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The Merger - Spirals - Part 3 Bonus Chapter
(This story is a prequel to The Merger - part 3).Nadia was busy preparing for her evening show…that is to say, she was bossing other people around while she sat down and enjoyed a drink. It was a hard life, but someone had to do it.While she was enjoying her drink and some reading material, she happened to notice a young woman walk into the theatre. The woman immediately smiled and waved at Nadia as she moved towards her table with a nervous yet energetic smile. Nadia just rolled her eyes. She didn’t have time for fan service.She was about ...
The Merger - Spirals - Part 3
Description: Alan’s assistant, Kelli, hasn’t returned from her meeting with the hypnotist Nadia yet...Key: MD, FD, MC, MF, MFF,Alan casually walked into Costello’s, a fancy dinner theatre on New Chicago’s north side. Unfortunately he was there for business rather than pleasure, although he rarely had an issue mixing the two. Earlier in the day his assistant had been sent on a little…recruiting mission, and she had not yet returned. Her job had been to find and recruit the part time stage hypnotist, and full time petty thief, Nadia, to...
Question...
So far, what has been your favorite hypnosis scene? (preferable listed with the story name and chapter). You can reply here or send me a private message. (Thinking of getting a commissioned picture done so want to know what you might like to see.)
The Merger - Spirals - Part 2 Bonus Scene, Tammy
(This takes place just after Kelli ‘took care of’ Celene, and just before she went in to ‘take care of’ Hank)Kelli walked into the main area of the club. It was large and spacious, with a floor plan that was mostly below street level, so if you entered on the ground floor you were actually on the top most level of the club. She scanned the club, but since it was the middle of the afternoon there was no one there. Well, almost no one.Visibly bouncing along to the beat in the sound booth was Tammy, happily oblivious to everything that was...
The Merger - Spirals - Part 2
Description: A young woman shows up to seal a deal to purchase the Spirals Nightclub. By any means necessary.Key: FD, F/F, M/F, MCA faint, tiny tapping sound could be heard filling the Spirals Nightclub…Celene moved to the main entrance of the club, curious as to where the sound was coming from. When she arrived, she found a petite young woman who looked like she was ready to melt in the sunlight gently knocking on the door. She opened the door and asked as politely as she could, “May I help you?”The young woman smile, even though she was...
Learning the Ropes - N.C.U. - Editing Banter
Story: Allow yourself to just drift away with the smoke, and follow the flame now, Laura…”SG: what does it say for me that i basically started picturing a flame and zoned out as soon as i started reading this paragraph? :oPMe: The world may never know =cP----------Story: Her eyes were reflecting the glow of the candle. Two tiny little flames, one in each eye, showing exactly what was on her mind…what was hypnotizing her. The thought gave Rayne a shiver.SG: Seconding the shiver. That was a nice little description---------Story: “Going de...
The Merger - Spirals - Outline
WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD!Also please note that the actual story may... and in this case I can guarantee does differ from this outline.Midnight’s shop Midnight is in the middle of draining two young people, a man and a woman. Door opens it’s Veo Discuss how business is going for midnight Shows off one of her devices to hypnotize and drain people. Discusses xander and how he’s doing. Veo smiles and says that he found a home. Midnight asks where. Wakes up on her counter. Entire store is moved to new chicago. Veo looks around confused. Finds n...
The Merger - Spirals - Part 1 - Bonus Scene
Veo blushed as Midnight carefully lifted the completely drained patron over her shoulder. “So where did Xander ever end up?” the succubus asked her friend as she carried the sleeping patron into the back with the rest of her…guests.“New Chicago.” Veo replied with a smile. “He even found a version of the Spirals Nightclub there, so he seems happy at the moment.”“Still haven’t hooked up yet, have you.” Midnight said in a matter of fact way, knowing the answer before she said it. She laid the unconscious woman on one of the cha...
The Merger - Spirals - Part 1
Description: The angel Veo comes to visit her friend, the succubus Midnight, with an offer that she cannot refuse.Key: MC, FD, M/F, F/F“That’s it…you can do it.” Midnight cooed into the ear of a clearly hypnotized young man. He was sitting on a chair in the back office of Midnight’s shop, his girlfriend panting by his side while Midnight straddled him and bounced up and down, slowly and rhythmically on his lap. Her left hand was stretched down between the legs of the panting young woman.Both the man and the woman seemed blissfully una...
Dream Reaction - Editor getting Chloroformed - Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U.
