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wander Chapter 1
🕑 Added 2017-02-18 01:28:06 +0000 UTC So here's what I've got so far of the new Patreon-run story, and I want your opinion - I'm not sure if I should leave it as is, or add on some more after this before calling this chapter done.Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yYbWzW7P1tb1LLQ6YtMCqUZ4RpBDs8ps6_EzOvfs9A8/edit?usp=sharing
I generally try to stay away from those dumbass "Rules To Be A Good Writer" things, but one that I thing would be important for longer stories like this is "make sure your audience knows what's happening in the first chapter". So, as you can probably tell, Matt here is straight (or so he thinks), and this cheetah is gonna come along and mess that all up.
So is this good as is? Or do you guys think I should do something else before putting this up?
