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ABH - CH 22 - Wishing For Your Demise

🕑 Added 2024-08-27 22:41:37 +0000 UTC

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Allora Lee

I changed it!!

Virnor

Good to know I wasn't going crazy XD Honestly if I may, I'd suggest tweaking that last interaction a bit to make it cleaner that's their first actual meeting. As it stands the dramatic effect gets spoiled for anyone that gets confused the same way I was, making the ending loose some of its... Gravitas.

Allora Lee

She hasn’t met her yet, but Scylla had a Rough Time when she arrived and Minare warned Freddie about those who Yearn For Her Demise

Virnor

“Hello, Godtouched,” the blue woman said, filling the clearing with power so overwhelming the trees shook, “I believe we have a score to settle.” Did I miss/forgot something? I don't remember Freddie meeting Scylla before?


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