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TO Rewrite: B3 — 21. That I May Feast
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Standing in the center of the Yin-Yang Chamber, Rachel shifted to gain a full view of the illuminated circle as the air buzzed with an almost suffocating tension. The three divine figures seemed to pulse with the rhythm, each one drawing her gaze.The chamber itself was alive now, shimmering with a brightness that reflected the Divine figures it currently housed. Light refracted and spiraled in intricate patterns through the symbols etched into th...
RISE: B1 — 7. The Black Tortoise
RISERewrite IndexPrevious Chapter--------------------Ayla blinked, a sudden wave of dizziness and nausea flowing through her against the sunlight that fractured through the storm’s remnants. Nulina’s massive wing overshadowed her, a sheltering canopy, yet the gut-ripping feeling didn’t leave under her shimmering feathers, glowing with latent energy and casting dancing shadows over the drenched ground from the crackling electricity that sparked over her body.What? I can’t… I can’t see… Breathe…Resisting a dry heave, she choked ou...
RISE or Winter Rebirth This Weekend?
It's in the title. Let me know what you want me to write. o7
UE Rewrite: B4 — 12. Storms Tempered, Souls Forged
PoV:1. Grace (Our Hare Man and Nungal Enthusiast!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------The wind howled, carrying the tang of rain and earth through the humid air that lifted Grace’s lips. He stood motionless on the jagged outcrop, his posture lax against the tempest’s fury, his ears tilted forward, tracking the buzz in the distance. Below the jungle canopy, the brush and foliage churned like a restless sea, thrashing under the remnants of the hag’s storm.Lightning split the horizon, illuminating the dense mist wit...
ATM Rewrite: B3 — 11. Bound by Light, Tested by Darkness
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Fox Girl Is Making Friends!)2. Yeon-ah (Our Kumiho trickster!)3. Sora Moore4. Sela (Our Purified Unseelie Queen!)--------------------ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Sora’s ears flicked at the chatter around her as she and Wendy passed into the bustling vulpes lecture district. The flickering lanterns overhead cast soft, warm light against the intricate carvings on the walls. Despite the lively atmosphere and Wendy’s previous hug, a muted tension hung between them....
TO Rewrite: B3 — 20. Raw, Bloody Power
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------The city stretched out before Rachel, its towering outer walls glinting faintly under the dim moonlight. The strong hum of magic emanated from the high obstacle preventing them from entering the city, and a giant gate far in the distance was shining as a beacon of radiant jewels and intricate designs.The air felt heavy, laden with power that pressed down on her heightened senses, every living thing within miles immediately seen through her vampir...
RISE: B1 — 6. Through Soul's Tempest
RISERewrite IndexPrevious Chapter--------------------Ayla settled into position, adjusting her harness with a series of swift, practiced movements. Satisfied, she turned to Mera, far below, now stationed beside the wall, her small figure barely visible under the dim light of the storm chamber.With an exaggerated grin and a dramatic flair, the teen threw up two thumbs, her expression full of excitement despite the girl’s obvious nerves bubbling beneath her surface.“May your fire never go out!” Mera shouted, her voice echoing through the da...
UE Rewrite: B4 — 11. Threads of Dominion
PoV:1. Camellia (But Our Crimson Flower Is Here!)2. Elinor (Our Lich Empress!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Rain hammered through the fractured ceiling, droplets sizzling as they struck venom pools carving shallow scars into the stone. Mist coiled through the musky air, each curl pulled into Camellia’s ruby gaze as she perched on a jagged stalactite. Her weight shifted on the lattice beneath her, each thread whispering Noklan’s chaotic movements below.Noklan’s frame jerked, his segmented carapace shivering ...
ATM Rewrite: B3 — 10. Professor Kurosaki
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Fox Girl Is Making Friends!)--------------------ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------The atmosphere in the lecture hall shifted as Professor Kurosaki descended, his geta clicking against the polished wood floor. Sora couldn’t pull her eyes away, her ears perked up, the noise of his shoes somehow mesmerizing in its rhythm, echoing softly as though the world itself bowed to his entrance—it was magic, she knew it was, but it didn’t make it any less impressive.The glowin...
PokéSync: B4 — 53. Total Victory
Author Note: Well, this is the last chapter in Pokesync until I can get my life stable. I think it is a good place to end it for now. o7 Tell me what you think.-----------------PoV:1. Her Pokemon (Let's Battle!)2. Mallory (Our Violet-Haired Girl!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been mislabeled, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)----...
