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Devil In The Waters, Book 5, Chapter 12 (complete)

🕑 Added 2020-06-19 00:00:00 +0000 UTC

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RCH

"One of the Gang" just started it! Good so far.

KT Morrison

LOL, back down again, ha ha

KT Morrison

Thank you, RCH!

RCH

Only KT knows what Josh is doing! Is he sitting at home looking at Kimmy's dirty underwear or off to work as usual. Even if Josh finds the soiled underwear Kimmy will counter that she did it on purpose to mess with him and his fetish. Why else would I make it so obvious Josh I wanted to tease you more. It's your load you dummy I smeared it there after we finished making love last night! Is Josh going to get the Friday off? That depends on how many plot complications occur before Friday. It's the same category of question as to whether Devlin shows up in the Caymans. It's Wednesday afternoon Kimmy is getting ready spend another wild romp with Devlin. Kimmy may not want Devlin with her and Josh in the Caymans. Despite her request her actions will insure there are plenty of little Devlins on the trip. And there is still Thursday too the cork is out of the bottle and there is going to be little reason for Kimmy to deny her pleasure.

CSH

So is Josh at work not asking for Friday off, or still at home contemplating Kimmy’s dirty undies?

RCH

Earlier I was wondering if the apartment came with maid service? Now I'm concerned about the carpet! Between Devlin's dripping manhood and Kimmy's panty-less state of arousal standing by the bed for the last few days the carpet has to be getting stained with bodily fluids! Devlin new venture needs to be a success to keep up the cleaning bills.

RCH

Chinookfan72 Josh's parents had to know something because the talked to the older Stone about it and were rebuffed. Josh was beaten bloody and robbed by Devlin's henchman. Was Johnny his name? I'm starting to feel like HAL 9000 in "2001 a Space Odyssey" as astronaut Dave Bowman starts pulling memory from HAL. If I start singing Daisy you'll understand what is happening to me. Daisy, Daisy Give me your answer do! I'm half crazy. All for the love of you...

Chinookfan72

Your point about Kimmy becoming a partner with Devlin (and thus the potential for more power, money and prestige) is definitely one I agree with. Although I think the Big Cock goes with the Big Bucks as well so it would be a package deal. As for the dream, I hope not. We already have one night in this story that could be a dream or not, do we need a second?

Chinookfan72

It could just be that Josh’s parent’s didn’t know. Josh hasn’t been comfortable talking about it with his wife so it wouldn’t be surprising if he didn’t talk to anyone about it.

RCH

I would say nuclear as in power plant lots of high yield power with a high danger potential if careless. Question will someone be careless and cause a meltdown?

RCH

I got this though while driving home. Tim research Devlin's dads reaction to Josh's parents complaint, He laugh at it. Okay that is not so surprising he's a douche bag. What my revelation is what kinda home Josh grew up in? Seems very passive of his parents. Why if his abuse at the hand of Devlin and his cronies was so bad why was the matter dropped? Did Mr. Stone have something to hold over Josh's family? Where are Josh's parents? We haven't heard to much of them. Are they alive did I miss something(most likely I forgot)?

RCH

CSH, I think if we see some break from Stone Brokerage we'll see some reaction from daddy. How daddy reacts will give us a feel for his personality. This is likely going to be a explosive event! You could take the erotica out of this story and it would still have enough happening to make it interesting. Tim thanks for the research on Mr. Stone reaction to Josh's parents complaint.

CSH

I think you are right about this. She thinks she’s in control of Devlin but it’s an illusion. If he shows in the Caymans she’ll give in immediately. If his presence is open, she’ll use it to tease Josh unmercifully.

Tim ziegler

Another fun fact would be Devlin Dad laughing at Josh and his parents when complaining about Devlins bullying!

CSH

Given we know next to nothing about Devlin, I wouldn’t bet on finding out a lot about his dad. For our purposes a move out on his own could really offer financial incentives to Kimmy and Josh to stick with Devlin for a while. Might mean Kimmy has to travel a lot with him internationally, too.

RCH

That would be a surprise plot twist. With the reaction of Devlin when his father was mentioned it leads me to believe Papa Stone is a bigger shit heal than Devlin. What kinda parent raises a kid like Devlin and then doesn't rein him in when is picking on a weaker kid? My dad had an older, bigger kid try to bully him when he was 11-12 he fought back and sent the kid home blood. The father showed up with his kid to complain to my dads mom. When my Grandma called my dad to the door, the father saw the size of kid he was picking on he apologized, whacked his kid upside the head and shamed him for his actions. That is what Mr Stone should have done to Devlin and he would have been a better citizen. I have a feeling we'll get more insight into Mr Stone later. I wonder about Mrs. Stone? Some how I don't see her as a positive factor either. She is either a self absorbed society woman or possibly a weak and kowtowed wife. Is she even in the picture divorced or dead? Devlin show signs of not having a mother to give him a good reference for male/female relationships.

