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Chapter 225: Pebbles

🕑 Added 2023-06-05 11:55:00 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

"A few days later, a red hawk appears on the horizon, carrying a reply from the City Lord" Do these hawks travel faster than sound ? Because even in previous realms it was regularly conveyed that cultivators can move faster than sound.

Ted Nakata

I’m amused by the comment about teenagers, I wonder if Lu Mei will hear about it?

Gardor

Hey I just started rereading the story, and I'm starting to feel like the plot came to a standstill once he joined the eternal flame cult. I know it didn't, many big and important things have happened since chapter 84, its just I've been reminded of a lot of dangling plot threads and this "join the EFC to gain power" has taken on a life of it's own.

burning_the_paper

It's about Liu Jin - he doesn't want to make people afraid of him, it just seems to happen naturally.

Gardor

"Besides, he’s tired of people finding him ominous." --> this might just be a problem of the perspective the story is written from, but it's unclear who is unhappy from this little line, either Liu Jin or Ten. "That’s not natural.” Liu Jin hums and nods. “It is, isn’t it?" --> should prob be "this is unnatural "

Catherine

I love Soaring Feather 😂

Catherine

Thank you for the chapter! :) There’s a word missing in this sentence: “his curling at the edges”

Valerian

Your bandits are our freedom fighters. Next chapter in which Liu Jin meets with Xiania Robin Hood.

MockingBird

No bodies, no one giving them up, these so called bandits seem more and more like a resistance force that's for the people.

Lightseid

Too short.

AB

Wait, I thought Bai went back to general Dan's territory. When did she get back to Liu Jin?

Moonkiller24

Oh thats it? Its fine, ill pay for more. "bar, there are no more payment levels" WHAT DO U MEAN THERE IS NO MORE? WHAT DO I NEED TO DO, SELL A KIDNEY? THATS FINE ILL SELL BOTH!

Jack

No bodies you say? Very mysterious.


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