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Devil In The Waters, Book 7, Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2020-12-02 01:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Chinookfan72

i am, hope all is well and also hoping we get the next chapter soon.

BNR

Anyone here worried for KT? We haven't heard anything all year! (but seriously I hope you are OK!!!)

Mark Dennison

Come on Kimmy dont be the gutter trash wife villian, be the heroine and give us someone in this book to root for before it is too late as jush has caved already and gone from an inteligent underdog to a simpering tool and Devlin is the evil bastard protaganist we need a team to root for or what is the point. Sure show us the darker side and be a cuckoldress but turn it round from the knife edge you are on and show us all what you arw made of darkness but also light, dominant but loving and give us some honesty so we have just one person to admire in this tryst. Josh has sunk but you hold the key to the continued dynamic of must read rather than ending in a cut and slash of characters no one can any longer care about.

Mark Dennison

I hope that Kimmy will take charge now that she has dicovered her confidency and that she will control the situation thus getting what she wants while protecting josh and thier marriage at rhe same time. I think it would be a refreshing change to see a dominant cuckoldress with a heart and a sinceer love for her husband. I believe her dominence with josh coupled with her fierce protective nature of thier love could also ad some kinky elements if she was given the controlling hand.

Mike Monroe

Its good...i read all 5...he let me review a advance copy of book 5...He and Kirsten McCurran are some of my favorites besides KT

RCH

I'll check it out. I like Kenny's stuff just haven't pulled the trigger on that series yet.

Mike Monroe

Sounds good RCH...will check it out...another great read is Bullseye by Kenny Wright...and series 5 books!

RCH

Just to put this all in proper perspective. I don't want to leave impression that I'm a caring loving person that is concerned with the well being of a person living in a completely different country. My concerns for KT's well being are more along the lines of a junky when they hear that they dealer has been shot. "Shhhhit! Bob was shot, where am I going to get my next fix!" So, I would say we're all starting to get a bit uncomfortable, skin is starting to itchy, have trouble sleeping sweating and the shaking. All joking aside in someways we are a small community of like minded perverts. And it's the internet that lets us share stuff that we couldn't share with our closest friends. So It's not so strange that we do worry about KT because she is not a stranger to us. While waiting been read Jason Lenov's "The Village Wife: A Hotwife Fantasy" the husband in this one cam off as a total jerk. He is a collage professor but he acts as if he is a knuckle dragging neanderthal! It's flawed in that the he is abusive in many way and is irredeemable in my book. any one else read this book too.

VN

Yes, trust you are good

RCH

KT if you are not too busy please let us know you are OK!

Glaucon

Hope all's well, KT!

RCH

CSH and everyone we're getting close to the end of the year. With the holidays and such I would expect longer gapes between chapters. I too share your concern and hope all is well with KT.

Mike Monroe

As good as KT's writing is...have us out here waiting for it as addict with baited breathe!

CSH

Would really love an update. Hope all is well. What about that movie night?

RCH

Me too!

DavidnDaria

We got a notificaton for an ARC copy of a book that's already out... some kind of problem. :) Two Days in Malta. :)

RCH

Well the link below came up as a holiday ad for pajamas. https://www.bellewholesale.com/product/Christmas-Snowflake-Plaid-Functional-Buttoned-Flap-Adults-Pajamas/LZR8680H-bwbc2-r/60785a0e-0c2e-47a3-b6b6-31c23a1b9f47.html It sparked an image of something Kimmy might wear in the winter.

VN

Agree. No limits to what Kimmycan get him to do

VN

Press the dialogue sign next to the like sign

Wess

Btw Patreon for dummies help. How do I indent a comment to reply to the previous one?

Wess

But Im not sure she's telling him the truth. She's being very cool - almost detached. Is stone cold Kimmy really capable of screwing Devlin and then minutes later sashaying up to Josh in their cottage with no guilt or remorse? Guessing Kimmy pleasured Devlin and was content to do only that for now - right under Josh's nose. I'm a little surprised that more overt humiliation hasn't been administered yet too. Maybe this is KT's version of humiliation. It all works for me. I've abandoned Josh's ship, so bring the darkness. Have to admit I would like it to be a long slow ride.