CSH

Yeah, she thinks she going to be in control but there are too many moving parts. A lot of the contempt she expresses to Josh will be the honest truth, even if she tries to pretend it’s just said for excitement. The shift in power will have real emotional consequences. It’ll be really hot reading though.....

Donkatsu

Even if Kimmy is working on Josh to condition him to accept and sexually respond to her sex with Devlin, there will still be cheating. I do not think it is possible for a woman with any agency to carry on one or more sexual affairs without (i) some emotional involvement with the bull; (ii) a real (as opposed to simulated) disdain for the hubby; (iii) a need to keep some aspects of the affair(s) private from hubby; and a need for some emotional distance from hubby. DND gave us a good view of this with the Gema tales. And almost all of KT's stories involve some elements of the list above. The combinations of these factors are what add the tension, anticipation, and risk to the mixture, sometimes spitting out hurt and breakage along with the thrills.

Tim ziegler

What if Dear ole Daddy finds about the move and Kimmy’s involvement in the business and affair,tellsJosh and recruits him to break it up. As a Josh fan to me that’s pretty good revenge

CSH

I’m probably unique in preferring we don’t find out Devlin’s motivations, at least not yet. The mystery surrounding Devlin’s full motives keeps us guessing as to what he’ll do next. We don’t even know whether his motivations are a singular unchanging “plan of attack” or if they are evolving and changing over time. DnD, I think you’re right about consent and power exchange. I agree it’s the lying not the cheating that is the long term threat but if Kimmy draws Josh far enough in before he learns the truth then it may not matter. You’re right, she’s conditioning him or dare we say it training him. At a certain point, if she has gotten him to accept her openly having Devlin as a lover, maybe even watching it happen, what difference will it really make to his self respect if he discovers she lied about how they got there? I mean that would be full control wouldn’t it? I lied to you to get you to like this but you won’t stop because now you’re addicted to it. That kind of just happened to Kimmy didn’t it?

RCH

The apartment goes deeper than just a crash pad for Devlin and Kimmy. Devlin is planning on making a break from daddy from what was said in this chapter. We're not privy to the details yet but Kimmy has to be in Devlin's plans. Kimmy is becoming Devlin's confidant (as your lawyer can be). It'll be interesting how this weaves into the story. I can see the relationship on a business level getting more complex. If Devlin is doing what I think he is doing he'll have to have all his ducks in a row to keep from getting sued by his father. I could see a possible partnership being offered to Kimmy in the new firm. If that is the case Kimmy whole game plan is going to require some drastic modifications. As we've seen sexually "one and done" is gone and the two year plan is also going to be history too. Forget the cheating I could see the "Big Bucks" opportunity being more of a long term threat to Josh and Kimmy's marriage then "Big Cock"(you know a large male chicken, what did you think I referring to? Get out of the gutter people!). On the other hand I did have a wild thought what if this is just a dream sequence? We're still late Tuesday night early Wednesday morning the Waters are sleeping soundly in their bed. Kimmy is having an erotic dream. Too soap opera like?

RCH

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DavidnDaria

Thank you for the kind words. It's summer, no place to go, so we just hang out. Devlin's motives, other than fucking Kimmy, are something like, "Wait and See". From what was written, it appears he has a nefarious agenda.

Chinookfan72

DnD please don’t go back in the hole.. take your shoes off and stay a while.. This place is better with you being active. To your first comment, I too am wondering what Devlin’s motives are.. To me it’s a better story if he is trying to steal Kimmy away, but then again he could have other motives.. Personally I’d love a little bit of Devlin POV so we can get some insight into his brain. your second and third points are also correct, to me as this is a cheating wife story the likely hood of a HEA with Kimmy and Josh together seems slim.. Then again looking at statistic the fast majority of marriages survive an affair. So perhaps the ending isn’t a HEA, but something more realistic where they are trying to make it work.

Chinookfan72

I was thinking of it, nuclear, in terms of the affair.. Currently, staying with bomb themes, it’s like a laser guided rocket.. Sure there is damage, but it’s done in a way to reduce collateral damage and looks to preserve innocent life.. Nuclear would be much more explosive, less strategic, less worrying about collateral damage and the harm of innocent people.. So for the story I see nuclear as Kimmy becoming more comfortable and bold in regards to the affair.. She gets off on getting away with it and it seems like she thinks if Josh found out he’d be turned on.. Thus she wouldn’t need to hide it as much.. She could be seen in public with Devlin, she could hook up with Devlin at her apartment, she could fuck Devlin in the bar bathroom with Josh inside etc. etc. etc.

