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DITW 12-16: More Good Thereof Shall Spring

🕑 Added 2024-01-13 23:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Pete

Interesting scene. I'm not clear on whether Kimmy wanted Josh to suck it, but it seems she clearly would love to see him humiliated like that. She seemed desperate not to miss it, and eager to work the blindfold off. And Josh, for his part, certainly took a long time to choose not to. Had Kimmy told him to, would he have complied?

Bill F Protagoras

Naturally KT could rip asunder the veil of Maya and let us really see the enormity inside Kimmy's mind... But, when she is getting the enormity of Devlin slowly and agonizingly fucked into her, while being watched by some slight disturbingly familiar presence would it be an appropriate occasion to do so? Wait isn't that? As the screaming ecstasy floods her head and hot seed gushes into her fornix... she groans and realizes, yes, it is! Yet, anyhow she clenches her thighs and cunt spasmodically as she rides the torrid spurts of the devil's unrelenting flood of semen till they let up...

Bill F Protagoras

And yes I am, as some of you might say... spitballin'. Though judging from KT's past writing she does have "Unhand me greybeard loon..." "Look on these works ye mighty..." and "Beware! Beware! His flashing eyes, his floating hair! Weave a circle round him thrice, And close your eyes with holy dread For he on honey-dew hath fed, And drunk the milk of Paradise" tendencies, and now there's Milton too!

Bill F Protagoras

Yes... I am skirting around the title of this instalment because it could involve a considerable span of time, and maybe even sacrifice!

Bill F Protagoras

My fear is what terrible occurrence is about to put the cat amongst the pigeons, one at least being Kimmy, who appears to be about to become an unrepentant recently ravished devil's drab. And what new depths of character will this require from the object of manchild Devlin's unrestricted venom! With whom the drab used to be all lovey-dovey... but not so much since said obiect has seen she has all the whilst being flying false colours!

Bill F Protagoras

Not just Wyatt's tribute to his ex, but also Jesus words to Magdalen when she bumped into him after his rising from the tomb... in the latter case it could frivolously be translated as "Don't be clingy", in the former ' No touchie-feelie...Beware of Henry VllI.'

Donkatsu

Now that KT has turned her second derivative positive wrt output, the big question is whether the story ends before we run out of superlatives to describe it. Stupid predictions, unlikely to all come true {more likely, none of them - ed.}: Josh has something up his sleeve for Devlin (thanks, Captain Obvious); Devlin has more tricks up his ass (since he has no sleeves at the moment) for Kimmy and, especially, Josh; Both Devlin and Josh know about Kimmy's primigravida condition; Kimmy regroups a little, and gains back a bit of ground on Josh, but not Devlin, but only after some fatal bad-mouthing of Josh's AA; Karina and Amy come in for cameos at the end and one of them plays a critical role - one of them is Chekhov's gun.

Bill F Protagoras

I wouldn't go so far as that... but at the very least she owes him an explanation for her behaviour and at times the awful treatment she has shown him... if she really cares for him... and her child... and has hopes of reconciliation... Nonetheless, he like Pete and Geoff will always be there for his wife whether he loses her or not... he has uncommon decency.

Andrew Mellein

You’re correct about the child part! Books by KT such as “ Learning Lessons” addressed this issue such as Pete raising another man’s baby! The problem is if it’s Devlins child I think it would be much harder for Josh to do that. As he was his High school bully and Kimmy lied and cheated behind his back multiple times. Kimmy even though she is doing this sexual act for Josh has also yet to ask for forgiveness. Like I said it’s possible Josh forgives Kimmy and the series ends in HEA. I think Kimmy would have to pay penitence for the rest of her life to Josh for her transgressions!

Bill F Protagoras

I mainly agree with you but I don't think Josh is disgusted, I think he is waiting for something on Kimmy's part... also he's playing his own cards. I think there are accounts pending before there will be any flatlining. As for Hyun, l think she is a good person, and no fool. In certain circumstances I think she has potential as an ally for Josh. She clearly gives priority to family. Is it that important whose child it is? Throughout a vast amount of history the saying it's a wise child who knows it's own father has had real resonance. I think you'll find the uncertainty of who was Odie's dad was much more protracted, and Geoff's love of her never seemed to vary one iota! You're right about Kimmy's lying but I'm not so sure about comparative timelines. The situation is pretty dire and I think we will all agree that Kimmy's obdurate lying is the heart of the matter. I have no idea how things will turn out, but it doesn't have to be so terrible as the majority expect. I'm personally no friend of people deserving to suffer for their mistakes without some context... and even then there's reasonable doubt!

Andrew Mellein

Thank God! Josh held his own this chapter and didn't suck Devlin's cock! I get the feeling that Josh is totally disgusted with Kimmy. I wouldn't be surprised if he didn't give her penitence and went back on his word. I think Kimmy is trying to please Josh in this situation but her raging sexuality is getting in her way. However as much as she is trying to please Josh by doing this act. We have ten preceding books where she gaslighted, manipulated, and screwed around behind Josh's back! Not to mention she is pregnant with either man's baby. And don't forget Hyun! I think this a marriage that is going to sadly flatline! It would probably depend on how forgiving Josh is and if the baby is his. In "Cherry Blossoms" same thing happened but it turned out alright as Geoff was the father of both children! Difference is that this was a more prolonged affair and KImmy lied every step of the way. So cant wait for next chapter KT. Your cooking!

Bill F Protagoras

Also Devlin has yet to achieve completion! If you know what I mean... y'know, multiple orgasms, and a plausible approximation to a 'gallon' of seed.

Bill F Protagoras

Though I could be wrong... Time alone will tell... KT works in a mysterious way... but she sure works!

