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Chapter 67 - Admission of Luck

🕑 Added 2022-07-03 21:41:33 +0000 UTC

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Manimal

Maybe it's more common knowledge than people think. Though, his parents also revealed to his 2 friends that they have a monstrous HP and regeneration pool... I'm not sure what to think of that.

Delakar

@Kyfe I've got a literary critique for you. I noticed a couple times in this chapter that when Reivyn was talking about himself and his group occasionally he would say "I and 'names/noun'." Generally you should always put others before the perspective i.e. my friends and I.. However it is completely acceptable to break this rule with character speech as improper spelling, grammar, and sentences structure can add flavor and character to the speaker.

thkiw

ohhh, he revealed some pretty background information. nobody should know about the celestial affinity. doesn't take much to connect the dots... of course, his roommate shouldn't also, but somebody else might...


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