CSH

Expect we will eventually get that flashback. She seems to be both telling him the truth and then telling him it’s not the truth and letting him take himself where he wants to go with it. She’s observing and letting him do the work. He desperately wants (needs?) to believe she is playing a game with him and she now seems to be turning sadistic, sexually feeding off telling him the searing truth while letting him convince himself it’s just a game. Not the woman he married anymore, is she? I expect from now on there will be constant clues thrown directly in Josh’s face, not to mention the creampies. Remember she already planted those panties in the laundry, waiting for Josh to discover them when they return. Interesting take on this by KT because, is it humiliating for Josh to do these things if he doesn’t know they are real? Not believing they are real gives him permission to enjoy them while knowing they are real gives Kimmy the thrill she needs. Unique dynamic here.

Wess

Yes, a flashback would be revealing. Kimmy's honesty or dishonesty about what she did will be much more intense. Most of her fooling around has been behind his back. I don't think, maybe since her first time at the hotel, she's had to look him in the eye and lie to him. Or maybe she won't? Either way she seems to enjoy pulling the bandaid off slowly. Not a great judge of character Josh.

RCH

Another point Kimmy comments in her defense that if she had sex with Devlin she couldn't walk he was so big! Well we know that isn't a problem for her any more so perhaps she did the deed and didn't let Devlin make the deposit? Hopefully we'll get a flash back scene of Kimmy's side of her evening.

Synk

Her motives are really intriguing to me! Perhaps she is trying to boil the frog here and will gradually turn the heat up with ever more formalizing rituals until their relationship is one of open cuckolding. That way she gets to keep her happy marriage and Devlin's Dick for the foreseeable. Then again, she hasn't exactly been acting carefully in Cayman... and there is the problem that she gets off on doing it behind his back and the riskiness that's involved. When Josh becomes a Cuckold™ will that kill the thrill for her? I think her game is seeing how far she can take things and still get away with it. How much evidence can she present that will be overlooked by her husband. Kimmy is harder to read than Josh and is a much better player. Whereas she is very unpredictable, Josh is the kind of guy who studies the board for half an hour and then makes a totally safe move.

RCH

I re-read the chapter and on reflecting it's still not a sure thing Kimmy had sex with Devlin. Josh describes her taste as salty but there is no description of a semen smell. also this line:“You’re stretched,” he said, though he didn’t believe it. I love this line: She chuckled. “He saw my tits, Josh.” So KT has yet again left us on the edge, wondering, waiting, anticipating oh the frustration! Sorry if I seem a bit out of touch with the context of things. I've been incredibly busy the last couple of months! hoping things will lighten up after the first of the year.

CSH

That’s a good way of putting it. There’s my sweet wife Kimmy and fantasy Kimmy. I agree that, at this point, it’s really important for Josh that fantasy Kimmy stays a fantasy so he can pretend it’s not real and not have to face the consequences. I think he’s not ready for it to be real, yet. What Kimmy is doing isn’t entirely clear to me. Maybe just getting him used to the idea that it’s going to happen or even get him to suggest it so she can blame him if it goes wrong?

Synk

I don't think it's something that would cross Josh's mind since it conflicts with his preferred state of things which is to have access to two completely different versions of Kimmy depending on how horny he is.

Mike Monroe

I really Didnt get the take that Josh wants any of this...To me he is getting dragged and humiliated behind his back...He is very unclear of what is going on..Too trusting of Kimmy!

RCH

VN that is an interesting question! has it ever been established that Josh wants to watch or just have Kimmy do the deed? I can't remember. Just the discussion between Josh and Devlin at the cabin was from Devlin "You ask me to fuck your wife". This tells me he may not want to watch as much as experience the aftermath.

VN

She will get Josh to call Devlin and invite him over

CSH

Typo patrol: Did she enjoy pleasing per partner

CSH

Glad to hear this works for you as well as it seems to works for us. It’s odd that we moved from a period where books were regularly serialized (e.g. Dickens) to one where they weren’t and possibly back again to serialization. So ..... now we are your old shoe, huh. To be worn out and thrown away when shiny new technological shoes come along, no doubt. LoL... looking forward to what comes next.

KT Morrison

I'm not sure. It feels the same; it feels natural. This was the way I did Losing His Wife 1 & 2, and that was from the beginning. I don't think there's been an effect on how I write, tbh. In the future it should stay the same, too. Patreon works well with serials, and I like writing serials. Patreon's not perfect in its setup, but it has a nicer feel to it than Amazon (in that Amazon looms over you like a threat sometimes, especially when you write more erotic books). Maybe someone out their will come out with a more stable and open serial book website. There's radish and tapas, I know, but it would be cool if there was a site where erotica felt protected and respected, and provided some of the features those sites offer. I love this Patreon, but Patreon doesn't allow my Patreon to be discoverable, so I'm still sort of stuck with Amazon being the way people discover me. But otherwise, no, as far as the process of writing goes, Patreon is a comfortable shoe for my workflow.

