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Devil In The Waters, Book 6, Chapter 9 (part 2)

🕑 Added 2020-11-01 00:00:01 +0000 UTC

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CSH

Yeah, how do you miss that exactly? She was so wound up she didn’t even notice he pulled out and shot on her? Must not have been wound up over him then, huh?

CSH

If your point is that the characters are not admirable but are realistically drawn then I agree. I personally like the way the characters are developed. I think it’s great to have characters we care about doing foolish and self destructive things just like real people. I still think Josh is the hardest character to write. He’s too smart and too insecure not to realize the danger and he’s coming off as a little too gullible at the moment. Kimmy’s character is perfect. Though Kimmy is a bitch, her love for Josh comes through clearly. Josh thinks he’s using Kimmy while she uses him. Kimmy thinks she’s manipulating Devlin while he manipulates her. Devlin is still the mystery character here. At some point, the idea of Devlin as tool of Kimmy will disintegrate and he will reassert himself and that will work a real transformation. Of course it’s a house of cards that will eventually collapse. Meanwhile I’m enjoying a story that is unique in many respects.

DavidnDaria

They're really all fools. These three man characters are absolutely not worth the floating shit that takes more than one flush to have them go down the drain. (And that's a tribute to KT that such feelings come to the fore.) Devlin's an man-child. Kimmy is simply a bitch. Josh is just gullible. Kimmy has him so wound, he'd be easy to convince that the world was flat. So, who gets hurt here? Does it matter?

Mike Monroe

Wow...He doesnt even know what he is agreeing to. He not picking up that his wife doesnt want to be just with him...where the fun in that? Let make him buy us a steak..you going to drink whiskeys...Really how lost is he..He has been setup...and he is too gullible to realize it. Well this boring task done ..sex with husband...now for the real fun...this is just the Cayman...what happens here stays here..wink wink..Sike..you fool JOSH!!! Prepare for whote splashes on your knocked out drunk face!! The amount of trust he has in his wife...his undoing...

JamesIsAsleep

"Did you come?" from Kimmy is very telling to me, haha, considering the theatrics involved in their lovemaking's finale. Makes you think how much Kimmy was thinking of Josh or just thinking about the whole situation ... I like what's building, can't wait for it! Dinner tonight sounds lovely, haha.

Donkatsu

Oh, Josh, you're such a tool!

Chinookfan72

gotta love an unexpected chapter.. Thanks for the Halloween gift KT.. This book is the best Kimmy book ye5 and I hope this book bucks the trend and goes long.


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