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Sweepstakes Winners (MTF, MC, AR)
🕑 Added 2024-02-20 05:27:51 +0000 UTCTwo friends win an all-inclusive resort package, but it comes with changes they don’t expect!
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Ashleigh Mae Transformations
Thanks for catching these! Fixes are made—the last two were texting language choices, but thanks for checking everything over!
Al Boudreaux
Great story but I did find some errors that u might want to fix: on page three, the should be they; on page 22, the should be he; on page 24, learned should be learner; on page 39, get should be go. And this might just be me but on the last page gawd, we, and maybe should be capitalized. Sorry to bother u with this, I’m just trying to help.
