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A Burned Heart - Chapter 6
Chapter SixTraining HallRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 3Tiltham was not happy when Freddie and she arrived at the training hall. It wasn’t much more than an oversized barn, but Freddie didn’t really mind. She did mind, however, when she realized what they’d be eating. To clarify, Tiltham was unhappy with Freddie,and Freddie was unhappy with the food.“It’s jerky. And water.” As Freddie looked through the sacks on the floor of the room, she frowned. “Justjerky and water. That can’t be real.”“My Lady,” Tiltham started before glo...
OW - CH 84.5 - Interlude 3
Interlude 3Maid To BeFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 6“A lady’s maid!” Melinda exclaimed, her voice frantic.“I know,” Gristle bemoaned. “I was hoping to pick one before she asked for it.”The two heads of the household staff looked downcast, barely meeting the other’s eyes.“I was getting everything ready, and I’d finally convinced Sylvie to take up the position permanently,” Melinda sighed.Gristle snorted, “It’s probably for the best that she’ll only be a temporary lady’s maid. You know Sylvie’s temperament.”Melinda...
A Burned Heart - Chapter 5
A/N: Sorry it's late, I went out of town and when I got back I was soooo sleepy. But here we go!!Chapter FiveOff The PathRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 3It was a short visit, where the boys each gave Freddie something different. Hue gave her a handkerchief with the symbol of Nemo, a star emblazoned in silver on a black fabric. Les gave her a nice pair of leather running shoes. Gene gave her a locket that, when opened, displayed an image of the four siblings in a three-dimensional picture. They had to of talked to their parents for such things,...
OW - CH 84 - Gifts, Both Great and Small
Chapter Eighty-FourGifts, Both Great and SmallFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 6“Juniper?” Gristle said, his face tilted to the side. “The hireling from the kitchen?”“Yes.” I agreed immediately. I blinked at the odd look on Gristle’s face.“She isn’t a maid.” He followed up with, his voice pointed.I nodded.“That’s okay.”“And she hasn’t been trained to be a lady’s maid, even if she werea maid.” He said, gesturing off to the said, as if Juniper were here and he was tearing her capabilities down.“It’s all right.” ...
ANNOUNCEMENT
Okay! The official release date for A Burned Heart will be August 17th, pending RR approval!Once Patreon hits Ch 6.5 I’m going to put the next chapters behind an A Burned Heart tier, and create a higher tier for both stories.The way it will be is like this:Otherworldly TiersNoir -$5 (7 chaps of OW)Haze - $10 (21 chaps of OW)A Burned Heart TiersKalina - $5 Tier (7 chaps of ABH)Freddie-$10 (Eventually 21 chaps of ABH, this tier is not going to be released until it’s ready)BOTH Otherworldly and A Burned Heart TierGargantua - $15 (21 chaps of ...
Nora and Freddie
Pls look at how cute Nora and Freddie are!!!!!
A Burned Heart - Chapter 4
Chapter FourFightsRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 2Freddie ate dinner slowly, practicing using her strength in all the right ways. An interesting thing about having so much Vitality was that she didn’t grow as hungry or as sleepy. Her mother had told her she also wouldn’t have to use the bathroom as often anymore —her body would be more efficient at processing waste and extracting benefit. It was a neat boon.Her brothers had not joined the table. In fact, none other than the Duke and Freddie’s parents were there. Even the usual staff that s...
Book 3 - A Shade of Dawn’s cover
Look at ittttt its so prettyyyyyy
OW - CH 83 - Rune Creation and You
Chapter Eighty-ThreeRune Creation and YouFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 5Back in my room, I ran my fingers over the front of my spellbook.Theoretically, I had unlocked the next lesson, but I hadn’t opened the book to check. On the journey over, I hit Level 10 in both [Mana Sense] and [Mana Manipulation], both of which gave great boons once I got to their milestone levels. [Mana Sense] allowed me to separate elemental mana from ambient mana, and [Mana Manipulation] helped me stop the leaks from practicing my mana Skills.Slipping my nail between t...
