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Chapter 46: Sparring II

🕑 Added 2019-12-16 13:01:00 +0000 UTC

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David Wei

Lol at Lui Jin being baffled about getting promoted.

Robert Mullins

Solid writing as usual. Went as expected, more or less, though that's not really negative. I am annoyed about the 'i wasn't paying attention, so only heard the last bit' writing trope but that may be more of a personal pet peeve than a writing flaw. Same with the trick that won't be explained until later, presumably a needle to a meridian/pressure point, but that only bothers me in web serials like these where I might have to wait a few weeks to see what happened. if I was able to read it as a book I'd be fine with it.


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