This was an email that the editor, S.G. sent me about a dream she had… or was it something more than a dream…(Editors Note: "no I remember this, I'm pretty sure it was just a dream :oP")(Authors Note: "This was in fact... NOT a dream. She was hypnotized by me to live this out as a fantasy and wake up remembering it as a dream.")“Does it mean I'm editing too much if i start having dreams about what I'm editing? I mean like actual scenes from the stories, not being chased around by punctuation marks or stuff like...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. Editing Banter.
Story: She sighed in relief and held the box close to her, as if she were hugging it, while glaring over at the book on Rayne’s bed. Almost as if she was expecting the book to move…or attack her.SG: could have been an interesting twist :oP----------Story: The two ladies were talking, catching up on life, but at such a high speed that I couldn’t possibly repeat it to you here, because roughly one second of conversation would fill five pages...and I’m not even sure that any of it was coherent to begin with the first time around. Women… ...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 3 Extended Ending
Rayne smiled and seductively slid a finger under Trisha’s chin. “Why don’t we help you out with that then…” she used the finger to pull her head slightly down to Rayne’s level and kissed her. The kiss was tender and soft, as she didn’t want to wake Trisha, and as Rayne pulled back she looked into the glazed eyes of the older girl and whispered. “Sleep.”A soft sigh escaped Trisha’s lips as her eyes rolled up into her head. Rayne just giggled. “Good girl” she said, as she gently led Trisha over to the bed. She moved her to...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 3
Description: Rayne sets out to hypnotize Carly, per Trisha’s instructions.Key: MC, FD, FF,“Hypnotize Carly.”Rayne sat and stared at the words written on the note in front of her. She felt a swell of nervousness flush through her body as she eyed the dark haired sophomore out of the corner of her eye. She still wasn’t super comfortable with hypnotizing people she had just met…and to make matters worse, here was Trisha, the head of the sorority she was trying to join, knowingly watching the whole thing. Judging her on her abilities. “...
Pledging the Sorority - Outline
[WARNING!] Spoilers may be ahead, the final story may vary from this outline.Dorm room Rayne sitting in the dorm reading vampire romance novels Klair walks in immediately rolls eyes and scoffs. Rayne stands up and tries to mimic a vampire seducing klair Klaire immediately rebuffs the advance. Rayne switches to a more mysterious hand waving tactic Klaire raises an eyebrow and tells rayne she’s a moron Rayne looks depressed then her alarm goes off. So she leaves Klaire shivers a bit and immediately checks her romance novel collection All good.T...
Visit of the Apprentice, Editing Banter
Story: Jennifer watched closely but she couldn’t see if it was heads or tails, it was spinning too fast. It was… It was… tails!SG: And as usual...that dropped me, too.(SG while editing this: "Wait, didn't this just happen the other night?")------------Story: Her head bounced back as the weight of her body started to pull her forward, while her head lolled back as her eyes rolled up into her head. A second later she landed with a thud against the chest of the hypnotist. Exactly where she wanted to be, but completely unaware of ...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 2, Alternate Endings (Plural)
BonusTrisha smiled with glee as she bounced up from her chair and ran to her dresser. The other girls gave each other a look before turning back to see Trisha pull out a small spray bottle with a fan on it.Trisha merely responded with a smile as the girls looked at one another in confusion. “Carly, you’ve seen this before? The spray bottle I use when it’s hot outside?” She sprayed a puff of water vapor into the air to demonstrate how it worked.”Carly nodded. “I have…you used it last year when we went to the zoo on the hottest day ...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 2
Description: As the girls discuss Rayne’s issues with Klaire, Trisha demonstrates a unique induction on an unsuspecting Laura.Key: MC, FD, FF, Sleep, ChloroAs the young ladies settled down to discuss Rayne’s education in hypnotism and her accomplishments as a hypnotist, Trisha seemed more and more impressed. “Well…” Trisha started with a smile, “It’s pretty clear to me that you’ve managed to master just about every challenge that Laura has thrown your way so far. But what is it that you feel is your greatest challenge…the one ...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 1 Alternate Endings
Trisha laughed. “Isn’t she cute!” she said, motioning for the girls to take a seat. “So Laura…how has our first pledge been doing? Has she been able to pick up the basics of being a hypnotist as well as being hypnotized?”Rayne pushed past Laura before she could answer and looked at Trisha with a smile. “Why don’t I show you…” she said as she moved in front of Carly and dangled a crystal pendant in front of the girl’s eyes.“What are you…I’m not really into being hypno - ” Carly protested before being cut off by Rayn...
