbosauce

I think the years have 16 months where he lives, so he's really a teenager by our standards anyway. Could be wrong about that but I think I remember seeing a note about it. But yeah, the point stands

Obran

I don’t want to be that guy, but I want to point out that spiders don’t have diaphragms in their lungs, so they don’t breath in or out. Air just circulates passively.

Leonard Marchant

Good point

Mr. Finch

He never saw a beast or monster big enough to cause gales just by breathing and he is just 13 jears old Give him some slack opposed to US he doesnt read storrys about phantasmal beasts for fun he lives in this World and doesnt want to Die jet So sorry when he is okupied with other Things than pondering why the airflow changrs

Leonard Marchant

I know I'm going to sound like a broken record, but at the point where the breeze changes directions, Reivyn should at least consider that it could be breathing. I type this without having read past "fetid stink".

Markus Iversen

Tyftc

Bilal Williams

This was the most exciting chapter in a long time. I got a chill or two.

TheeGreenBean

Especially considering he took a half hour break. Considering the situation he’s in he should be looking at all the tools he has available to get him out of the situation. Maybe it could be excused by him being in a very tense situation, but it’s a bit out of character

Heidi16

Exciting chapter!!!

William Johnson

Reivyn's making friends and influencing people! Thanks for the chapter!

SodaBoBomb

Ah man I keep devouring these chapters as they come out and then just sitting here like...next please! Lol thanks for the chapter

Azulmar

Ha! Got a nice Quantum Leap flashback at the end ;p

Justin Drake

TYFTC! ... his sneaking gate and... I believe "gate" in this context is supposed to be "gait"

Kyfe

He mentioned how he didn't feel any different other than feeling great and clear headed. I'll go in and add that in there before the next chapter. Sometimes I get caught up in writing the story and the Status goes on the back burner. But you're right, he should have looked at it already.

Alex R

He got an update to his bloodline and we have yet to see it in the last two chapters, he absolutely should be looking at that.

Warior1411

Come on man! No status update? Seriously?


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