Equilinox Trailer - Another Version

Maybe add a fade in / fade out?

hawkfalcon

Really well done! I wasn't a fan of the first trailer (though my girlfriend liked it), but this one was perfect. Nice job.

ThinMatrix

Thanks a lot for the feedback! If I have some time I'll try and improve that scene :)

ThinMatrix

Thanks :)

ThinMatrix

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try making the text stay on the screen a bit longer :)

ThinMatrix

Thank you :)

ThinMatrix

Thanks :)

Thrainn

I think I agree with that one...

Dr Jack

Definitely an improvement. The greater focus on the charming animal behaviours makes it more engaging, and I too love the Pink Pig! I still think it would be better with some kind of voice over, but it's a lot closer to where it needs to be already. Thumbs up!

arch1t3cht30

Definitely looks a lot better than before! The only thing that's still throwing me off a bit is the timelapse scene, the fast movement of the water is a bit too hectic. If you still have the time too work on this you could try temporarily smoothing out the water in the game and recording the timelapse again, and see if that works better. Other than that, if it's not too complicated to edit, maybe you could try to have the timelapse also contain significant changes in the skybox, like starting with a sunrise, having the sun set on screen, and showing at least part of the night. One final idea I had for the timelapse was to have it repeatedly speed up and slow down to normal speed again. It might look cool, but then again it would be a lot of effort and might need the shot to be on screen longer than it is right now to be effective.

Great trailer, I can't wait to see it released!

I think the trailer reflects very well the look and feel of the game and goes a long way towards capturing the interest of a prospective player. If I were my first contact with the game however, I think I would be left wondering what the objective of the game is - how do I 'win'. Knowing the game, I realise that it's not exactly that sort of game, but I wonder if the trailer shouldn't include an indication of the goals. Otherwise, great game and beautiful trailer.

Great job on the trailer. My only critique is the text descriptions seem a little rushed. If it is possible to extend their time on screen by a second or two, it would help with readability and reinforce each related scene. It may not be needed where it would require extending the duration of a scene too much, such as the unlocking species scene.

"Standing Ovation"

Amean Abdelfattah

I honestly don't see any more improvements that I can think of other than what was already mentioned since the first version. As a gamer and a consumer, you've still managed to hold my attention undivided, and I find myself returning to this video to see it again. Game Consumers tend to dissect the trailer to see what they can infer about the game and make their final decisions on making a purchase. Overall, this trailer is fantastic, and I hope this game succeeds with great recognition.

The pink pig make me laught ! It's definitly better than the first version.

Xaeyr

It’s ironic how the changes weren’t huge, but made a huge difference 🙂 This felt much better 🙂