Pledging the Sorority - N.C.U. - Part 1
Description: Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?Key: MC, FD,“It was a dark, and stormy night…” Rayne read to herself. “Who writes this crap?” She was curled up on a chair in her dorm room, reading one of the vampire novels she had spied under Klaire’s bed. She had managed to find a copy of it at the library and was using it to try and find a connection, an ‘in’, if you will, into Klaire’s mind. But so far she had gotten hung up on the cheesiness of the ...
Trigger words?
How do you guys feel about hypnotic triggers being used in stories?
Hypnosis in stories
What is it that makes hypnosis in a story worth while for you?
This Job Bites - Part 3 Bonus Scene
Kelli left Alan’s office a few hours after their encounter with the executive had ended. As she walked out, she noticed the secretary was still sitting at her desk. She wasn’t working on anything, and her computer had gone to sleep a long time ago. She was simply sitting there…waiting. For Kelli.Kelli looked her over with a smile. She was about 25, with long black hair and breasts that were unusually large for her body size. She wore a black pencil skirt and a white blouse. “I’m sorry…” Kelli said to her with a smile. “I complet...
This Job Bites - Part 3
Description: Newly made vampire Kelli is merely a pawn in a struggle for power. But she’s a cute pawn.Key: MC, MD, FD, M/F,It was a normal Tuesday morning on the top floor of Card Enterprise’s headquarters. The usual ‘core’ executives were all in their sealed central offices and the rest of the outer rim executives and staff were busy moving about their mornings. That is, until the elevator door opened and Kelli stepped out. She was wearing a very slinky dark green dress that looked more suitable for a nightclub than a place of business...
Keira Knightley Petrified (Non-Captioned Version)
There is a captioned version of this picture for Tiers 2 and 3
Keira Knightley Hypnotized (non-captioned)
There is a captioned version of this picture for Tiers 2 and 3
Discovering her Interest - Editing Banter
Story: You know those big buildings full of books? Where you can do research? The old fashioned way? No? Really? They have public internet, just keeping reading you’ll figure it out.SG (Editor, also Librarian): "Somewhere, the editor of the story banged her head against a wall in exasperation..." :oP(Sg’s response while reviewing this “I still like that response… :oP “)----------Story: “Into…. Sleep” this last time she snapped her fingers directly in front of Laura’s face.SG: Is it sad that that kind of had me dazed fo...
A Walk In The Woods - Editing Banter
Story: Xander shot the man a sideways look “Your granddaughter is named Feisty Squirrel?”“What? No! My granddaughter is named Emily. I was pointing out the feisty squirrel, in the tree!”SG: ROFLMAO. Ok, I laughed way too hard at that, nicely done :oP----------Story: “Hey!” Xander shouted which caused the tail’s tip to shoot straight up and ‘look’ at his face. “You’re supposed to be hiding!” He shouted again. The tail hung it’s head in shameSG: heheh interesting image, and kinda cute in an odd way :oP---------Story: Her...
Raise Your Hand - Editing Banter
Story (End of Part 1)SG (Editor): Thoughts, in order: Yes I picked up on what you were doing. Yes my arm raised - albeit not that much? it wasn't straight up but it was about halfway there, but I think that's more just me. For some reason it's hard to imagine my arm being that light. Anyway, I like the idea and I'm curious to see where you go from there. I may have to try editing again since I kind of stopped halfway through...I was distracted, give me a break. :oP------------Story: Her face completely relaxed and turning deep, ...
The Dog Trainer - Editing Banter
Story: “Hell yes! Hypnotize me!”SG (Editor): Things I could never see myself saying in a situation like this(SG’s response to reading this while reviewing these files: “Only in my head :oP “)-------------------Story: “Heather….” he began “I want you to just focus on my words now, I want you to simply let them, slide into you, gently, and easily. Sliding ever so deeply into you, All the way inside. Just let yourself begin to feel exactly how good it is to just relax. As you feel these words sliding into you, easily and deeply. ...
Thief In The Mind - Editing Banter
Story: Isn’t it so nice to just let your body go, and let it… surrender… to the music. To feel the rhythm of the music moving through your body. Every drum beat, every cord, every part of the melody. Sliding into your body. It feels so good to dance. Feel the pulse of the other person, though your own skin. To feel their body moving with yours. It’s almost like you can simply… focus on your body. On the movements of your body, as you sway, and slide. As your body glides along the floor. All the many movements, the muscles moving all i...