Bill F Protagoras

Really? We have even less knowledge of what Kimmy thinks, than what Josh thinks... She usually only presents behaviour veiled with disingenuousness, she is a behaviourist's wet dream/nightmare. When Kimmy gazes into the abyss, the abyss tries really hard not to blink. Josh never said he would absolve her sins... he's a modest man, but he's " a man for a' that." Which his cheating wife and vainglorious bully have yet to learn... Kimmy's opacity is yet to have a light shine on it!

Bill F Protagoras

“That’s it, huh? That’s what Josh gives you? I know you need more than that. Do you want more kimmy?” Errata Capital K!

Kat

This was a great chapter, KT. Devlin is controlling both of them, but it seems like he has a greater hold on Kimmy than Josh in this chapter. He’s not just bullying Josh, but he’s doing it to Kimmy, too. Kimmy has lost all control of this situation. Much is being revealed about her affair in her actions with Devlin. After this is over, and especially when he finds out she’s pregnant, I don’t know how Josh will be able to keep his word to Kimmy about absolving her from her sins. He told her the sin is penitence, and she’ll be absolved and he won’t question her about anything she did in the past. But now he has undeniable proof that she did this for herself, not for him.

Bill F Protagoras

"Did it matter? There had been a time he didn’t watch, and she spread her legs for Devlin, regardless." Lovely ironic word play.

Bill F Protagoras

I love that Josh sees his wife as wretched, it only amplifies the extent of his acuity... and confirms my opinion of your own.

Bill F Protagoras

Thanks for giving us further insight into the world that is Josh!

Bill F Protagoras

KT, your ambition has yet to exceed your reach... and I trust never will.

Bill F Protagoras

Sorry, Mike. You obviously consider each book a chapter... and there is 'no' accepted terminology... and when I re-read it I understood exactly what you meant... mea culpa, mea culpa, mea maxima culpa! All the blood must've drained out of my head for some unknown reason.

Bill F Protagoras

To have sucked his dick would have been a formal supine admission of inferiority... it would have been a lie... Kimmy is the mendacious mistress, not Josh. Josh knows lies are a powerful currency not to be squandered lightly...

Bill F Protagoras

Final chapter... what has she been whispering, preciousssss?

Mike Monroe

Delvin is definitely who he is.. that is for sure!! Is he better though??? Does he have a big one ..yes...but is he better than Josh??? At this moment he is doing this because Josh is allowing it . It had been despicable what he and Kimmy have done behind Josh's back. The fallout has not yet been decided by Josh. I am glad that Josh had not lowered himself by sucking Delvin.. for me he would have lost some much by doing that...That would be way to far down the rabbit hole. Realistically he is a bit of shore at the moment...KT what a masterpiece of a final chapter you have spun so far!!! I still hope for a victorious Josh in some manner...This is definitely a page turner leaving you wanting more and more!

Bill F Protagoras

Brava maestra! Hipsters may click their fingers in the privacy of their own homes...

Bill F Protagoras

"Graven in diamonds with letters plain, There is written her fair neck round about, "Noli me tangere", for Caesar's I am And wild for to hold, though I seem tame."

Bill F Protagoras

"Better enough he could seduce a man’s wife, raise the sexual temperature until he could go deeper and deeper still, whispering sweet-nothings and offering sweet-somethings until he had that man’s wife on a bed, showing that man—in person—what it looked like when your wife got better." The last word? I think it only fair that when you dance with the devil you should get to choose the tune...

Bill F Protagoras

"The only way out was through." Disgustingly toothsome! Gourmand!

Bill F Protagoras

"She rolled with his direction, swinging one long, gorgeous leg over the other and sticking her behind back toward Devlin, exposing her sex and anus, her legs sandwiching a perfect frame of Kimmy’s most personal space." Frameable!

Bill F Protagoras

"He rose to stand above the bed, his shadow casting across Kimmy’s legs and up over her tummy. It looked like a painting. He sat down on the chair again and leaned forward." Did Josh just throw shade on Devlin's fiendishness ? Or is KT foreshadowing? Also Devlin's condescension to Kimmy rivals hers towards her cuckold.

Bill F Protagoras

“Kimmy, you know if you give me commands, I’m just going to do the opposite. I’ll tease this little water park between your thighs all afternoon, till the lines have dwindled and the parking lot is empty. I’ll do it just to watch you suffer.” What an epic metaphor from such sullying lips! Brava! And BTW Mr Stone childish!

Bill F Protagoras

“Stop fucking around.” Rebelious! You are covering most of the basest bases in this rigorous episode. "A pose of shame."

Bill F Protagoras

" Dead, but shaking her head in what Josh could only assume was some sort of profound regret. She’d trusted the devil, and the devil did devilish things." Subjugating!

Bill F Protagoras

"Her own dark desire. Out of control like the way he loved to have control removed. Under Devlin’s thumb. Under Devlin’s mighty sexual tool. " Crushing!

Bill F Protagoras

"Everything he said had meaning or intent unknown to you, meant to fester later like his words were rusty nails in barefoot summer." Devastating!

Bill F Protagoras

The proceedings... someone must have slandered Josh Waters, for one morning, without doing anything wrong he found himself guilty. Or was it Joseph K? And was it arrested?

Bill F Protagoras

I knew it... You're killing me... Bursting the grape... "Full of doubt I stand, Whether I should repent me now of sin..."* Where the fuck did I leave that rib? Or am I myself... the rib? *That's the part of the text I choose to focus on.

Bill F Protagoras

“Look at her struggle, look at her wanting to know, wanting to know it all, wanting to have it all." What a shocking insight from Devlin... but give him his due, he does know how to fuck people over. Just take a shufti behind us, or take a butcher's 'ook?


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