CSH

So KT - a question for you: Now that you’ve had some time putting material on Patreon and then publishing it in book form afterward, do you think it has, or will , over time change the way you write the stories? Does the structure of the medium alter what you write and creative decisions you make? Both negatively and positively perhaps? Really interested in what you think. This is just curiosity on my part.

RCH

I think the one should be "gone" in this sentence:"This fucking game had one way too far." Hell of a hot chapter! KT at her best!

Synk

Oh man she knows him too well, she's got him by the brain and the balls. We could be heading for complete domination...

DavidnDaria

There's an old song by Kiss... Lick it up! :) Okay, so it's not the best song on the planet... it's what popped up...

DavidSilver

I foresee another thousand pages of cuckold lust and heartache. This story feels, like it has still a lot of exploring to do. I would be surprised if Josh wouldn't ditch Kimmy at some point. Not forever, but for a time. Seems like a KT move to do. ;-)

BNR

Ha ha! Josh - "What did her vag taste like again? This seems very ocean-y..."

BNR

Her dumping him would be an odd direction because she seems to get off on having both, TRUE LOVE & DIRTY LUST. Of course, if she had to choose, because she was made to by Josh or Dev, then we might get a treated to a tearful ending.

Mike Monroe

Yeah at this point..he is 2 creampies in and doesnt know the difference between before Kimmy had sex with Devlin or after...Its a shame really but he is a goof and will go with anything she says!

Tracey52

Hot chapter. So what happens when Josh finds out Kimmy is bonking Devlin? I assume he will. I’d feel cheated if he never does. It could get to a point where Josh encourages it. I could see that. Maybe then Kimmy doesn’t think he needs to know about the past and she is vindicated. A lot of ammunition for Devlin to drop the bomb shell though. Or maybe Josh becomes such a cuckold under Kimmy that she tells him and he just accepts it. I don’t think we will get a burn the bitch scenario or Kimmy dumping Josh for Devlin but who knows other than kt.

CSH

A little bit. LoL

Donkatsu

CSH, gee, ya think so?

CSH

This is really hot by the way. Just thought I’d throw that in there.

CSH

That’s got to be Josh’s second cream pie. Looks like he’s gonna get a lot more. They clearly aren’t done as now she’s gonna go all out telling him how Devlin fucked her. She’s going to totally dom him, too. Chinookfan, I think you’ll get that description of what happened.

BNR

This is proving to be an exciting series. I hope the steam can last throughout. These characters might implode under the weight of their actions. Can Kimmy keep the mystery flowing or can Josh handle getting "handled?"

JamesIsAsleep

Who was it that said that Kimmy is a female Don Draper? It read like a role reversal of a (admittedly much less cold) 50's relationship dynamic. KT's writing of Kimmy is next level and I can't believe how amazing she is at laying out the thoughts of a guy like Josh. How Josh and Kimmy behaved in their interaction was incredible. Josh's half serious sturnness and Kimmy's indifferent game playing, Josh's interpretation of the game Kimmy's playing, and vice versa it's the stuff of legends. Look forward to continuing to have these types of conversations in December of 2021!

Donkatsu

Looks as if Chekhov's dictum about uncovered nipples has proven true once again. Don't remember what he had to say about missing panties, but we have empirical evidence on that one with the Kimster. Someplace you have "one" where it should be "gone" but I cannot find it now.

Chinookfan72

i hope chapter 4 is Kimmy’s perspective of the happenings from leaving the restaurant til her getting home.

Mike Monroe

Josh is a punk cuckoo...1 hr and a half...and he still doesnt think she did anything...She left himself...Came in like he doesnt matter...He is sorry for being crude???...Is this for real???...at times he is showing balls to question her ...he knows she cheated on him...should be on his way to the airport ..straight to a lawyer office and be done with her cheating a**. She humiliated him the whole night...Josh is such a goof...we were talking ..we had a drink...she played him and he let her just do whatever she wanted...no respect for him..Wow!!! It was building to this and I really hate Kimmy and Devlin...but Hate Josh more for being so weak to let her get away with this...so far..great chapter KT...Rage..and angst!!!


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