TO Rewrite: B3 — 19. I'm Done
Author Note: I've added a 19.5 to the end of this with Fiona and Astra's pov.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)2. Fiona White (Our Fairy Queen!)3. Astra (Our AI Manipulator!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Staring directly into the smug thief’s eyes, Rachel waited for his response while admiring her outfit’s handiwork—he barely fidgeted beneath the Living Denier’s woven coils.Not bad, Captain Hops,she internally praised, her lips curving into the faintest smirk. Creative use of your unique talen...
Update On Pokesync
Talking with Val, I will probably finish this battle against Blaine with Lori with this last chapter. I love the world I've created with Pokesync, expanding on such a rich lore to further develop it into new realms. I WILL return to Pokesync once I can be sure I'm stable. Thank you for all of your support. o7
Normal Schedule Sorta
Thank you for the break. I've been sorting things out. I need to take up more hours which means Pokesync is going to have to go on the backburner. It's not something I want to do. I love Rhea and the girls' journey. I love the Pokemon universe. I have to consider my future, as well, though. RR's policy decision that you can't advertise or promote any paywall content on fanfics also plays a role.That being said, I do want to push forward with Winter's Rebirth and RISE. I feel like both series will help me expand my writin...
People Are Angry :( People Are Worried.
So, to put it bluntly, people are worried about me. Life has been rough recently. I work around 80 to 90 hours a week (including writing). I'm not making ends meet like I was a year ago and cutting expenses isn't working so well. I've been writing consistently, around 4 chapters every week, for almost four years now, I think., maybe five (my mind is toast but proofreaders try to keep me straight).In short, I'm trying to figure out my life.I tell you all I'm going to take a break last week, yet then I get hit with messages ca...
TO Rewrite: B3 — 18. I’m Not Amused
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------The dust hung thick in the air, diffusing the last shards of the dying sunlight, casting an otherworldly haze over them. Rachel straightened in the midst of it all, her figure cutting a stark silhouette against the sun-drenched fog.Her hammer rested against her shoulder, the eruption of kinetic force it had released still leaving a sharp crack in the minds of those she’d snatched. With a quick, sharp inhale, she moved like a shadow, slipping th...
UE Rewrite: B3 — 20.5. Glory Renewed
End of Butter's PoV in Vol. 3. What did you think about her arc? The next part would be in TO's Montana Crystal.PoV:1. Butter (Our High Queen of the Evening Star!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Head held high, Butter strode forward, her fan stretched wide in her hand, a shockwave of golden light pulsing from its edge, rolling outward like the sun breaking the horizon after a dark, endless night. The radiant wave spread across the field, pushing back against the crimson mist that coiled above, the higher en...
UE Chapter Tomorrow; Butter's Last Chapter Before...
I wrote it and am having the proofreaders go through it. It should be the last Butter Chapter before she appears in TO. Butter is a powerhouse! She's gone through quite the arc while Elinor has been busy with the Kaspir Kingdom, uniting the five valley clans, and the war against the Xaltan! Sorry for the delay. o7
Raw Analytics Side Stories
I need your thoughts.This is what I'm working with. Let me preface this by saying Patreon does analytics through views. This doesn't necessarily mean a read but constitutes as a person clicked it and at least viewed a part of it. So, in order to compensate for that, I'll do the first two chapters.Also, note that some of these series have been out and available to read for years. I will add the date it was released.I will rank them based on which has the most interest based on clicks from the first chapter and second to show who went...
I Need A Few Days Off
I'll release Undying Empire's chapter sometime this weekend, but I can't keep up. I'm trying to juggle a lot right now while pumping out more content to meet everyone's appetite but I need to get my life in order. Things have just become pretty stressful financially and I'm trying to figure things out.I'll post some of the analytics of what people seem to be enjoying regarding the side series to get your guys' opinions on it, as well. I want to make you guys a part of the decisions. I'm falling behind on erro...
ATM Rewrite: B3 — 9. Eyia Will Be Okay
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Fox Girl Is Making Friends!)--------------------ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Sora let out a soft sigh, feeling the light, warm pulse of the magical fireball drifting ahead of her, illuminating her path through Avalon’s maze-like campus to Eyia. Despite Wendy’s confusing hot and cold attitude, Kari’s unpredictable motivations, Eyia’s troubled emotions, or the fear of being in a giant, new place ,she felt happy right now.She kept her stride brisk, her mind dr...