A Burned Heart - Chapter 3
Chapter ThreeChoicesRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 2“What?” Freddie’s grandfather leaned in, “What are your options?”“It’s… unique, that’s for sure,” Freddie responded, distracted. “I got three acolyte Classes, kind of. I also got one pure fighting Class, three noble Classes, and the [Citizen of Maeve] Class.”“Well, you can cross off anything related to the Gods, that’s for sure.” The old man grumbled, and Freddie peeked over at him, questioning. Sensing her curiosity, he continued, “You cannot take a Divine related...
OW - CH 82 - Weight
Chapter Eighty-TwoWeightFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 5“I see you’re in better spirits,” Dame Arella said, a half smile on her face as she repositioned me to settle on her hip.It was nice to be held by her. The last time someone had done so was Sir Rellar in Perry. I hadn’t realized how much I had been missing physical touch. Shade had to cling as tightly as his knit claws would allow on my collarbone lest he be flung away in the pickup.“Well, I came here for a reason,” I said conversationally, my blue eyes meeting her brown. Dame Are...
A Burned Heart - Chapter 2
Chapter TwoFamily TiesRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 2“Guess what?”All eyes were on Freddie, and she had a wicked grin on her face.“I don’t need to guess,” a woman with long pink hair said, her eyes softening as she met Freddie’s.Aster Nemo.“It’s your birthday, Fredericka.” Her smooth voice carried through the room and silenced the rest of Freddie’s family. “How do you feel, my little star?”Freddie could have paused. She could have wondered if she was really meant to be here. She could have wondered if she should disclose e...
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OW - CH 81 - Extravagance
A/N 7/4: As always, thank you for your support and kindness. I was able to enjoy both my birthday and the Fourth of July with my family thanks to it. Please enjoy this chappy. Chapter Eighty-OneExtravaganceFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 5I ate breakfast in my room, alone once again. But this time, I didn’t plan on staying that way. Finishing up some fruit, I began my preparations for the day.It began with several small braids turned and kept in place with thin threads created from [Weave of Darkness] and controlled by [Shadow Manipulation]. At t...
Chapter Delayed until Morning
Hello!!! It’s my birthday today and I got a bit carried away with shenanigans so please expect the regular chapter tomorrow!!
Schedule and Announcement
Schedule:Otherworldly will continue to release on WednesdaysOW - A Burned Heart will release on Saturdays to all membership tiers, INCLUDING FREE MEMBERS until chapter 7.-A Burned Heart will follow the same posting style of Otherworldly, with 6 traditional chapters then 1 interlude.-Love you guys <3 Check out the first chapter of A Burned Heart now!!
A Burned Heart - CH 1
Chapter OnePoint NemoRise of Winter, Week 1, Day 2It was quick, at least. A single whack with a crowbar straight to her temple. She didn’t have to stick around while she bled out. She was just… out.It was almost like falling asleep.Of course, she wasn’t asleep. She was dead.Around her body, pandemonium continued. The man who’d hit her was already dead, brought down with a bullet through his head. Bystanders were screaming —but so was her bodyguard. He was grasping her and shouting for backup, an ambulance, anything. But that wasn’t ...
Surprise Poll!!
Hi friends!!I have a surprise for you coming up --I've been writing a second series!!It's entitled Otherworldly - A Burned HeartHere's the temporary synopsis:-Genre: Fantasy/Action/Adventure, NOT Psychological-Kalina was a fighter.No. Scratch that. Kalina isa fighter. Killed in an attack in elsewhere, she wakes up to the soothing voice of a Goddess sending her onward to a new life. A life in Gargantua.Kalina arrives in the body of one Fredericka Nemo, a young girl yet to claim her own power. Taking up the mantle of Freddie, Kalina a...
CH 80 - Bending
Chapter EightyBendingFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 4Lunch was a silent affair –as was dinner. I spent them reading and sifting through the information about mana pearls. The more technical the writing got, the more at home I felt —reminded of elsewhereand jargon that was barely comprehensible to anyone but the researchers. Sure, I had Noir with me, but at some point, his animation faltered, and I felt that calling a spirit forward just to watch me read would only bore whoever answered the summons. It felt selfish to do such a thing when I was...
