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Summer Swap 6-3

🕑 Added 2023-05-17 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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L_S87

I get it. I had expectations of things being, at least somewhat, resolved through that conversation due to where it seemed to be headed after the first two chapters. I can see why Chey would not immediately know what all this means for her, or what she wants to do with it, other than to "try harder" as she puts it and not give up because she wants something more from this experience, even if she doesn't know exactly what that is or how it will take shape. Plus your complicated scenario is further complicated x 4 with Byron having fears but not giving voice to them, so it all ends up being a bunch of words where not much is really said because no one wants to put themselves out there that far. Between Byron implying that Chey wants intimacy with Cody as some sort of "payback" after watching him and Carla and Chey dancing around his questions with no real answers, i think complicated might even be selling it short!

KT Morrison

We'll see what happens, lol! Chey is complicated, and what she witnessed is even more complicated. Complicated action meets complicated perception of a complicated woman = complicated response to the power of 3.

Githa Datadin

I missed the same, but i think KT did it for a reason. What dit Chey expect with Cody. That he was exclusive to her? :S

L_S87

Uh oh. Someone's in trouble! Though not sure what Scar expected. She knew Chey had a rough night, and has complicated feelings regarding Cody, so Chey being miffed seems obvious. It happened in the moment, but kind of a shitty thing to do to your best friend, given the circumstances. On a side note, KT, I liked the switch to Chey's perspective for the conclusion of their conversation, but.... It felt half done, incomplete. Missing a true conclusion. I'm sure this was done for a reason, but the lack of emotion from Chey, where she talks about pain and how hard it was to watch in the prior chapter.... It just suddenly disappears, she doesn't even really think about it here. Nor does she think of the exhibitionist aspect that was brought up as well or her intentions with Cody. I think maybe this was not to spoil future events? It just comes off as partially done because so much that was implied before suddenly goes missing. Just wanted to pick your brain on the reasoning behind that. Or maybe I'm just completely off base and seeing issues where there are none.


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