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Actual Grace with short hair in canon might happen.
Almost certainly with less or no makeup, but still.
Plans of Dan
I started this storyline as "it would be funny if Ashley wrote some Original Characters lacking in originality" without any solid plan on where it would ultimately go.
Now I'm fast thinking I should establish enough about this setting and its OCs so some future EGSNP storylines can be based on stuff Ashley's written.
Probably toned down adaptations in some ways, but still!
Comments
Some Ed
"Huh, how did I not notice how busty Grace is? I was *sure* I exaggerated her starting attributes. I guess I need to go back and revise them..."
Platus
Grace could literally help by standing in front of her and changing her body as Ashley tells her to - like a human character-creation screen
Mink Rose
Ooooo I like the short hairstyle!!
M.
"Narratively convenient enviable starting attributes" are indeed a good place to start. :) Hoping things go up from there.
Narzain
Poor Ashley will flip the first time she notices Grace using "conveniently enviable starting attributes" to test change blindness. The parallels between truth and fanfiction have begun!
Connie Edogawa
inb4 Ashley describes this to Grace and she takes the form for funsies. also, short haired not-Grace is cute in panel 3 and then panel 4 hits even more positive buttons for me.
Matt R
Hmm...she would probably look better with medium length hair than short if she's meant to be different from Grace
AstroChaos
... yeah, can't say I'm a fan of short haired Grace. The makeup and expression don't help, but even without it she looks... not wrong per say, but not at all right
Adama
They can crossover with the AF04 crew. ;-)
Stephen Gilberg
I think I prefer the OG.