DavidnDaria

Trust is another issue. If there is no or wavering trust--and the latter is true in this story--only hell can happen. Maybe that's what KT is after, who knows? Back to the hole.

DavidnDaria

And then there's other side. So far, there has been limited fantasy play, there has been no reality. Kimmy is cheating. Josh finds it exciting that Kimmy has felt Devlin's goods, but what is he going to think or feel when Kimmy's cheating is revealed? From all I (Dave) has learned about things, there is power exchange, but power exchange does not happen without consent and it's something to consider in this story. Kimmy thinks she's in control and she may well be now, but control is something that is given, it is not taken. If Kimmy wants her relationship with Josh to continue, at some point, she's going to have to realize that Josh has all the power. ALL the power. Of course, if KT is going for the LHW story line, power exchange does not matter. So far, Kimmy is still a lying cheat. If this is not an LHW story, how they get to resolution is going to be interesting.

DavidnDaria

Here we go... One and done is long gone. She needs her Devlin fix to tide her over. Now the interesting parts happen. It's clear to us Kimmy has started conditioning Josh to accept Devlin. The next few days, especially at home tonight will be telling. Josh is terrified yet so charged now, that he is unable to think clearly when he's with Kimmy. Early on in this story, Devlin told Kimmy that she deserved better. We commented that we thought "better" meant Kimmy being taken away from Josh by Devlin. Wondering if this is going to happen? Better all around? Kimmy already has the job, she has the sex (all the sex--get it?), now it's up to her to decide just how far down the path she wishes to be taken. Back in the hole.

RCH

KT you shouldn't be ashamed at letting us see how the sausage is made! It's interesting. The 90 of us (sorry we lost 1) Pateon supporters all and all enjoy those insights in to the process. This just so engaging of a series. That's why I have to double up on my Xanax after I read a chapter to deal with the depression knowing I'll have to wait for the next chapter!

CSH

OK I get it. I’m restating the obvious I guess. Duh.... I just enjoy this story where the wife is taking the lead and bringing the husband in with her instead of the standard theme of the husband trying to draw in the wife.

Donkatsu

Thanks, David.

DavidSilver

Hm, AA as in small? I think "klein" is a pretty old word, but there are different versions. Not long ago german had a lot of local dialects in use. There is not one old german I could point to. I can understand low german, there it could be kleen, lüttje, lüttke, minn, etc. In Bavaria they use "kloana". I don't know what Wagner would prefer, but I have never seen the "The Ride of the Valkyries", too.

DavidSilver

Oh, wow. I like the last paragraph. Teaching her husband to enjoy being cuckolded. That‘s an interesting view an could make a good story.

Tracey52

Nuclear would be Kimmy getting everything she thinks she wants right up until it all comes crashing down. With nuclear if the blast doesn’t get you the fallout will.

Donkatsu

It’s good to know that Kimmy understands just how inconvenient and inappropriate panties are in her new position. Also, she has reached that “sweet spot” for all lawyers: value billing; something not usually attained at all in a lawyer’s career and certainly not at such a tender age. No need for our Kimmy to slice up her day into 6-minute increments and fill in time sheets, justifying her daily activities to the folks in the back office. Another excellent addition to the KT oeuvre. OT: in one of the videos of “The Ride of the Valkyries” one of the gals looks down the pants of a fallen warrior and makes an off-mic comment, apparently disparaging with regard to the corpse’s equipment, to the others. Question for David S: what is old German for “AA”?

JamesIsAsleep

Well please return to whatever headspace you were in when you wrote that section because you had me locked in.

KT Morrison

What would nuclear be, ha ha?

KT Morrison

OMG what another embarrassment!—Everybody's getting to see how the sausage is made here, ha ha. I was writing where people were nearby talking and that can short circuit my brain—was trying to think of the word limbo or purgatory and no matter how hard I tried they stayed out of my reach so I just wrote 'place of' as a note to myself to plug the right word in when my brain was working again.

CSH

“If she didn’t make the effort to create new barriers, new rules, ones she could adhere to for once, where would it lead her? What would it do to her and Josh. And what about poor Josh? What about his heart? God, his sanity?” “If she let Devlin dominate her it would end her way of life, she knew it in her heart. He would sever her relationship with Josh—he would crush Josh.” “Now she straightened her spine, shook her head to disengage the awful tractor beam of that lustful thought, reminding herself not to submit to him.” We are getting to the crux of it now. For me, these are the most interesting quotes as they frame her dilemma. We have to admit that she might very well lose the fight with Devlin for dominance. This will be even more traumatic as it’s clear she knows what it means for her and Josh. Sexually I think she wants Devlin to dominate her and I would expect him to break her resistance to that and then use her to break Josh and destroy her marriage. (I’m not cheering him on, I just think that’s what’s going to happen.) Dark indeed. Plus, even if she gets her way, she’s decided to stop Devlin breaking her marriage by teaching her husband to enjoy being cuckolded. So her way to stop Devlin from crushing Josh is to crush Josh herself. Interesting to see where this goes from here.

