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I mean that seems fine to me. Definitely doesn't seem like someone choking something down to ignore it, no sir.
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Dangit Neri, ground jam is how you get ants.
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Yup it's time to start talking about actual things.
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doing something a lil different with the backgrounds on this one :D Welcome to Chapter 13, The Sleepover.
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That's the end of Chapter 12! I think I'm gonna take a week off to build up some backgrounds for 13 to get the going more smoothly. So we'll start Chapter 13 on September 28!
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ah good! no one is scared and everyone's having fun!
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Talk sexist, revoke exist.
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I've taken so many low atmosphere cloud photos on my flights out for this page and used maybe like 2 of them, lol.
Full size gift for ya'll
biggest I can make it for folks that want a background or desktop image :D
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That's not...locking your knees.. ah heck good enough.
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:)
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Listen it's not called an Alligator friendship fun time rollNevermind the last page, I got both pages done in time so enjoy a thursday page :D
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Smoothing things over, blender style! As a heads up, I'm being forced to go to a show I tried to drop and that's left me with no time to get the thursday page done (or I did, but now it's the monday page) So you'll see the public post on thursday and not the patreon. I'll make this up as soon as I can for ya'll.
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HEY, it's my poorly thought out exit strategy, not yours!
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Raziel's brain not found. :(
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time to pray to jesus for a new spine
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So in the novel there's a few more lines where it could be implied that Raziel is trying to send Neri away, but since it's all Neri's perspective, she just kinda doesn't notice it. It's always been a sort of implied thing, but here, now it's just blatant. Since I think a few of those key lines were cut out (they just didn't fit the tone) of the comic, now Neri does a big CSI think and hopefully it still fits okay.
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Wahoo! Yippee! Better not be doing some self sacrifice that isn't working down there!
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It's my noble sacrifice and I want it now!
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Go ahead and get reaaally far out of tether range Neri, it's cool.
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Eeeyy we clear up the misunderstanding on page 242! Also the wood is gone. Rotten wood in the original happened in a break after Neri started speaking to him and he was freaked out, and before he blows up at her. In the novel I always kinda had a problem with just...not talking for hours when it's obviously talking time and how it didn't fit normal interactions. Here it's shortened up but essentially lots of chapter 12 is shuffled about. we'll hit most of the big points but we might have to shuffle it into future stuff as 12 ...
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OH COOL I DIDN'T EXPERIENCE ANYTHING LIKE THAT MORE ROTTEN WOOD PLEASE
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You can pretty much just slap a PNG of myself reading the novel in that last frame going "Okay what else do I need to have in this first part- OH GOD"
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Here, the perfect gift, Rotting Wood!
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TOOT TOOT NO DAYDREAMING ALLOWED CHAOS APPROACHING
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The idea of taking blame for something you believe in even if your peers think it's wrong has Raziel SHOOK
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Ha ha tee hee but no seriously you have drastically altered my life and we ain't there yet bud
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It's not like your tether is comfortable or something, baka.
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awwww.
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Hey while you also feel like garbage go ahead and give me your mother's maiden name and the street you grew up on. For science.But yes the big reveal of what did Raziel do to get demoted? Nothing. Also the wife stuff is something Neri learned about on page 286! https://caelumsky.thecomicseries.com/comics/286/#content-start