PokéSync: B4 — 52. Terri’s Debut!
PoV:1. Mallory (Our Violet-Haired Girl!)2. Her Pokemon (Let's Battle!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been mislabeled, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------4:40 p.m. November 3rd, Tuesday, 106 PH (Post Hoopa Event). Day 147.Events: Rhea and the girls are on a Badge Hunt, trying to get all the Kanto Encrusted Badges ...
UE Camellia Image
Something a friend whipped up. What do you think about our clumsy eldest spider princess?Art Index
Pokesync, ATM, and UE Moved Back 1 Day; Mom
My mom needs me to be there for her for tonight (When I'd typically write Pokesync). I'll make sure to write them and am still focused on writing that daily 1k to 2k in the sporadic series in some chapter (I've released chapters for Rosen Flame, RISE, and Winter Rebirth if you haven't seen the chapters). Maybe I'll try Feywild tomorrow after writing Pokesync. o7
TO Rewrite: B3 — 17. To Persia
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Rachel stilled her thumping heart against the biting chill at the mountain’s foot, watching heavy snowflakes fall around her against the pine backdrop, the ice sticking to her clothes and fluttering against her ears. Beside her Grace came to a stop atop Jim, the horse snorting against the cold.The cowgirl swung down from her horse, tipping her hat back and offering the tall man atop her horse a wide grin.“Now, I reckon that wasn’t too rough...
Winter’s Rebirth: B1 - 8. The Betrothal
Winter’s Rebirth IndexPrevious ChapterIn-Line Edit (If You See Errors)--------------------Anna sat at her desk in her private study, the flickering candlelight casting soft shadows across the deep green of her dress. Her gaze dropped to the parchment before her, a letter sealed with Countess Vivienne’s sigil—a hawthorn branch twisted around an olive sprig.Her lips fell as the courier stood in front of her, several members of the guard detail she’d chosen for this week lining the room. “Are you sure this is addressed to me and not my h...
Rosen Flame B1 — 8. An Understanding
PoV:1. Malik (Our MC and Humanity's Hero!)Rosen Flame IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Relaxing more as the hours went on, Malik went over the basics of human courting etiquette in this region of the world. He guessed a lot of it from what little he’d observed while going through Tenebrin.He was far from the only reincarnator in the world, and Tenebrin had a more stationary Lawful-Good reincarnate group, but they were in their early thirties in Level the last time he’d seen them. He wasn’t particularly close to the...
Rosen Flame B1 — 7. Denial
PoV:1. Malik (Our MC and Humanity's Hero!)Rosen Flame IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Malik took a moment to collect himself, Tabia helping him sit back down. He assured her that he was fine and that the message was just not something he expected.The Panthera Cleric showed a compassionate smile and knelt beside him to meditate. It was comforting having someone nearby who wanted nothing more than to support him. He enjoyed the serenity Clerics brought; sadly, it was perhaps the rarest of the potential healing classes, fo...
RISE: B1 — 5. Shared Connection
RISERewrite IndexPrevious Chapter--------------------Trailing behind Caden and Mera, Ayla kept her focus on the man as the rumbles of Nulina’s talons reverberated through the stone. The teen was poking him for information regarding the current fashion in the highlands, which, apparently, was all about wooden accessories since the substance was so rare to the Tempalis region.As they entered the expansive chamber, she glanced at Nulina, watching her easily overtake them with her wide strides; she’d carved out this space herself, a feat of str...
Poll: Something New W/ Sporadic Series (Gotta Push!)
I often jump the gun on these things and release them while I'm thinking about it, which then I need to refine. How my brain works >.> I should have released this as a poll.I'm talking about RISE, Winter's Rebirth, POCAP, etc. I think I want to at least dedicate 1k words or 2k words or a scene, basically, in each a day, no matter what the main series I'll be writing that day. Not stress about having it 5k to 7k words but just complete and release a scene. I'll start this out for the $10patrons and start expanding outward lit...
UE Rewrite: B4 — 10. The Crimson Flower
PoV:1. Red/War (Our Guy's Last Chapter T_T)2. Camellia (But Our Crimson Flower Is Here!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Shit…The cavern ground beneath Red buckled, rampaging arachnids fracturing areas all across the cave, destabilizing the terrain with every reckless lunge. Red barely shifted his weight before the floor gave way entirely, sending him and the writhing mass of creatures down a steep incline.Dust billowed, obscuring his vision, but every instinct in him zeroed in on survival and keeping their at...