BNR

I hope Devlin shows up in Cayman, but with a date! 😛 A sexy as hell girl who likes to show off and isn't shy about pleasing Devlin. Or someone from the past! Maybe someone who would injure Kimmy to see hanging all over Devlin.

Chinookfan72

Same

JL23

I go back and forth on who’s wielding the power right now (or in Seinfeld parlance who has “hand”)...Kimmy or Devlin (Josh is right where he wants to be in dead last in hand). Right now it’s Kimmy...honestly she’s got both men eating out of her hands, and everything she could possibly want if she plays this right. Mind blowing sex with Devlin, really good sex with Josh (and mind blowing sex for him which she wants to give him)...growing power in her career. The question is if Devlin tries to reclaim some hand...first step would be to catch her off guard by coming to the Caymans. Cause in the end I don’t think she can really deny Devlin anything. I’m assuming he’ll show up down there. Devlin still holds the power to destroy this house of cards she’s building. Josh finding out the actual truth is probably a death blow to the marriage. But does Devlin really want to do that? I still say no...as Kimmy is figuring out he gets off on humiliating a clueless Josh as much as he does the sex.

JamesIsAsleep

As much as Kimmy loves to cater to Josh's kink, pushing those buttons to get the most of sex with him, she sure is learning how to push Devlin's too. She seems in control right now, let's see if she can maintain that! Micro moment - I loved how Kimmy felt like she lost the upper hand as Devlin one-upped her comment about Josh when he knew that the subject of Devlin's cock came up to in order to spice up their evening together.

Chinookfan72

yeah it could be a way for her to rationalize it too “I had to fuck Devlin today Josh, if I didn’t he’d show up in Cayman and fuck me there”. That is if Devlin let’s her leave the apartment still thinking Devlin isn’t going. I could see Devlin getting her to agree to him going during sex (Devlin could bring it up and she says no. Devlin asks why and she tells him because if this gets too serious it’ll ruin her relationship, and Devlin will have some witty reply about how good it feels etc. and eventually Kimmy will be like “fuck it! Fuck me now and come to Cayman and fuck me again. I don’t care I just want to be fucked by this cock all the time.”) or I could see Devlin thanking Kimmy for the good sex, but then saying something alluding to him looking forward to hooking up in Cayman or meeting her there etc. (just enough for her to realize her barter didn’t work and he is going to be there).

Wess

I hope this goes nuclear.

Tim ziegler

Kimmy now has two redeeming quality’s left a tight pussy,but not for long,and she’s a good lawyer!

Wess

This is one of the hottest stories I've read. Kimmy's intense desire for Devlin's size and alpha allure making her risk her happy marriage. KT has developed these characters to the point where I feel I'm reading about something that is actually happening. I get completely lost in this story even in short bites!

RCH

Good chapter! I wonder if the apartment comes with maid service? There is going to be a good deal of dirty linen generated in that apartment! Now the depression starts again and the waiting...

JamesIsAsleep

Agreed about Devlin showing up regardless of this conversation. I love that Kimmy has this concept out there and love the idea of her thinking that she got the situation covered by having this conversation, only to be blindsided by Devlin showing up. She would know deep down that if he wanted to he would anyways, but still.

Chinookfan72

fantastic chapter KT, can’t wait for the next one... Everything about this chapter was great especially Kimmy instigating the sex. Sure she told Devlin she doesn’t want him in Cayman, and it’s probably true, but when he shows up announced or Josh can’t make it for some reason and he just shows up at the airport she isn’t going to mind. It’ll be interesting to see if the Josh can’t go to Cayman and it’s just Kimmy and Devlin hanging out doing couples things does Devlin’s non-menacing side come out more and does Kimmy actually start to fall for Devlin and not just his dick... Time will tell.

JamesIsAsleep

My love of Kimmy's character just shot up immensely in this part, which is absolutely plastered with her rationale and bold moves and shows her complexities and weaknesses at the same time. I didnt predict that Kimmy would request that Devlin not come to the Cayman's, that was a shocker! I also (though I dont know why) didnt expect that she would want to mess with Devlin after her inner dialogue, which was phenomenal. That fourth paragraph (which you might want to revisit KT, you have a oddly placed phrase in parentheses) was absolutely phenomenal at explaining Kimmy's predicament. Devil in the Waters is doing it, KT, it is really starting to reach your all time greats.


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