Mock Up of Book 2
Please everyone look at these photos of Book 2 printed lololol she’s beautiful and also I am so excited to say: by end of July they will be available for purchase!
CH 79 - Educational Pamphlets
A/N: If this chapter confuses you, go back and re-read CH 40-42!! I did my best to make it clear even with so much time passing,.Chapter Seventy-NineEducational PamphletsFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 4“It’s here, Lady Nora,” Juniper said, throwing her arm out in a fanciful display, “The library you seek lies behind these doors.”It was almost comical, the seriousness with which the girl delivered those lines. And so I let out half a laugh for half a joke.“Thank you.” I nodded, sobering my expression, “I appreciate it, Juniper.”My...
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New discord link since the old one is expired!!
CH 78.5 - Interlude 2
Interlude TwoDear NoraDear Nora,Clara wanted us to write something long and hearty. I wasn’t sure what to write, so instead, I’ll tell you what I want to be when I’m older—what I want to be like the next time we meet.Did you know Clara and I went through our Awakening in the Fall of Spring? We’re still new to the System, but we’re working hard on getting Skills before we start leveling. Phil is a bit older, having turned eight in Peak of Spring. He’s –well, I’ll let him decide what to tell you on his page. I don’t want to ru...
CH 78 - Destiny Is A Fickle Thing
Chapter Seventy-EightDestiny Is A Fickle ThingFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 4The end of the trial came at the sixty-five-minute mark.I had been able to [Inspect] another thirty-five items, but I was unable to pass through the Third Ray. Whatever it meant to break through the limits of such a thing was still lost on me, but I thought it related to my final score, much like for [SIlent as a Shadow]’s trial.I found myself staring at a table full with more and more plates of Grag delicacies –plates that I had grown tired of inspecting by the time...
CH 77 - Inspection
Chapter Seventy-SevenInspectionFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 4[Welcome to Twilight}[Skill: Inspect][Training options:ExpansionLockedLocked][Please select a training type to begin]I looked at the green notice, running my hand along my thigh.Expansion. What could that mean?I hummed in thought. It could mean anything. Perhaps expanding the distance, maybe? I thought it was line of sight, though. Maybe not. Maybe I have a fundamental misunderstanding about the Skill.I sighed, willing the screen to select the training option I needed. The only one ava...
Delayed Chapter!!
Howdy!!! I am working hard on the next chapter, but it’s looking like it will be delayed until tomorrow evening!!!Thank you for your patience and look forward to next chappy!!!
CH 76 - Voices
AN: As of 5/24/24 I updated the ending of CH 76 due to a continuity error. Chapter Seventy-SixVoicesFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 4It was before the suns rose in the sky, and I was wide awake. My mana was back to full, and I was free to do whatever I wanted for four more days.What do I want?What should I do?I was perched on the balcony once again, looking over the gardens. Inside, my creations laid lifeless. The air was crisp, and if it hadn’t been for the black blanket wrapped around my shoulders, I would have been half-frozen after a few minu...
CH 75 - Hot Gossip
Chapter Seventy-FiveHot GossipFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 3As I reached the top of the [Descent of Astrala] staircase, I saw Sir Limrick looking down menacingly at a grimacing Gristle.“As I said, it’s not like Twilight is dangerous—“ Gristle cut himself off as he caught sight of me ascending the stairs.Well, that’s just untrue,I thought. Out loud, I said, “Sorry for worrying you, I got caught up in one of the trainings.”Sir Limrick whipped his head around, eyes narrowing as he evaluated me.In a way, Gristle was correct. The bum kn...
OW - CH 74 - The Star Gem
Chapter Seventy-FourThe Star GemFall of Autumn, Week 4, Day 3[Warning: There are only 60 minutes remaining in the training for [Silent as a Shadow]. Please find the Star Gem within the allotted time.]The ache in my knee and wrist had died down, but now I had to decide how to proceed. I’d been wandering around the town, vaguely headed toward its center and being cautious. All it had netted me was two mana pearls and a bag of incorrectgems.Did that mean I had to continue searching each barrel and crate to find the Star Gem? Or was it being guar...
